00:18:177 - 00:21:177 - , for the breathing vocals personally I would say remove them as they are the singer "taking a break" so the map should as well
02:32:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) this is the only 7-plet in this map, and its on quite a soft sound compared to the kiais around it which are limited to 5-plets. not really an issue but i suggest deleting the first two notes of the pattern