Uuuhh...
00:43:229 (1) - Fix blanket
00:42:452 (1,1) - 00:43:229 (1,2,3) - you can fix both of those with just one small movement
01:11:537 (1) - Remove NC? You could just group this with 01:11:226 (1,2,3) and it kind of sticks out for being NC'd despite not having any unique sound or purpose to it.
there's actually a 1/2 guitar rhythm at 02:43:856 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - so i mapped this by using 1/4 sliderkicks :/ same with other part
04:29:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Are you sure you want to keep these repeat sliders on 1/4 instead of 1/3 (since that's what the the kicks/percussion is landing on)?. The other two difficulties use 1/3 as well and would make more sense to represent the song better using 1/3 repeats.