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Sounds like it misses a a bass drum hit at 04:25:623, like a triplet followed by two big snare hits at 04:25:704 and 04:25:867 respectively.

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if you're talking about hs, i haven't copied them over for this section yet

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tbh it sounds like it could be a hitsound thing

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The slider beginning at 08:38:485 should either be closer to centre of screen or the spinner starting at 08:10:529 should end a little bit sooner to allow for a smoother transfer from the slider. Also, long spinner is an odd choice for the big band finish and my hand started cramping near the end.

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fixed slider, as for the long spinner, i think its fine

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The sliders at 03:31:003, 03:31:248 and 03:31:411 could be angled inwards a bit more to better flow into the stream that comes directly after. The stream that starts at 03:32:878 could also be angled a bit more towards the previous sliders.

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i think its fine how it is

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The map is altogether an excellent time to be had and I reckon once that big gap in the middle is done it will be one hell of a map.

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00:48:123 (4) - should be just a one beat slider from 00:48:123 - to 00:48:123 - because if you listen at 0.25x, it's simply one long guitar note, it doesn't really make sense to have it as a repeat slider. Also if you make it into a beat slider, it fits well with the music slowing down and then pick up again from 00:48:367 (5) -.

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im following the drums

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the reason its a slider and not a short stream is that IT IS a held sound.

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00:53:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - should a burst stream section if you are going to make 00:57:009 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:57:335 (1,2,3,4) - also small stream bursts when the guitar is lower.

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this is done to contrast the switch between distinct sounds on each white tick to a low pitch guitar which does not clearly have a distinct sound.

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01:13:476 (2) - I get why you have the slider curve like this just like these 01:15:514 (5,2,2) - but I think you should make that slider a little less sharper on the turn, it's good idea though anyway :thumbsup:

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i think its fine

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02:32:471 (1,2,3,4) - why does this suddenly have low ds? Also, I'm not sure what those 4 notes are also playing: 1) at 02:32:634 (3) - the vocals stop 2) at 02:32:471 (1) - the lower guitar sound starts playing but it doesn't have a break like there is in the beatmap at 02:32:797 -

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mhm

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02:34:183 (8) - Why is this sharper than these 02:34:672 (1,2,5,5) - ? I know the guitar pitch is increasing but there's no reason to only have the first one be sharp?

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fixd

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07:18:856 (1) - I like the overall stream but the streams do get boring when they're only in an infinity loop, is there any other way that it can be mapped? I think the guitar is quite complex between 07:18:530 - and 07:21:139 - and imo it would play and look better to map it to the guitar sounds then.

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i broke up the stream into 2 sections to have the guitar mapped separately.

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