00:01:547 (4,1,2) - , 00:04:088 (6,1) - 這兩個地方的節奏有點不知所謂，是想跟vocal還是instrument？
個人建議就不要用long slider，把有vocal的地方補上去。
replace 00:03:071 (2) - with a 1/1 slider and place it on 00:02:902 to emphasize the downbeat there isn't any instrument, vocals etc... representing 00:03:071 (2)
00:09:709 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 如果你仔細聽可以聽得出來 00:09:709 (9) 00:10:218 (12) 00:10:726 (15) 這三顆音是重的,因此不妨把他們三個三個一組
00:19:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think the burst starts here 00:18:835 and not here 00:19:004 so adjust the burst to the given time also replace 00:18:665 (4) - with a circle if you are going to move 00:19:004 (1,2,3,4,5) to 00:18:835
forgot to mention after you moved 00:19:004 (1,2,3,4,5) replace 00:19:174 (5) - with a slider
00:23:242 (1) - spinner放得有點奇怪，雖然有vocal的長音，但間隔短的情況下，較推薦使用long slider替代，也就是把00:23:071 (9) - 換成slider
00:24:259 (2) - you could try to replace this circle with a slider to cover the weak red tick at 00:24:428
00:27:309 (1,2,3,4) - dont try to space out objects when the song's intensity is relatively calm it makes the map misrepresentative. So, making this have low spacing will make the map more consistent on spacing.
00:32:563 (3,4,5) - instead of making this a burst try to replace 00:32:563 (3) with a 1/1 slider to represent vocals like what you did on 00:29:852 (2,3,4,5). It also makes a consistent rhythm on the vocals
00:39:004 (6,7) - these objects are mapped to no instrument 00:37:140 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part however is mapped on the vocals and then the last two sliders went off the vocals. Try to continue to map the vocals on this section 00:39:004 ---> 00:39:343. Suggestion is that you replace 00:38:835 (5) - with a slider and I leave it to you to fill in the blanks on how you will continue the rhythm from there.
00:44:088 - again vocals are prioritizing on this part so move 00:44:258 (1) - on 00:44:089 so it catches the vocals there