Would argue this 00:00:735 (2) - is too fast as this part of the song is the "slow" intro. I would suggest making the sliders up until 00:10:592 - slower, otherwise fine!
If you change this 00:11:021 (2,3) - to a slider, it would better fit the rhythm you ude afterwards.
Maybe two circles instead of 00:19:935 (1) - , to better symbolise the loud drums in the song.
This slider 00:29:878 (2) - should start on the blue tick here 00:29:792 - . You could put a new circle on the red tick here 00:30:050 - . The circle could be at x:294; y:245 to create a good impact.
This section: 00:43:935 - to 00:49:078 - could be made more interesting by also following the background bass rhythm. Currently you follow the singers voice, but you could easily add single circles inbetween the sliders. More advanced, you could add a fast slider here 00:45:821 - and a triple here 00:46:164 - . This slider 00:45:307 (1) - could also be split into multiple small sliders to get every bass kick (idea: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/868124059114807346/1157634475824521236/image.png?ex=6519529e&is=6518011e&hm=11a0a72cd6288d1210fd607d39608caafba2f8fdc77a2d3d9220ebb34137393e&).
To follow the rhythm you created for this section, this slider 00:50:107 (4) - should be changed to two circles and these circles 00:50:450 (5,6) - should be a slider. Otherwise good!
Would change these 01:11:707 (2,3) - into a slider and these 01:12:050 (4,5,1) - should all be circles. This follows the rhythm way better Imo, and you also use this rhythm just a second later! (idea: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/868124059114807346/1157636301613453373/image.png?ex=65195452&is=651802d2&hm=d05e95a1d654e47d92589000da0259d6564289dc3ca6f809d8f0e95401864952&)
This 01:24:392 (1,2,3,4,1) - is a good rhythm choice. You should use it here 01:29:878 (1,2,3,1) - as well ^^
I think generally, this part 01:22:335 - to 01:33:307 - could use a recheck on rhythm. If you want help, we can talk about on discord.
Would suggest to make this 02:18:907 (1) - into two circles. Would make it more interesting to play and give a little more impact to the vocal.
End this slider 02:19:935 (1) - on this red tick 02:20:107 - . Move this circle 02:20:450 (2) - to the white tick 02:20:278 - . Move this slider 02:20:621 (3) - to the red tick 02:20:621 (3) - and make it last till the next red tick 02:20:792 - . Would create a more precise rhythm Imo.
This part 02:23:707 - to 02:28:850 - is fine, but you could potentially focus more on the aesthetic. Maybe create symbols/symmetries etc.. My go to is typically a triangle shape (but that is very simple). Advanced mappers could probably make something more meaningful~
(idea: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/868124059114807346/1157643454541734008/image.png?ex=65195afb&is=6518097b&hm=343ed55e5007ef5a3932cce5ae21a93b69b35101c4e5bde841fa78b6d9c904d8& - is made by rotating the initial circle/slider by 120 degrees)
I don't know how I should mod the next part 02:35:364 - to 02:56:964 - . I like the idea of making a hard jump section here, but it lacks contrast and could use a little rhythm cleanup. Feel free to talk with me about it on discord as there it would probably be simpler to explain.
Otherwise, I would advice you to take a look a the part again and see if you make the spacing of the jumps more variable (remember to follow the songs and loudness of each note) and also recheck if you could make the rhythm more precise. The sections does not have to be just one jump section. You can spice up a bit by focusing more on rhythm and sliders.