00:04:476 (4476|3,4710|2) -
The drums here stand out but feel weak in the way the ln is expressed, I think adding the 1/2 note is fine, for me it's acceptable.
00:14:320 (14320|2,14788|3) - It seems that the expressive power of ln alone is not enough. Listen carefully to the drum sound here, and find that 00:14:554 - and 00:15:023 - are very thick and clear 1/8 drum sound, so this mode is provided for your reference, so as not to make the pattern too boring.
it's a little difficult for 256 bpm , but I want to leave 5 notes to emphasize these kind of sounds 01:31:663 (91663|1,91780|2,91898|1,92015|2) - , 01:33:304 (93304|0,93421|2,93538|0,93655|2,93773|1) - , 01:35:413 (95413|3,95530|0,95648|3,95765|0,95882|2) -