RE Aoharu

00:00:559 if you press Tab you can find here storyboard hitsound, move this hitclap from storyboard samples to normal note

missing notes?
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since this is the top diff ,it's abit strange to left these sound unnoted imo

00:02:393 (2393|1,2559|1,2726|1,2893|1) - it a bit akward tho make those note in the same col.Can make some change

ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18488659/7745

00:04:559 (4559|3) - move this left a column because there's only a hat here while 00:04:726 (4726|3,4893|3,5059|3,5226|3,5393|3) - all follow the snare

00:07:226 (7226|2,7309|1,7393|3,7393|0,7476|2,7559|3,7726|1,7726|0,7809|2,7893|1,7976|3) - 00:01:893 (1893|1,1976|2,2059|3,2059|0,2143|1,2226|2,2393|1,2393|0,2476|3,2559|2,2643|3) - 这两个地方要不要保持一下一致性呢？，感觉比较细节的东西看你吧

00:08:309 (8309|1) - 感覺這顆可以不用shield

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18496833/56c2 會不會好些

00:09:893 - 这里有个弱clap的节奏，可以通过键型来稍微表达一下

00:10:643 - maybe delete a note? coz you do it 00:21:309 - 00:23:976 - etc.

00:10:726 (10726|2,10893|1,11059|2,11226|1,11226|0,11393|2) - 00:13:393 (13393|3,13559|2,13643|3,13726|1,13893|3,13893|2,14059|1) - 这里有一个非常小的建议就是我们可以看到34轨道的LN会变成一个反手的release，个人会觉得这种键型很影响准度，所以说我觉得这里可以适当为了手感调整一下pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18708420/e3f6 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18708421/00bb

*It's a subjective thought
how about map 00:15:393 - like this?

example:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18488668/dbd9

coz i think it easier to read the pattern with a continuously stair then the non continuously stair(or its just for me im not sure ;w;)also u put all 1/2 note on the 4 col.so i think it good to keep placing those 1/2 note on 4col

00:16:059 - why don't you put the first ln to col. 3 and the second one to col. 2 for consistency to 00:18:726 ? you could make it something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18512732/43f6 and you already did 00:13:309 (13309|2) - anyway so i don't think moving 00:15:976 (15976|3) - to col. 2 would hurt

00:18:143 (18143|2,18226|0) - 和00:18:476 (18476|1,18559|0) - 个人觉得这两个Shield没有什么必要，建议Ctrl+J

00:18:476 (18476|0,18559|1) - 你确定这里的HS C没有反嘛

00:20:059 (20059|0,20226|1) - 这两个note轨道可以调换为了键型美观 （00:19:726 (19726|0,19893|0,20059|0) - 可以小避免这里的三连锚

00:22:059 - 00:24:059 ：这一整段的LN抓的是synth音但是听感上snap抓的不太对，感觉是LN往外走的而不是往内缩 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18708424/5a37 这样看上去LN也会规律很多 00:24:726 - 这一段也一样。我觉得从听感上走还是要把LN的规律感突出一下，这样你的思路对玩家来说就更好理解了

00:22:726 - i think this is double

00:26:059 (26059|0) - you should move this to col. 2, since it's the only one that don't follow the right-left hand pattern. even 00:31:393 (31393|1) - with the same sound pitch is on col. 2

00:26:226 (26226|0,26393|0,26559|0,26726|0,26893|0) - how about remap a bit to avoid these unnecessary archer?

example:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18488631/d122

00:26:559 - 雙
00:29:226 - 單

差不多的聲音有不同的表示方法

我會偏向於把00:26:559 - 和其他類似的點改單，因為這些地方基本沒有特別大聲，我有點想不透放雙的用意

00:31:893 (31893|1,32059|1,32226|1) - 这里没有必要的三连锚可以避免

00:32:226 (32226|1,32393|3,32393|0,32559|3,32559|2,32726|2,32726|1,32893|3,32893|0) - 键型方面右手压力太大，左手反而不够，适当调整一下

00:38:726 - 这里没有必要四押，1不是分界段落 2没有很明显的钢琴音 triple我感觉就足够了

00:39:726 (39726|1,39893|1,40059|1,40226|1) - 4x anchor, 00:39:893 (39893|1) - 可以向右移到col 3 (1/2/3/4)

00:42:059 - from this timestamp I thibnk music will be a bit weaker than before. subjective suggestion: u can nerf the density to express that such as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18708435/5ef3

00:42:643 (42643|0) - can move this to 00:42:726 -
let 00:42:726 - be triple to emphasize the last sound ,since its much louder then those above

00:48:059 - 你这一段的钢琴音高排列我说实话好奇怪 Part1:00:48:059 - 00:50:726 音高从右往左变高 Part2:00:50:726 - 从左向右 00:52:059 - 从右向左 就挺莫名其妙的，建议重新排列一下？

00:58:726 (58726|0,60059|2,61393|3,62726|0,64059|2,65393|3,66726|2) - 根据这种音色，是不是可以把LN延长到1/4?（其他冲突的Note可以换位置）

00:59:393 - 鼓聲被忽略了，至於00:58:893 - 這個被其他聲音蓋過去不放能理解，00:59:393 - 不放就有點奇怪，因為它跟00:59:559 - 是一樣的聲音

01:03:393 (63393|1,63393|3,63476|0,63559|2,63643|0,63726|3,63726|1,63809|0,63893|2,63976|0,64059|1,64059|3) - 前面的段落由于歌曲音乐强你用这种pattern我没有提出，但是这里我觉得歌曲的强度上已经很弱了，再用和前面一样难度的pattern会造成与音乐不契合的现象，有点overmap 所以说这里我的建议是把pattern写的顺滑一些 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18708447/7cdc

01:08:059 - 这里“Drop”音色的表达突然与前后一段都变得不一样了，但是这个音色本身也是属于像Pluck这种弹拨类音色，没必要直接LN拉长吧

01:08:893 (68893|0) - 我覺得這顆可以加個kick+defaultmix或soft-hitwhistle，儘管兩者的聲音都有點不一樣，但我認為這邊可以考慮看看

01:08:893 (68893|0) - i don't think using LN as a bass cover is a good idea, the bass sound in here feel too deep so prob using SN its already enough for covering this note

01:09:226 (69226|3) - move to 01:09:309 -

01:14:393 (74393|2,74559|2,74726|2,74893|2) - 单轨压力有一些偏大了，而且不是很有必要

01:19:726 01:22:393 01:25:059 you have 3 notes here with 2 lns which means you can't place notes at 1/4 like at 01:11:726 01:14:393 01:17:059 01:27:809, i suggest delete one ln and add note to 1/4 for consistency

01:24:893 (84893|0) - 01:24:726 (84726|2) - 这两个note调换fangzhi unnecessary anchor

01:30:393 (90393|2) - move to col2更顺眼一些耶

01:35:643 (95643|3) 01:38:476 (98476|0) 01:50:976 (110976|1) - ghost note

01:36:226 (96226|3) - move to col 3 because theres an 3 anchor in this part 01:35:893 (95893|3,96059|3,96226|3) -

and also to make it the same as 01:33:393 (93393|2,93559|2) - 01:38:726 (98726|0,98893|0) - 01:44:059 (104059|0,104226|0) - 01:46:726 (106726|1,106893|1) - (

01:43:059 (103059|2,103226|1) - 小手感方面，这里可以互换轨道避免anchor

01:48:059 - 這裡應該可以四壓，它基本比這個部分的其他三壓大聲

01:52:059 (112059|2) - move this to column 2 to avoid feeling too heavy on the right side

01:53:726 (113726|0) - 可以移到col 4減少4x anchor (1/2/3/4)，除非是故意的

01:54:226 (114226|1,114393|1,114559|1,114726|1,114893|1) - 5x anchor

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18493367/b3cb
這樣如何?

02:04:726 - prob can change like this to avoid anchor at 02:05:059 (125059|1,125226|1,125393|1,125559|1,125726|1) -

02:05:059 (125059|0,125143|1,125226|0) - 这三颗镜像一下（仅1、2轨）会不会手感好一些

02:05:559 (125559|1) - 建议移到4轨，避免不必要的Shield

02:05:643 (125643|0) - ghost note without hat?