Clover wish (TV Size)

00:02:146 feels more like a jump rather than a single note. Consider adding a note at 00:02:146 (2146|3) or somewhere else at that time.

00:06:026 - use 3 1/6 notes for this gracing sounds.
00:07:071 - double for the kick
00:07:295 -00:07:743 -00:07:855 - I prefer single
example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15368961/22d1

00:06:176 - 2 notes here for emphasis?

00:07:071 (7071|3,7071|0,7183|2,7295|0,7295|1) - I know it's probably your intention.
But still want to confirm it because you break the hard diff guideline:
'Chords within 1/4 streams should be at least 1/1 beat apart from each other.' But still. Feel free to tell me if you think it's better to keep here.

00:07:855 - Add a note to express both drum and string? I guess it's intentionally ignored but me prefer to have it for better emphasis.

00:10:429 - it'd be cool to have a held note here too for the chords

00:12:444 (12444|1) - This LN should start at 00:12:220 -
And this note 00:12:220 (12220|3) - should move to 00:12:444 - to make this line double.
( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15255277/bb8a )

00:20:728 - #1730079 same

00:22:071 (22071|3) -
hmmm ghost note? Not pretty sure what you map this note for ;w;
If I wrong, I apologize first ;w;;;;

Personal Suggestion about 00:34:161 (34161|2,34273|1,34385|3,34385|0,34608|2,34720|3,34832|1,34832|0) - this part.
How about bringing the pattern of 00:32:370 (32370|1,32482|2,32594|1,32594|0,32817|2,32929|1,33041|2,33041|3) - this part as it is? Like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15379615/e338 This will make it the same as the pattern in the first part, so you can feel a little more natural and emphasized.
If you accept this suggestion you will have to use ctrl+H from 00:35:504 - this line. And this suggestion can also be considered on MX difficulty.

00:53:079 - 01:10:989 - Both timeline had sparkle sound in 1/4 like 00:56:101 , you may add note to it because it's very distinguishable

00:53:526 - there's no sound, you should empty here. because 01:07:855 - you did empty here too .

Starts from 01:02:370
I am wondering if you would like to do such rearrangement https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15610743/6d03
So the 1/4 snaps can be arranged for the other hand to the 1/2 LN.
More hand-balanced than your current pattern.
Also as an optional, you can do some rearrangement at 01:04:161as well ,to make them repeat the LN pattern at 01:02:370 .

Pattern suggestion(
01:02:594 - At this part, I think move the LN ( 01:02:594 (62594|1,62817|2) - ) to col 3/4,and move 01:03:041 (63041|3) - this one to col 3 will be better for playing this part (((
(https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15255236/a2ae)

01:03:601 - there's no sound but single note. and 01:03:377 - there's pretty big sound but no note.

01:15:131 (75131|1,75131|0,75355|2,75579|3,75579|2) - a small detail problem here, the jack should be with the double before, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16233921/badf

01:17:258 - single

Suggestion(
01:20:280 (80280|2) - I think you should use LN to express this line,because you map piano(?) sound as LN :01:18:489 (78489|3,78937|2,79385|1,79832|0,80056|3) -
So, yeah ,I thiknk you change 01:20:280 (80280|2) - this one to LN will be more consistent.
Maybe like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15255257/dbb9

01:20:504 - It's pretty weak accent to kick by using single note. You can distinguish double by its hand play, like snare is using 2hand double [14] https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16233887/df94

Unimportant suggestion D:
01:23:638 - Maybe change one regular note to LN?
01:24:982 -and 01:25:653 - : Change to 1/1 LN
01:26:773 - Double this line (Although I think that's a 1/16 piano sound?)
I suggest for those points because this part is same as normal diff, maybe a little change will make the end of song more vivid. But, yeah. It depends on you XD

01:26:773 (86773|0) - I prefer move it to 01:26:847 - since you dont avoid the grace at 00:04:161 - and 00:05:952 -