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00:20:001 (1) - while i understand that you are trying to make contrast more clear through low hs volumes, 5% hs volume is a bit too low, i'd start it at 15% at least and then go up by 10% or maybe even start at 20% and go up by 5% or smth like that

00:20:001 (1,1,1,1) - high toms not snares

00:25:494 (1,2) - same as above

00:34:367 (1) - turn this into a slider its weird like that and makes little to no sense

00:34:790 (5) - this is 1/8ths not 1/6ths

00:34:790 (5) - maybe shorten this to end on 00:34:895 - to more accurately follow drums

00:40:494 (2) - to 00:41:762 (4) - i'd suggest following violins here, since they have pretty clear and audible rhythm, while the drums are really quiet except the one snare at 00:41:128 (1) - . it would also be nice, since you follow violins here 00:41:128 (1,1,1,2,3) - but not before even though it sounds pretty much the same

00:40:564 (3,4,5) - ik you're following violin here but its a little jarring with this 1/6 constrasting the 1/8 5-note hihat roll

00:41:269 (1) - if you are mapping violin then this should be a burst so you are missing a circle on a red tick

00:47:043 (1,2,3) - this is kinda awkward to play since you pretty much only have a 1/6th gap to jump that which is a bit too much, could change this 00:47:043 (1,2) - to a slider

00:47:043 (7,8,9) - nc this or do something to differentiate the rhythm change from 1/4 -> 1/3

00:58:879 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is just cringe to play

01:04:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - guitar is phrased in groups of 2 here would be better to nc/pattern to follow that imo

01:08:175 - would honestly lower the sv/activity here bc the scream stops here which really lowers the intensity of the overall sound imo, even with the guitar going up

01:09:443 (1) - 01:10:287 (1) - would be cool if you made these kicksliders in groups of 3 to follow the guitar chugs, especially since you did that so much in the section before

01:11:977 (4) - nc for new patterning? (also should buff the spacing here imo)

01:12:400 (1) - would be nice to see some nod to the vocals here, the vocal phrase is pretty impactful so some movement changes on white ticks to follow them would be nice, doesnt have to be turns per say just more activity (you can dm me for ideas if you need on any of these mods)

01:14:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could made it a decel and 01:14:372 (5,6) - a kick slider into the next stream

01:22:118 (7) - nc to show you start decelling?

01:22:963 (2) - could stack this circle on the slider or reduce spacing, since it's not as impactful as the rest of the snares but you grouped them into one jump section

same here 01:28:034 (2) - 07:35:217 (2) -

01:26:344 (1) - spacing changes could be so much more obvious, like every spacing change in this map could be more drastic and it would be better imo

01:30:006 (6) - nc

01:30:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this whole section feels a bit weird, since its all jumps of relatively same spacing but they cover entirely different sounds, i'd suggest either considerably changing up the spacing and making some stacks or changing up the rhythm to add more sliders (for example these 01:31:837 (1) - 01:32:682 (1,2,3) - aren't as important as the other sounds, so you could make those less spaced/stacked or change them for more passive rhythm)

same thing here 02:21:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 07:43:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

flam perhaps map it as a slider its prob gunga weird to play like this 01:30:991 (1,2) -

01:31:837 (1,2) - this and 01:30:991 (1,2) - being the same spacing feels really troll to me, they should be obviously distinct so players don't missread (even tho this is 8* this still feels wrong)

01:36:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could go even lower with spacing

01:38:597 (1,2,3,4) - stuff like this could be mapped as sliders for more variation and :skull: for you not to suffer with mapping jumps

01:44:090 (7,8,9,10) - why not continue the pattern you had for these notes aswell like so since the drums seem to sound the same

(also you did it there 02:52:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - but not here)

01:44:794 (1,5,1,5,9) - every white tick here should have a small turn with a spacing change

01:46:203 (1) - why dont you map a slider here until vocals end and then have this as a break 01:46:625 (2,3,4) -

02:01:837 (1) - nc here for consistency with every other 1-2-3 sliders

02:54:231 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe replace circles with sliders with muted sliderends to emphasize on the violin?

02:55:921 (2,3,4) - burst would fit better here for the violins

02:59:301 (4,5) - slider here for the lack of drum would be nice, even though there is a violin i think its better if you differentiate

03:06:907 (4,5) - triple for violin would be nice especially since there isnt a drum on 03:07:048 (5) -

03:11:696 (7,1) - slider here for lack of drum aswell like in some of the previous suggestions

03:20:216 (4,1) - swap ncs to follow violin pitch

03:21:378 (1) - this violin starts on 03:21:325 (4) -

03:51:299 (2) - could do a better pattern here like so

03:52:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - a bit more rhythm patterning would be nice here, since violins sound the same but the rhythm changes randomly as far as i can tell, could even just go full 1/3 slider spam here with no reverses to emphasize slow section and violins if you want

same here 03:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - especially since these sections 03:55:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 03:57:632 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - sound identical but have very different rhythms, so anything with more consistent rhythm would be better

03:57:632 (7,1) - swap nc

04:21:293 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe a bit quieter finish sample, because rn it kinda overshadows the song and the rest of hs

04:33:124 (1,2,3) - i'd just skip these vocals since they don't have clear snapping and you could stop the break here 04:33:124 (1) -

if u wanna keep vocals tho, definitely make them lower sv so there is a contrast when the drums start at 04:34:814 (1) -

04:34:814 (1) - this isnt mapped to anything, you can just make the slider a 1/1 slider

06:14:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - while there are drums on blue ticks here, 1/4 slider jumps here would be better to be consistent with 05:56:992 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 06:05:525 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - since you emphasized these sounds quite a bit before with either jumps or 06:09:792 (1,2,3) - this type of rhythm

if you really don't want to change the rhythm then i'd suggest making noticeable spacing change in the stream, something like this https://files.catbox.moe/c0ep4q.png to keep the contrast that you gave to these sounds before

same here 06:18:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - and here 06:22:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

07:07:752 (1) - remove nc for consistency with 07:04:372 (13) -

07:15:358 (1) - this slider is a bit asymmetrical, could make it a bit cleaner if u want

07:21:554 (1) - you have an nc and a flow change in the stream here but not 07:22:400 (5) - here, would be better if it was consistent

07:48:668 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - there is really no reason for this irregular rhythm here lol, maybe you meant to make those triples instead of doubles? either way it doesnt follow the song at all rn, change it to something like you did here 02:16:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - in the same section of the song but the other kiai

08:03:808 (2,1,2,1) - whistle whistle WHAT HAPPENED HERE

08:21:837 (5) - short slider here as you did here 08:20:991 (5) -

08:44:794 (1) - ctrl + shift + r clockwise 8 degrees

08:44:794 (1,2) - could make it even higher sv if you want tbh, would be really nice to emphasize those extremely high pitch violins, but its up to you

08:45:639 (1,2,3) - is supposed to follow drums or violin?
if drums, missed important beat at 08:45:780
if violin, violin starts at 08:45:569, not 08:45:639

08:46:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1)
hot asf

08:49:583 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - could give even more spacing even for emphasis, since it sounds more intense than any of this 08:46:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) -

09:05:639 (4) - NC this? because violin note change

09:53:386 (4) - a bit more spacing on this to emphasize the ending if u want

also nc probably since u did it here 03:14:090 (1) - which is fairly similar