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00:00:480 - astagfirullah temen lu mulai spinner dari 00:05:754 - jir , hapus itu dua note gila yang ada di 00:00:480 - sama 00:05:754 -

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diganti spinner, ojo bingung

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nggih, le

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

00:05:754 - please start the spinner here as it's currently more than 10 seconds long and I think players don't want to wait that long for the map to start.

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nice

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00:11:029 - finisher ojo lali

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^00:21:578 - pattern e dari kdk ganti ke kkD, finisher juga. 00:23:556 - kdk bisa di swap kesini

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^00:32:128 - finisher

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^00:37:403 - finisher

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^00:42:677 - finisher

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^00:53:227 - finisher

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^00:58:501 - finisher

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^01:03:776 - finisher

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^01:09:051 - finisher

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^01:14:326 - finisher

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^01:24:875 - finisher

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^01:30:150 - finisher

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^01:35:425 - finisher

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yo

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

00:14:326 - tambah note biar nyambung vokalnya

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ongkeh

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00:14:326 - Maybe remove this would be more natural?

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there's a drum soo i keep that.

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00:15:644 - remove trus 00:15:974 - pindah ke 00:16:963 - biar strukturnya rapi

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nggih

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00:18:611 - pindah ke 00:17:293 - biar struktur nya konsisten sama 00:11:029 -

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nggih

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00:20:919 - sama 00:21:249 - diremove

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nggih

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00:24:875 - delete this to conform with the RC guideline?

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sure

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00:25:534 - agak padet sih ini, coba di nerf dikit kyk remove 00:25:864 - sama 00:27:842 -

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ok

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00:29:820 - ini masih possible sih kalo mau nambah spinner kyk diff lainnya, cuma panjang nya sampe 00:30:809 - ae biar sekalian break

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hmmm nggak dulu deh, coba gw biarinin kosong dulu ini.

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

00:29:820 - Would suggest removing this spinner as it's so short + only 6 ticks with the current OD
As a Kantan diff, leaving a large blank is appreciated.

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ooo ok

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

00:33:776 - chordnya gk terlalu nendang sih kalo menurutku gk kyk 00:41:359 - yang base nya drum lebih baik di remove aja kalo sih, bikin kreasi ddk reverse dari 00:36:743 - yo bisa

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^01:08:062 - sama ini, remove

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^01:29:161 - remove juga

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nggih

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00:36:414 - and 00:41:688 - consider to add d to increase the intensity in the kiai and make more impact before rest moment

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d

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00:43:666 - 00:50:589 - gk rapi ini strukturnya follow up setengah-setengah asutenan, 00:44:655 - pindah ke 00:44:326 - trus 00:45:974 - pindah ke 00:45:644 -

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^00:47:622 - tambah note trus dari 00:46:963 - kdkD

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nggih

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00:43:666 ~ 00:47:952 - how about change into this pattern: https://volta.s-ul.eu/LwSp3IIn (cursor at 00:46:633 - ), this way would follow the drum more accurately and place better emphasis to important vocal and guitar sound such as 00:46:963 - and 00:47:622 -

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hmmm keanya kalo ngikutin drum masuk juga kyk gini https://i.imgur.com/QctuSOO.png

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Marked as resolved by Joltzzz

sorry, gw open lagi... kirain udah beres lmao

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Reopened by Joltzzz

bro kan gw ngomongnya nanti dulu diclosenya ☠☠☠

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close aja dah, keanya mantep ini

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

00:53:556 - Consider moving this to 00:54:545 and changing it to d
as "O o" strcuture is kinda awkward in Kantan imo.

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moved and still kat i think it's good tho

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

00:53:886 - consider to move this to 00:53:556 - ;
00:54:545 - move to 00:54:216 - and change to k;
00:54:875 - add k;

this way would reflect the drum in a way better, also you can change 00:53:227 - to D for more contrast after that.

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ok

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

00:58:172 - i think the song is not that intense to warrant a 5-plet here so consider to remove the note would emphasize the vocal at 00:57:842 - better imo, you can add note at 01:01:469 - instead since the drum going crazy there.

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hmmm kyknya work juga

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01:04:765 - maybe add d, 01:08:062 - add k, 01:13:337 - add k for the guitar and increasing the density in the kiai?

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add

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01:17:622 - tambah note ae sih ini jangan dipotong soale sisa vokalnya masih ada

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nggih

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01:19:271 - changing this to k fits better with the snare drum imo.

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d masuk kok

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01:20:260 - maybe move this to 01:22:567 - to give small break and emphasize the drum in the end of kiai?

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bisa bisaa

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01:22:567 - sama 01:22:897 - tambahin note ae disambung kyk yang lu bikin di 00:41:359 -

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njajal

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01:22:567 -
01:23:062 -
Follow what you said #2987839
then these two should be removed and add a note on 01:22:732 - for the hi-hat

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ok

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01:24:545 - Could be dK which consistent with 01:03:447 - , emphasizing the base drum on 01:24:545 -

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👍👍

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01:36:414 - create a break somewhere in this pattern to follow the RC guideline?

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oke

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

i don't understand :/

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

Sorry for the lack of explanation.
Can strongly feel a drop here in the song atmosphere so I think you should lower the density here to fit with that, as the density in this part currently is just same as the kiai.
You could do something like this:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/709366576448798750/962397959054557194/unknown.png

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Reopened by BlackBN

01:36:414 - don could be here as well to consistent with the structure at
01:31:139 -

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i mod a bit, how about that?
i accept your mod but i add 01:39:051 - d in this section

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Marked as resolved by Naverlyn

01:43:831 - This is the only 1/2 pattern you have in this diff and some others like 00:43:501 you didn't put as 1/2 as well.
Maybe remove it?

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the drums at first doesn't make sense imo in 1/2 pattern, only the last thing is.

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01:43:996 - pindah ke 01:43:831 - ganti ke kat trus tambah kat juga di 01:44:326 -

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👍

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01:45:315 (140,141) - dua note belakang ini ganti finisher don su, temen" mu semua finisher iki :"V

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ngesakno, su :"v

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01:45:315 - The drum here just sounds the same as 01:44:655, I think it should not be finisher'ed. Just keep a don here is enough for the end.

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don

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01:45:644 (153) - delete, a single note a 01:45:315 (152) - is enough to represent the final sounds, it feels weird because that note is mapped to the second strong kick out of the three while you have to ignore the others (kantan simplifications z)

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mmm sure

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