FINAL BLENDERMAN APPEARED. (feat. RichaadEB)

02:17:607 to 02:32:216 - The hand balancing here is quite problematic, and I feel as if my right hand is about to become sentient and file a lawsuit against you.

Here are some screenshots and examples made after I converted this to full rice

02:17:607 (137607|2,137607|3,137738|2,137868|3,137868|2,137999|3,138129|2,138259|3,138390|3,138390|2,138520|2,138651|3,138781|3,138781|2,138912|2,139042|3,139172|2,139172|3) -

02:21:781 (141781|2,141781|3,141912|2,142042|3,142172|3,142303|2,142433|3,142564|2,142564|3,142694|2,142825|3,142955|2,143086|3,143086|2,143216|3,143346|2) -

and so on. (we already talked about this in da group chat though)

01:12:912 to 01:25:433 - This section is FAR too focused towards the center two columns, and it causes the whole section to feel off and quite unbalanced.

I think a restructure throughout this section is a pretty good idea

From 01:23:346 to 01:25:433 especially it feels quite focused towards the left hand.

I think this needs some rebalancing too

03:28:303 (208303|1) - isnt mapped to a sound I think and 03:28:368 - missing one note

03:32:738 (212738|0,212738|2,212738|1,212868|1) - consider mapping them as jumps or single notes since they sound alike

03:37:172 (217172|2,217172|0,217172|1) - and 03:39:781 (219781|1,219781|0,219781|3) - should be jumps if youre continuing it as hands - jumps - jumps - jumps and so on.

03:35:738 (215738|3,215738|2) - I dont hear the reason of them being a jump. Make a singular ln out of it unless there is a reason

03:41:086 - I think missing short ln

02:49:042 - missing note for the piano

03:03:259 (183259|0) - I know that its mapped to a sound but very difficult to hear soo maybe remove?

maybe add a singular note with the short ln at 02:46:433 - for the echo.

02:36:455 (156455|2) - remove this since it doesnt replicate the sound for the purpose of this note.
and those: 02:37:564 (157564|3,157955|2,158281|0,158346|2) - should be a short ln too

02:34:042 (154042|2) - consider removing because its the "silent part". (sorry, dont know how to explain)

02:04:303 - missing note for the clap

missing note at 02:01:759 - since you have notes at 02:02:281 (122281|3,122803|2,123325|0,123846|3,124368|2,124890|0) -

01:37:955 (97955|2,97955|3,97955|0,98020|1,98086|3,98151|2,98216|1,98216|3,98216|0,98281|2,98346|0,98412|3,98444|2,98461|0,98477|1,98493|3) - and 01:42:129 (102129|2,102129|3,102129|0,102172|1,102216|2,102259|3,102303|1,102346|0,102390|3,102390|2,102433|1,102477|2,102520|0,102564|3,102607|2,102634|0,102651|1) - are the same sounds but charted differently. consider making them alike.

one note to much 01:37:580 (97580|1) - since 01:36:634 (96634|1,96651|3) - isnt a hand

add some ghost notes in the empty parts at 01:54:259 - up to 02:00:912 - to make the chart have more feeling to it. Ill leave this choice to you again.

missing note at 01:36:374 (96374|1,96390|0) - but adding it could make that part a really unconfortable pattern: 01:36:303 (96303|2,96346|3) - so Ill leave the choice to you.

01:33:651 (93651|1,93716|3) - should be regular notes according to how you mapped 01:30:259 - to 01:33:586 -

I think you can add a ln in 01:58:433 - for the guitar sound

missing note at 01:39:526 - since this is a clap. Give it the same pattern as this clap (but without the saw mapped with it): 01:38:477 (98477|1,98493|3) -

Since you have those sounds mapped: 01:30:781 (90781|0,91172|3,93259|3,93390|3,93520|2) - ,I would say that you should map it for the other sounds presence in that part like those: 01:30:651 (90651|2,90912|1,91368|1,91694|2,91825|1,91955|1,92216|1,92346|2,92738|1,92868|1,92999|2) - (doesnt have to be the one that I marked at the jumps)

consider removing 01:27:520 (87520|0) - due to it not representing any sound