01:55:500 (3) - maybe this the same as 01:54:750 (5,6) - since the vocals are really similar and then 01:55:750 here slider?
02:04:750 (7,8) - overlap very hard to read, would NC and move 02:04:875 (8) - lower, or turn 02:04:750 (7) - into a reverse slider which i think fits better
03:29:000 (1) - these repeat sliders in this section could at least be somewhat ugly to fit the 03:27:250 (1,1,1) - concept