00:09:580 (5) - think you could transition from the intro with a slider on the white tick that maps the guitar slide. guess it's a similar idea to 00:30:049 (8) - where you transition with a 1/4 slider
01:15:987 (4,5,6,7,8) - could probably go for something a bit more dense rhythm wise here like you did in the later kiais since the vocals go boom. or i guess you could give 01:17:080 (7) - a bit more space if you prefer the low density here
01:20:830 - could add circle, there's a subtle "n" vocal that feels a bit empty to skip. it's a bit similar with 03:00:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6), so it would nice for consistency
02:56:455 (5,1) - could increase spacing or have a sharper angle to highlight the higher pitched vocals, would also contrast with 02:55:362 (1,2,3,4) - before
if u were following melody on 03:16:612 (1,1,1,1), then 03:17:080 (2) would sound a bit more accurate on 1/6
maybe rearrange to have a double? https://imgur.com/a/IwQ8UNb
04:56:299 (1,1,1,1) - think you should give this a smaller spacing for some contrast with 04:57:237 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - since they're a bit more powerful