00:28:849 (28849|2) - This LN should be delete. u place an extra LN for the vocal i guess (or u just wanna take the portamento into account)
let's get more technical here -
CHI-KA-Y-O-RU is the way they pronounce this word in the song
following that, the LN stays like this:
00:28:541 (28541|0) - 00:28:695 (28695|3) - 00:28:849 (28849|2) - 00:29:003 (29003|0) - 00:29:156 (29156|3) -
00:33:618 (33618|0) - This LN shoule be deleted, and make this LN 00:33:310 (33310|3) long enough to fix the vocal
00:47:926 (47926|2) - based on what u write later, this LN should be cut to half, or u can change other shorter LN to longer one
i don't understand what you mean by here - the LN is longer than the rest because the vocal stays for longer than the rest
unless you meant to make 00:48:541 (48541|3) - and similar ones longer
00:51:156 (51156|2) - same problem in #3401319 , put this LN here 00:51:003
00:57:772 (57772|2) - same suggest in #3401316 , i wondering why there has the same problem in differ place
01:00:233 (60233|0) - This LN should be extended to 01:00:233 (60233|0), bc the vocal there
01:29:926 (89926|1,90233|2) - This 2 LN can be changed as 1 LN, and 01:30:233 (90233|3) can changed to 2 note (idk how to describe that but i can give u a photo about wahat i meant https://imgur.com/a/z9LwNIZ
01:51:926 (111926|0,112003|1,112080|3) - This 2 (or 3?) LN should be 1 single LN