00:19:304 (3,1,2) - to follow vocal sound in 00:19:558 - would be more natural since entire this diff follows vocal sound mainly.
so change rhythms here to like this example would be better : https://puu.sh/I2mkF/fcc9604ff6.png
00:58:838 (7) - suggest making this just a circle since there's not any vocals here, as 00:59:092 (8) - is mapped similar to the object but has a vocal
01:06:465 (4,5,6,7) - This is where the vocalist repeats the same words, so I think a repeating rhythm would work.
Plan 1 https://puu.sh/HKybs.png
Plan 2 https://puu.sh/HKyco.png