it felt something missing if i do that so ill keep it until i know how to cover it properly
00:33:674 (1) - from this until 00:44:474 (5) - seems to be anti-clockwise flow all the entire time, consider changing the flow?
01:10:702 (8) - add 1/2 slider to keep the density since it's kiai, and also the sound is a louder compared to any previous part so I feel like adding 1/2 slider could add the impact and increase the intensity
01:29:387 (9) - replace this with something like this maybe: https://i.imgur.com/KUXk4MN.png