00:46:765 (1) - That shape seems kind of bland and out of place, try to make it into something more creative.
01:05:823 (1) - The notes from above plus it specially feels bland compared with the past sections.
00:51:353 (3) - do either this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16818786/370d or this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16818790/aab8
01:11:206 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - That section can be way more interesting if you replaced the repeat sliders with triplets, also try to make the pattern more visually impressive as it looks somewhat normal.
01:14:559 (2) - remove this and extend the slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16818802/a788
01:34:059 (1) - Personally I do not enjoy that shape, you can do multiple 1/8 sliders instead of just doing one.
01:37:588 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Since the pitch of the sound is descending you can decrease exponentially the SV for a better feel to the section.
02:48:529 (1) - maybe you could change this slider (Brezel) to something different like https://quix.s-ul.eu/LzZoYpcu
02:56:647 (2) - maybe stack reverse end to 02:57:353 (1) reverse end (https://quix.s-ul.eu/UtmPQxZv)
03:58:059 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I completely hate this segment as its nothing like the entirety of the map, it feels that somebody else mapped it, please remap this whole part as it feels really out of place with the rest of the map.
04:10:412 (1) - That shape is not visually pleasing, the shapes you have done in the map have been almost stellar and that one just seems... there.
04:26:294 (1) - Amazing shape, one of the most creative uses of slider points I have ever seen.