Abstruse Dilemma

00:10:009 - The pattern here may need some changes.

• The player hit these notes 00:10:009 (10009|0,10102|3,10194|2,10287|1) - with left-right-right-left hands, and the next 00:10:565 (10565|3,10657|0,10750|1,10843|2) - with reversed order of hands. But from 00:12:231 - , things become different. 00:12:231 (12231|0,12324|2,12417|1,12509|3) - These notes need player to hit them with left-right-left-right hands, which means that the latter pattern focus more on the coordination of hands but the former one leaves a slight stressful stuff on the left or right hand. If your pattern in 00:12:231 - is consistent with the former one 00:10:009 - , I would say ok. But you just leave 00:10:009 - alone to give stress to players, that is not so good.

00:14:176 - 00:16:398 - inconsistent place compared with 00:09:731 - 00:11:954 - .

• The former two places need to be doubled because you catch the very heavy drum in 00:09:731 - 00:11:954 - with double. There are no clearly differences that makes you use single in 00:14:176 - 00:16:398 - .

00:17:787 - I don't get the reason why 1/3 stream in this place is shorter than 00:11:120 - 00:13:343 - 00:15:565 - .
reason

• I think you are catching some synths in the background sound? So why the final 1/3 streams is shorter than before. The emotions in this section are progressive, which means the best way to do this is to make each stream a little harder than the previous one. While you don't embody this progression, and I understand why you do, I still can't understand why the stream of the last paragraph should be shorter than the previous one.

solution

• you can move 00:18:343 (18343|1) - to column 1, and add notes in the lost place. Anyway, no more words than a picture.
  

00:46:398 - can make some transition here since the drum here is much complex. such as add some note 00:46:676 - 00:47:231 -

00:48:343 (48343|2,48343|0,48620|3,48620|1) - the double here is so confusing. If you're trying to represent the first two synth has higher pitch, why 00:52:787 (52787|1,53065|2) - is single. This two is not so that consistent. My suggestion is just single here and give a double in 00:53:065 - 00:53:620 - since the progressive musical flow.

00:49:731 (49731|1,49731|3) - I can understand why you use double LN here, but I just wondering why here 00:54:176 - is single? It seems that the latter part has heavier emotional representation, so it doesn't make sense to use single where emotions are heavy and double where emotions are lighter.

so I think you can single here: 00:49:731 - 00:50:287 - 00:50:843 - 00:51:398 - , and also double here: 00:54:176 - 00:54:731 - , to avoid overlapped object, you can just shorten the LN here just like you do before.

00:55:843 - how about add a double here, it is optional but I think it can represent the end of the rest part.

00:59:037 (59037|3) - snap here is also incorrect. it is 1/3 but not 1/2, the reason I have said a lot of times. So just move it to 00:59:083 - . also 01:00:148 (60148|0,61259|3,67926|0,69037|3) -

01:01:398 (61398|2) - This LN usage is weird. You use LN at 00:58:620 (58620|3,59731|0,60843|1) - . These all are the start of one phrase. but 01:01:398 (61398|2) - doesn't have that feel. Just use double tap is ok. and also don't forget to double here: 01:01:676 -

01:04:106 (64106|1,64384|2,64662|3) - also wrong snap. It is actually 1/6 sound. But RC has ban the usage of 1/6 and consider its bpm it's not proper to be contrary to the RC. just use 1/3 stream here 01:03:898 - , and remove the other notes snaping on 1/4 line here. It also solves the gap problem between Normal and Hard.

01:06:398 - such jumptrill is not suggested to use in the Normal diff. considering the bpm and RC, it's too hard for players who are just strong enough to play on this difficulty. also note that the Hard diff used 1/3 2121 stream, so the gap problem is another problem for this pattern.
just remove these notes 01:06:491 (66491|2,66583|0,66676|3,66768|1,66861|2) - may better.

01:06:954 (66954|0,66954|1) - leave the double alone and the next notes are shown 2/1 after. I think it might be blank since the music still has loud sound. I think you can just make the double to be one LN and one tap, this would be better.

01:08:065 (68065|1,68343|3,69176|2,69454|1) - besides the snap problem I mentioned #4064968, the LN usage is not consistent with the former part: 00:59:176 (59176|2,59176|1,59454|0,59454|3) - , which is double. I think you can choose one form and keep the consistency since I have not heard any difference between those two parts. also all other diffs keep the consistency here.

01:10:843 - instead of just use two LN here, I suggest to split the LN in col3 to 3 1/1LNs and also extend the col2 LN to 1/1 and move it to col1. will better represent the transition of the music.

01:12:093 (72093|3,72370|0,72648|0,72926|3) - also wrong snap. I think you can change them to 01:12:139 - 01:12:417 - 01:12:694 - 01:12:972 -

01:20:843 - there are much heavier and more complex drums than 01:18:620 - . So you can add some 1/3 to represent the drum.
an example:

also note that you can use 1/1 LN here 01:22:509 - and 01:22:787 - to simplify the 1/6 drum.

01:23:481 (83481|0,83551|1,83620|3) - such things and also 01:24:037 - 01:24:593 - 01:24:454 - also wrong snap.

just change them to 1/3 single stream.

01:25:843 (85843|2,85843|3,85981|1,85981|0,86120|2) - I guess you want to catch the drum and also the musical sound. But unfortunately it is wrongly snaped. the true one should be:

also 01:26:815 (86815|0,86815|1) - should end in 01:26:954 - not the original place. the drum start 01:26:398 - and end in 01:26:954 - . add a note in 01:26:768 and 01:26:861 - . and although sound end in 01:27:417 - , but I think it is ok to use 2/1 LN since it is Normal diff. end the LN here 01:27:509 - , also add a double here. so it is like:

01:27:787 (87787|3,87926|2) - mentioned before, using 1/2 to simplify the 1/3 is strange, better use 1/3 stream.

01:28:620 (88620|3,88690|2,88759|0,88829|1,88898|2) - although RC allows you to place 5 1/4 notes in Normal, but it is 210+bpm and I think it is too fast for normal player. Also it is wrongly snapped.

just a tap with a 1/1 LN here is ok I think.

01:29:037 - This double... I can tell that you are trying to heavy drum here 01:29:176 - I think? so it should be moved into 01:29:176 - , and also the 01:29:315 - LN to 01:29:454 - . I also suggest to add 1/3 stream at 01:28:898 - to represent the rapid drums.

example:

01:33:065 - there sound to be a kick, so I suggest to double here. 01:33:204 (93204|3,93343|0,93481|1) - also 1/2 is not proper to simplify the 1/3 stuff. So change them to 1/3 stream started from 01:33:250 - .

note in 01:33:759 - makes no sense, I think maybe the ghost note?

What's more, 01:34:176 (94176|0,94315|1,94454|2,94593|3) - is also wrong. it is xoxxxo in 1/3 snap. "x" means there has sound and "o" means not.

so the example is here, I think you can take as a reference:

also 01:36:398 (96398|0,96537|2,96676|1,96815|3) - not 1/2, but 1/3. change them to 1/3 stream is ok.

01:37:231 (97231|0) - ghost note. I guess you want to catch the drum, so it should be 01:37:139 - and 01:37:324 -

01:37:926 (97926|1,97926|2) - also at the wrong place. it should be 01:37:972 - . To avoid breaking the RC, shorten them to 1/2.

01:39:315 (99315|1,99593|2) - wrong snap also. It should be on the 1/3 line!

01:40:843 - the double LNs here actually easier than Easy diff, I think you can make the LN to be 2/3 length and add some notes in the LN head and tail.

the example:

01:41:954 - the double LN here is 1/2 length, it did not break the RC. But since it is 216 bpm, much faster than the 180 bpm so I think can extend one LN to 1/1 and just make the other one to be tap.

example:

01:44:870 (104870|2,105079|1,105287|3) - started at a wrong position. it should be started at 01:44:917 - .

01:56:120 (116120|0,116259|2,116259|1,116398|3) - besides the snap wrong I mentioned, I think it is better to double 01:56:120 - and leave single to the center timestamp.

An example:

01:57:370 - should be on 01:57:417
01:57:648 - should be on 01:57:694
01:57:926 - should be on 01:57:972
01:58:204 - should be on 01:58:157 & 01:58:250