You could map the vocal on 00:07:934 considering you've mapped them all in the section. I suggest reducing 00:07:309 (5) - on the previous blue tick.
Doing this could also make 00:08:142 active and stoud out the downbeat / strong vocal
00:17:725 (1,2) - could stack them cause u using the same patterns for 1/4 gaps (00:11:267 (6,7) - ,00:14:392 (1,2,3) - , 00:21:267 (5,1) - ) so it could be missreaded
00:46:266 (4,5) - I would use the distance snapping here, currently the spacing seems like 00:42:932 (1,2) - when it should be bigger to avoid misreading
01:03:137 (4,5) - the 1/4 spacing here is as big as the surrounding 1/2 spacing, which can be a little confusing. Consider readjusting.
this is actually not the only moment where the 1/2 spacing is the same as 1/4, e.g. 00:01:476 (2,3,4,5) - 00:14:392 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:24:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc. You can show the difference between different gaps by lowering spacing for 1/4 gaps like https://kuyusu.s-ul.eu/vH7ovyb1
Increase spacing between 01:07:069 (4,5) to better accentuate their spacing in the music like you did with 01:12:914 (3) and 01:13:330 (4) as they feel much smoother with the spacing increase
i literally put circles in 01:20:802 (3) -. the reason im not putting circles in 01:20:599 - because the slow part i use vocal, then on kiai i follow drum. and also you can get more impact with this.