Comet (2019 Reworks)

00:17:944 - should be double and 00:18:117 - should be single for exsound this part as your logic

00:18:117 - can be double althougn weak , compare with 00:18:289 - weaker

00:21:306 - i think you can use similar treatment like this 02:00:617 -

00:22:341 (22341|6,22341|0,22341|5,22341|1,22341|4) - ผมคิดว่ามันควรจะเป็นโน้ตปกติเหมือนอันอื่นนะ เสียงมันไม่ได้ยีดหรือต่างกันเท่าไหร่

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00:25:444 - can add chord size for these single LN cuz real sounds are all chord

00:33:720 - felt like theres no need for 1/4 short ln, up to you to use rc or ln

00:36:479 - can add note at 5 too, 00:37:858 - 6 etc

00:39:237 - can add one rice on these white lines cuz pianoly chord occured like 00:37:858 (37858|6,37858|5) -

00:55:789 - felt abit repetitve, so I suggest use 1/4 stream, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19083226/db51, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19083227/5b1f for reference

01:07:944 - 01:10:703 - Seems continously so I think we can add rice on blue lines and ofc 01:09:323 - can be nothing cuz kick occured here and we can set a break

01:10:961 - Can disconnect a bit for better balance

01:12:685 (72685|1,72858|1,73030|1,73203|1,73375|1,73548|1,73720|1) - Can avoid this using ctrl+H some part

01:14:151 and 01:14:323 - to 2, 01:14:237 and 01:14:582 - - to 1

01:14:237 - can be double for consistency of 01:12:858 -

01:14:841 - miss sth

01:15:099 - How about mirroring the bracket a bit like this? it gives more symmetricality and also conjunction within each pattern

01:18:289 (78289|6) - seems weak enough so wanna delete this although no beautiful ?
so we can

01:19:668 - think you need to change your LN structure just a bit so you can map this 1/4 vocal. The vocal is fairly obvious and you map this consistently during the LN section so it's sort of inconsistent you to ignore this one.

01:27:513 - IMO make tails on same time is better , seems no burst things here

01:33:375 - How about this

01:36:565 - 01:34:841 - Do have sth and 01:37:254 - can be 4141 as well

01:38:548 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19086296/f879, fits better with the density? 03:17:858 - here too

01:39:927 - I think the LN usage this part is mainly for vocal flow if so let us do sth further
1 : 01:39:754 - how about catch this

2 : for some no-vocal beat, how about set a LN break here to more match the music

01:47:254 (107254|1) - seems weird ( too long ) cuz main vocal is on red and white lines so can be like this compare with 01:47:685 -

01:54:323 (114323|0) - I know this LN is for structure when mapping but this is the longest LN in the whole part but for sound thing I think It doesn't seem to represent any sound, so it can be redesigned to avoid this super long LN unless there is a continuous lead

01:55:875 - think you should buffed this layering a bit because it's kinda awkward this layering suddenly much less dense.

You can try buff it like this :

02:04:754 - add note at 5 for better transition flow? 02:06:134 - 3 here, etc

02:14:927 - make them 1/4 gap pls

02:51:651 - to 02:55:789 - is copy paste from 01:12:341 - . can use same structure but different pattern for more interesting

02:56:565 - I think instead of just focusing the double on left hand its better to spread them like this:

02:57:168 - can probably do better here, i could suggest pattern but my style is too much.
03:08:203 - same

02:59:065 - seems no burst occured

03:01:134 - how about sth like this for sound on white line

03:12:168 - As well

03:05:617 (185617|2,185617|4,185703|1,185703|3) - Shouldn't this be minijack as well, if following your previous pattern? the vocal are repetitive 1/4 similar as previous minijack

03:08:030 - Should be 4 notes for consistency with 02:59:754 - etc etc

03:17:858 - feels like can be ln

03:19:237 - also copy-paste thing for 1st kiai . Will appreciate if you can make some change at least change some cols

03:25:961 (205961 | 3206048 | 6206134 | 5206220 | 4206306 | 3) - This is the dividing rhythm, so LN here is good , but 03:27:513- 03:28:203 - 03:27:858 - 03:28:548 - ... Vocal starts on white lines here, so the current version is not very effective . can be redesigned

03:28:548 - can emphsize the long vocal like this cuz different from 03:28:203 (208203|5,208203|0) -

03:35:358 (215358|3,215703|3) - seems wrong aim to vocal ? shouold be on 03:35:272 - and 03:35:617 -

03:39:927 - should be same as 00:21:306 - ?

03:58:548 - maybe can use a similar build up like 00:17:168?