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i suggest removing 00:03:358 to reflect the pause in the vocal

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yes

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00:08:608 - Even if it's intentional, feels too empty considering other sections. Notes should be added at 00:09:358 - 00:09:608 - which have drum sounds at least.

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added with permission

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00:21:858 (50) - this note doesnt rly flow well as it doesn't land on anything important, would recommend removing it

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same on the other kai

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remove 00:25:858 for the structure consistency (00:20:608)

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similar: 00:33:858

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yes

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i suggest removing 00:29:858 so theres a clearer distinction between the bass at 00:30:108, the snare at 00:29:608 and the vocals at 00:29:108 (67,68)

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yes

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00:34:108 (83) - a don would represent this kick much better, would be consistent with 00:34:608 (87,88) - as well

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it sounds cleaner if 00:35:358 is removed - the bass at 00:35:108 stands out more and the notes at 00:35:608 (84,85) land on the vocal

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yes

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00:36:100 (90) - why did you put finisher there?

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dunno

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move 00:37:358 -> 00:37:608 so it captures more of the vocals

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changed to d 00:37:608 and 00:37:858

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im not sure why youve placed a break at 01:12:608 in favour to map the sounds of the beeping at 01:13:608. youve previously been following the vocal so it throws off the flow.
i suggest moving 01:13:858 -> 01:12:608 and placing a note at 01:13:358 for consistency with 00:08:358

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ok

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01:24:100 (1) - why there is no finisher when he is exist here 00:20:100 (43) ?

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it's forget

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01:33:358 -> 01:55:108 - 43/1 chain, it's fine cuz bpm is low and the majority of the chain is relatively low density

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remove 01:39:358 for consistency with 00:35:358?
lines up with vocal nicely

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yes

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i think moving 01:55:608 -> 01:54:108 sounds a lot better since it includes the intial downbeat.

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yes

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01:58:108 - gap here feels way too big rn which can come off as underwhelming, would suggest mapping a don here for the kick

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Applied on behalf of guest

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