00:12:725 (1) - Move the start of this slider on top of the start of that slider 00:12:143 (1) - you can move the end of the last slider to x:324 y:156 (about that area) so that 00:12:580 (2) - this object won't touch the slider.
Maybe move 00:25:832 (2) - that slider to about x:44 y:357 so that it looks more symmetrical with the slider at 00:25:541 (1) -
There are prominent drum sounds on 00:30:784 (1) - and 00:30:784 (1) - Maybe you can shorten the slider and put a circle at 00:30:929 (2) - on x:494 y:313 and another one at 00:31:075 (3) - on x:378 y: 138
01:40:250 (4) - Move this circle to x:292 y:95 and 01:40:031 (2,3) - these two to x:428 y:10 / x:411 y:21 it fits with this part 01:43:745 (2,1) -
Move this whole part 01:57:579 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - to x:261 y:179 (first circle of the part is on x:261 y:179) it makes the transition from the circlestream 01:56:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - more fluid in my opinion