<a class="link link--white link--no-underline" href="https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/2131311">an egirl's daily thoughts

Timing at the beginning, some things I noticed:

00:01:956 (1956|1,2205|0) - i think these 2 are a little late
00:05:402 (5402|2) - this could be on 00:05:390 - instead (1/8)

12 months ago

for the first two i'd rather keep them on the focal point of the melody which is on the grid
for 00:05:402 - instead yeah better to move it on 1/8, good catch

12 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

some more intro snaps

*00:01:976 (1976|1) - should be on 00:01:951 - (1/12)

*00:02:225 (2225|0) - should be on 00:02:125 - (1/6)

*00:05:410 (5410|2) - should be on 00:05:397 - (1/12)

*00:05:597 (5597|1) - should be on 00:05:572 - (1/6)

7 months ago

Reopened by -MysticEyes

all fixed

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

00:12:845

00:12:845 (12845|1) - some justification for this note? the lyrics are "hurt me so.." so i think deleting this note/extending the previous (so) could add more emphasis to the "bad" after this (musical phrasing)

12 months ago

here i wanted to represent the vocal "so-(?)m..." but yeah better to crop it at 00:12:920 -

12 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

00:13:314

super subjective but I think this would work better as a rice note, it's much quieter/shorter than 00:13:314 (13314|0) -

7 months ago

the offset is missing there, but i think you was talking about 00:12:865 (12865|1) - :
this can be the same justification i gave on #4256345/11333204 since i consider it part of the vocal, enchanted the muteness of it by avoiding stacking it with other lns.

but since this is the second mod on the same concernn i'd rather modify it, im fine with it tho

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

00:18:839

00:18:839 (18839|2,18839|0) - i disagree with having this on the same key (1,3) here given that the 2nd snare of the amen break is a little lower in pitch than the first

12 months ago

yeah but 00:18:689 (18689|0,18689|2,18839|0,18839|2) - are really similar, you wont notice the differenct mid-gameplay, i'd rather keep them stacked in even to keep a good emphasizing on 00:18:989 (18989|3,18989|1) -

12 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

00:27:980

00:27:980 (27980|2,27980|3,28054|1,28129|3,28204|2,28279|0,28279|1,28354|3,28429|0,28504|3) - more emphasis on the snares on this section maybe with minijacks

12 months ago

i got you point, but minijacks are too much for this section for me, added a note at 00:28:054 - / 00:28:429 - in order to create doublets which follows snares (but that doesnt fill up too much for the fade out)

12 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

00:29:478

00:29:478 (29478|1,29478|0) - this could be a grace note given that the snare plays a low and then high pitch, could add more emphasis given that the vocal chop for the predrop is not there

12 months ago

mhh i'll decline this, mainly for 2 reasons:

00:28:579 (28579|1,28579|2) - / 00:28:879 (28879|0,28879|1) - 00:29:178 (29178|2) - should be changed
i'd rather keep a linear execution of the patterns except for the dump sections

12 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

understandable

12 months ago

00:57:950

00:57:950 (57950|1,57950|0) - i dont rlly like the double here given that there's no kick to back it up

12 months ago

sure, at first i thought to add that doublet in order to pitch better the change but i found out that keeping 00:57:950 (57950|0) - on the 1st column lonely works, soo yeah removed 00:57:950 (57950|1) -

sidenote: moved 00:58:249 (58249|0) - on 3rd column

12 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

00:57:970

00:57:970 - yay so insane gave me a justification to point this out

this can be spicier!!!! I like the trilly pattern in insane. Since this diff's pattern is easier to play maybe you could use a trillier approach like insane does? ofc the burst at the end means it can't be hte same pattern but yea I think this part could be a bit harder. it could always be something like

for example

7 months ago

damn i love 2 - 1 - 2 - 3 -4 - 3 pattern, super fun idea

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

00:59:318

00:59:318 (59318|1,59393|0,59468|1,59543|1) - hmm I feel like these trills with 1/4 LNs into jacks on the same hand could be avoided to make things slightly more comfortable. maybe the trills could move onto the other hand instead like

imo these 00:59:918 (59918|3,59993|3,60067|2,60142|3) - should be ok since they don't have the coordination aspect of the 1/4 LN

well, ideaaaaally I'd prefer them to be a little more separated between hands since this sort of OH tech patterning isn't really used elsewhere (especially since the rest of the map is a lot easier than this part) but I don't think it's mandatory or anything it just kinda makes this section feel a bit spiky compared to the rest of the map

7 months ago

1st point fixed at (re-arrange):
00:59:243 - / 01:01:641 - / 01:04:038 - / 01:06:436 -

instead kept the same the transitional pattern like 01:00:442 (60442|0,60517|1,60592|3,60592|0,60667|2,60742|2) - and company, these i dont think are a big deal to be played compared with the first one mentioned.

2nd point (spike):
i felt too a little the spike tho, but i think it fits and it's not a big deal nerfing it like you said.

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

01:08:609

break snaps (btw with these and the intro snaps, I am really awful at playing slowjams so if these make the slowjams harder then simplifying them to what you have is 100% fine)

01:08:609 (68609|1) - should be on 01:08:584 - (1/12)
01:08:834 (68834|0) - should be on 01:08:784 - (1/12)
01:13:404 (73404|1) - should be on 01:13:354 - (1/6)

7 months ago

40ms snaps doesnt really change the slowjam difficulty imo, moved all lines to their new placement

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

just to make sure, did you want to change these in beginner, easy, and normal too? only applies to the notes at 01:13:629 - btw

ig 01:08:834 - is also different from the higher diffs but idk if that's intentional or not

7 months ago

Reopened by -MysticEyes

oops yeah, modified all notes at 01:13:629 - on beginner and easy, normal seems to be already moved on it in the past

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

a I still want to check on 01:08:834 - just in case it isn't intentional, I'm not sure the lower diffs should use a different snap than the higher diffs

7 months ago

Reopened by -MysticEyes

my brain is dying lmfao i forgot to check back open mods,
01:08:834 - feels too late i'd go with 01:08:809 - which is +1/12 from before

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by Relae

01:11:848