00:01:678 (1) - Same here considering you gave this 00:02:550 (4) - more emphasize through circles than the heavy kicks in the sliders
00:06:910 (5) - I feel this is heavily under emphasized cosidering the synths before have rougly the same spacing
00:08:481 (5) - Considering all of those are also synths, you could do some really cool looking 1/4th sliders here, tho i guess its also fine as is ( roughly like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15165599/73cc )
00:12:492 (5) - Considering the spacing for the synth before this kick feels underemphasized
00:13:713 (4) - Sliderend underemphasizes heavy kick (with all of these, I see that this is supposed to represent the synth, so I guess its just preference, but I feel its really underwhelming)
[Because there is so many of those ill stop pointing them out, they're pretty easy to find]
00:16:503 (5) - you have the same rhythms consistently which is good but musically it's different here to what happens at 00:10:922 (5) (and the next section is about to start) so it should be reflected in your map in some way
at 00:16:416 there is an extra strong drum
it's probably okay if you leave it like this, but music would support breaking your consistent (or exact same) rhythm choice and would work well leading into what is coming next
and you would reflect this difference in the music somehow
you could do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15130975/acd0 (more the rhythm than the placement)
00:16:503 (4,5,6) - the synths are weaker sounds than the kicks, yet here they are wider spaced than the kick
00:18:771 (2) - No preferirías hacerle Ctrl+G a este slider para que haga un flow circular con este 00:18:422 (1) - tal y como has hecho aqui 00:17:027 (1,2) - ?
00:37:085 (6) - Yo este tal vez lo rotaria 45º para que tenga mejor flow con 00:36:562 (5) - , además no estropearia el flow con estos jumps 00:37:608 (7,8) - .
01:30:283 (6,7) - under-emphasized on 6 and in some kind of pattern with the previous two sliders where it should not be patterns work well when the sounds are similar or the same, but here I think some kind of separation makes sense).. I suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15100748/e5c0
keep in mind that 01:18:422 (1,2,3) - has musically a similar structure and should follow similar rules