00:01:210 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
Pitch: note #8 sounds better as a K finisher imo, and note #7 should be a d because of the kick
Structure: try o ooo ooooo O instead of ooooo o ooo O
Reason: its a progression thing/player intuition, also technically you could justify it note #2 doesnt have a sound but the gap between d kdk does
I think the density progression is kinda weird for certain sections based on the feel of the song itself
Examples: from 00:03:363 to 00:10:440 i expected more density where there is less
From 00:10:133 to 00:11:056 im not sure why you didnt follow through the melody and last kick with 1/2
From 00:12:594 to 00:17:210 is more intense than 00:3:363 to 00:10:440 so i expected slightly more density than that section
From 00:17:210 to 00:19:671 feels more dense than it should be because it calms down from the previous section
00:19:671 to 00:22:133 is ok i suppose
Id fix these with the use/removal of triples/ other #plets like you did at 00:05:056 (23,24,25) and 00:06:133 (30,31,32)
i hate reopening things cause i feel like a dick but i really do recommend nerfing the section at 00:17:210, its a transition into the next part and its clearly a slowdown (not literally but i cant think of the right word rn)
my recommendation below! (feel free to change it up slightly if you think you have a better idea, ill let you know if it plays weird)
00:17:210 (119) - change to d, theres a kick
00:17:363 (120) - move to 00:17:671
00:17:517 (121) - change to d
00:17:825 (122) - change to k, theres a snare
00:17:902 (123) - remove
00:18:286 (127) - to k
00:18:517 (129,130,131) - remove
00:18:979 - if you remove the above notes you could place one here instead to make up for the loss
if you refuse this i wont reopen it again but at least try it out a few times before saying no
00:02:748 (10,11,12) - note #10 not a finisher?? :( I dont wanna post a mod for every single place where a finisher should be so im just gonna suggest that you watch out for cymbal crashes and powerful notes throughout the entire map
i would suggest those three notes to be K d d specifically
also move 00:03:210 (13) to 00:03:517