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00:03:671ここのNCを00:03:043に移動させたほうが一貫性があるかと思います。

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同じく00:01:472より00:01:630のほうがよさげに感じます。

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ok

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00:12:616 (2,1) - might be good to introduce a hyper here as the more intense section starts

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Changed to the same form as 02:55:338

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00:44:193 (3,4) - ここhyperdashが抜けてる気がする

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arigatougozaimasu

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00:58:794 (6,1) - this really deserve a hyperdash to emphasize both the high pitch vocals and the cymbal

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I made both of them hyperdash

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01:13:715 (4,5) - would be great if this was a hyperdash, C-shape feels kinda underwhelming for the drums and high pitch vocals

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I divided it into 4,2,2,2 each from 01:13:087

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01:43:408 (4,5,6,7) - 01:43:487の1/4音がほとんど聞こえないわりに、hyperdashがあるのでかなりプレイ時に違和感があります。hyperdashは少なくとも違うものにしたほうがいいと思います。
個人的には01:43:487の1/4をmapしないで01:43:565 (6,7,8,9) - にhyperdashを入れたほうが曲のclimaxとしては適してるかなと思いました。

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ok

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01:46:307 (2) - the vocals on the slidertail sounds too early, might need to put the slidertail on 01:46:582 - as 1/8

01:46:699 (1) - is also too early, it should be 01:46:739 - as 1/8

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okeyy
I didn't notice that :o
thanks!

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id further simplify this to make the rhythm more "regular". the separate sliders also felt jarring due to the sliderticks, i think less density would contrast this better. see image below for rhythm suggestion

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Reopened by Jemzuu

Reduced density

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03:36:019 also reduced

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01:47:328 (3,4) - dash is quite expected here given how strong (4) is, consider adjusting the slider for more spacing

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01:47:485 (4) - Extended sliders spacing

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01:58:008 - adding note here would be more satisfying towards the break

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added 1 note

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01:58:008 (2) - have hyper or antiflow?

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Reopened by Jemzuu

changes to hyper

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02:10:103 (5) - i get that ur following guitar here but ignoring drum feels weird and isnt consistent with other 1/1 slider usage since they follow the vocal so id suggest mapping this as 1/2 rhythm instead

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I put 1/2 instead of 1/1

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02:22:825 (6,1) - hyper? could make (6) face right instead

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I made 02:22:982 a hyper dash

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03:04:605 (1) - this vocal is not that strong and music is lower in pitch, pls reduce sv here

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nerfed slider

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03:10:894 (1) - ☆5.35にしてはちょっと正確に取るの難しすぎる気がするので、ここのスライダー直線にしませんか

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ok

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03:47:485 (5,1) - what do u think of moving this more right for hyper? might fit the intensity better

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03:47:485 move to right side. 03:47:642 move to middle to be hyper in the former note.

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03:57:694 (2) - sudden vertical ruins the flow, curved slider better

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03:58:637 (1) - perhaps make this horizontal for more impact, adjust later patterns after

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Changed to a slightly rounded slider in 03:57:694 and put a little horizontal slider in 03:58:637

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04:03:663 (1) - have gradual decrease of volume for this spinner

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ok

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04:03:663 (1) - I think ending the spinner on 04:10:731 - will sounds more natural, since its the beginning of the prominent sound

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true!

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