Kimi no Kioku

00:13:415 (1,2,3,4) - CTRL+G would be cute since patterns up until now kinda zigzag across from each other which would mimic that same sort of movement

00:19:308 (1,2,3) - could just handle this w two sliders like you do later so it doesnt take away from 00:17:165 (1,2,3) -

00:34:709 (6,1) - Would argue that these could be unstacked because of the percussion on 00:34:709 (6) - and introduction of new measure, feels more consistent with 00:33:638 (1,2,3) - and you'd keep your stacks on vocals consistent

00:38:325 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Using same spacings here for different sounds in the song feels like weak contrast, could get away with stacking 00:38:325 (6,7,8) - so 00:38:861 -> 00:43:415 - this section stands out a bit more

00:56:272 (7) - start nc 00:57:075 (9) - here instead so the colors look more cohesive with the pattern

01:04:308 (4,5) - 03:04:308 (4,5) - 5 notes on these feel overmapped and could argue take away contrast from previous 1/1 + 1/4 rhythms through these bridges. replacing each 4 note with a 1/2 slider would work cutely with vocals and sounds more genuine to the song

01:17:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't agree that these should be grouped up the way that they are since the focus so far has heavily relied on vocals when the strongest one ends 01:18:236 - here. Could split this pattern up somehow for contrast

01:17:700 (1) - accidental nc? backing vocals r still there so should be unnced

01:21:450 (4,5,6,7,8) - Feels unnecessarily spiky since players are expected to snap between all of 01:21:450 (4,6,8) - these as opposed to a smoother motion. Would really suggest to nerf the spacings on this

01:59:352 (2,3) - 02:16:093 (6) - 02:16:495 (8) - Could add a hitsound to these and make them consistent with each other considering they have the same sound as 00:33:638 (1,2) - or 03:58:816 (5,6,7,8) -

02:29:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing variation is nice but could add new combos so they land more consistently with 00:29:754 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -

02:41:674 (17,18,19,20,21) - find it strange that the hs indicate you want to bring focus to the sounds but the map is doing osmething completely different

03:03:236 (10,1) - i think your spacing blundered here

03:03:772 (3) - Missnap, tail should be 1/2

05:04:843 (1) - Inconsistent NC? Compared to 01:39:129 (8) - 03:21:986 (8) - 05:21:986 (9) - etc

05:17:566 (43,44) - stack kills any intensity that cymbal has

05:24:397 (20) - 05:24:933 (23) - Missing drum sampleset?