patterns like 00:18:449 (1,2,3) - and 00:24:449 (1,2,3) - 00:31:949 (3,4,1) - breaks flow and is awkward to play
00:22:574 (1,2,3,1) - you could nc like this instead https://i.ibb.co/DGz3M68/osu-TCS65z-P3-Kr.png
00:31:949 (3,4,1) - 00:42:074 (7,1,2,1,2) - I think you're following the drums here which sounds the same throughout the section but the rhythm choice keeps changing to a new one
00:39:074 - this is a major downbeat which should probably be an active note instead of a release, same with here 00:44:699 (3) -
01:43:147 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - you should try to not switch between following drums and vocals so suddenly, the player might not expect it and feel weird
03:37:878 (1) - the distance from the previous object is way too small for the intensity of the sound and as the major beat of the chorus' start