00:03:248 (1) - doesnt really look good when its almost parallel to the x/y axis maybe rotate it 5ish degree
i'd say subjective but realized I also don't like perfectly aligned slider if it's not in a concept so fixed
00:08:248 (1,2) - could be facing downwards cause of the same reason that Krisom said to 00:23:319 (1,2) -
00:18:248 (2) - could be rotated to the other direction cause at least imo it being parallel to the 00:17:248 (1) - isnt looking particulary nice
00:23:319 (1,2) - considering the pitch of the violin goes downwards, I'd suggest making both sliders face downwards as well for music representation
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15496022/3772
00:29:248 (1) - Could you make a pattern similar to 00:30:248 (1,2) - so you can follow the clear violin sound at 00:29:623 -
00:31:248 (1,2) - These two objects seemed to be too close in this difficulty, it resembles 1/2 rhythm here
00:34:248 (1,2) - i don't think this spacing is nice, player might 100 on the slider or won't read the next circle well, it happens a few times
00:38:819 (2,3,4) - Since this is a triple stack and it's 1/2 spaced, I'd space/stack it differently to emphasize that it's not 1/4.
00:40:319 (1,2) - jump seems rather intense for such a tame part in the music and also considering most jumps in hard diffs are way smaller. I'd suggest placing (2) closer to (1)
I've reduced the former since that looks blatantly overspaced already, the latter I'll keep for now as I don't feel it's too much (and it being almost equivalent to 00:43:069 (3,4))
00:43:748 (2,3) - at least from the expirience of watching my friedns playing osu, this might lead to some missreads and flustration cause they clicked 3 before 2 cause they thought it was just going in a straight line
00:58:748 (2) - this is pretty high spacing for a 1/4 jump, would recomend reducing it to the same levels as for example 00:57:248 (1,2,3) -
01:18:319 (1) - I'd consider either making this just a circle and stacking 01:18:819 (1) - under it, OR silencing the sliderend.
01:27:748 (2,3,1) - the overlap is pretty ugly imo, could be spaced more or less to get rid of it
01:31:319 (2) - Not gonna lie, this wave slider looks really awkward. i personally use mapping tools to make wave sliders because i'm so particular about how sliders look.
In addition, the blanket towards the nc looks a bit off.
01:43:748 (2) - could be moved somewhere to the right so that it does not overlap with 01:42:998 (5) -