In 00:12:032 and 00:13:403 you mapped a sound but completely ignored at 00:14:603, yes, i know, it kinda feels repetitive, but remember, kantan it's a diff for new players, so they benefit from structure.
as above, resolved :DDD
from 00:15:803 to 00:16:832 - FOLLOW THE LAYERS, if you want to improvise it's ok, but be careful when and where to improvise, here just feels odd
Changed the start part to be more uniform, let me know what you think when you can
yep, feels better to play and sounds great!
Good use of finishers