i don't think it is that "intense", the streams are pretty simple imo and honestly i don't see a reason to reduce the distances or nerf the entire section unless more people give their point of view on the topic (and be more specific if possible).
in fact, the second part of the kiai is actually harder, in my case i can hit the first kiai quite consistently, sooo yeah, i think both parts are balanced, yes, they can be polished a bit more but in a general view i think they are okay.
so i will leave the topic open for more opinions and suggestions
and also, sorry for the late response (did i apologize before? idk :'v)
02:02:635 (6,1,2,3,4) - this transition feels too forced to me after the flow you're making during the whole kiai. Making it so 6 to 1 is a hyper where 2 is a reciever (to the left of 1) into 3-4 and hyper to 5 would fit more in my opinion.
In short words move 02:02:635 (6) - more to the left so there's hdash to a potential 02:02:802 (1) - placed on where 02:02:885 (2) - is right now and this one placed where 02:02:802 (1) - was, 02:02:969 (3,4) - where 3 is where 1 was and 5 to the left so there's a hyper would be my suggestion.
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Combo mod:
01:24:135 (8) - nc
01:38:135 (1) - remove
02:04:802 (5) - nc
02:20:802 (5) - nc
02:31:635 (1) - remove
03:08:801 (1) - remove
04:57:134 (6,1) - swap
04:57:634 (5) - nc
04:58:800 (1) - can remove for consistency with rain
03:38:801 - while this section does its job of being a setup to a harder difficulty 04:00:134 - i really think this could be thought out with more distinct patterns or maybe another idea or two thrown in to help it.
the double hdashes arent bad, but the patterns surrounding it like 03:52:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - is constant 1/2 slider jumps with (most) of the triples playing like 1/2 sliders too
while the section isnt as 1/4 demanding like 01:49:469 - and 02:10:802 -, i feel like you can make use of following the guitar or something to variate the rhythm a little