00:16:164 (2) - not actually sure but i don't think there should be any SV changes other than in kiai for normal diff, but i could def be wrong, its just the spacing is so drastically bigger imo
00:22:009 (3,4) - dont increase spacing there, just move in a different direction
like that https://prnt.sc/w00srt
00:31:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - is just absurd for a normal there definitely should not be this many 1/2 rhythms in a normal at this bpm.
00:32:324 (3,4,5) - there's a issue with readability between 4 and 5 as they can be easily misread by beginners