00:59:583 (1) - This section is really intense, yet your rythm choice is not reflecting the intensity of the section
Rythm Suggestion: https://imgur.com/FYkp0St <-
I would make your first Buzz Slider active, since it is a really intense section. In the screenshot, I use a Triple including a Kick Slider. After this I use another Kick Slider to emphasize vocal on 00:59:883 and lastly a Buzz Slider because the Pitch Intensity goes down. Also extend the Buzz Slider to the blue tick on 01:00:258 as Kuki did, because there is still a noticable sound