00:12:136 (5) - the note being perfectly overlapped with the triple at 00:12:136 (5,1,2,3) - plays like ass
00:52:497 (1,2,3) - 00:52:806 (1,2,3) - 00:53:115 (1,2,3) - maybe give more space so it doesn't look too cramped
01:04:713 (1) - same on all of those patterns just a suggestion sice i personally think it would sound better, u might think not idk lol