Otome-domo yo.

00:12:648 (4) - I think moving a bit far is better. because attention key of sound is relatively higher than others

00:15:438 (4) - same as above

00:16:315 - leaving this drums feels empty, pls map it

00:22:415 (2) - I think that making the sense of distance between the front and back uniform will produce a sense of progress i.e x:95 y:243

00:24:862 (4) - place it x310 y84?

00:26:606 (7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this section feels really compressed and claustrophobic, consider changing object placement

00:38:466 (2,3,4) - emphasize 4 by creating spacing between 3 and 4 in some way (and in similar parts afterwards)

00:44:915 (6) - Since the sound is taken with the snare, I think that this is missreadable and it is more natural to resolve the flow independently than to make it a blanket of 00:45:090 (1) - i.e x:143 y:280

00:46:839 (2,3,4) - this small spacing doesnt feel good imo

00:57:299 (2) - In my opinion, it would be better to increase the spacing to emphasize the relative rise in key or swap start and tale of slider

01:17:187 (1) - id make these 2 circles since its transitioning in some small climax

01:33:752 (7) - I think that moving it to the left may create harmony with the shape of 01:33:927 (1) - in preparation for the next counterclockwise singletap

01:47:183 (3) - As a shape, I think that it looks more beautiful if it is placed on the extension of the blanket i.e. x:219 y:121

01:48:229 (2) - I think it's better to move it to the left to emphasize the flow between 01:47:531 (5) - and 01:47:880 (1) - , but if you value the shape, I think it is fine

01:50:496 (6) - Because it is a solution progress, I think that it is better to put it to the right than 01:49:624 (2) - when looking at the horizontal line

01:51:892 (2) - Considering the emphasis of 01:55:903 (5,6) - , it is desirable to make the groundwork from this point, so I think it is necessary to take measures such as moving it to the left to create a horizontal flow i.e x:170 y:141

02:00:879 (3) - song doesnt provide any sound in order to justify this circle

02:02:187 (2) - do the same thing you did at 02:04:978 (1,2) -

02:14:043 (7) - Since it is half-finished as a production feeling, it is better to move it to y:201 to keep uniformity on the y-axis or above it

02:15:264 (5) - Since it's a chorus, let's move it to the right with emphasis on the speed of experience rather than overlap

02:20:322 (2) - How about raising the SV to 1.45 at one point for emphasis?

02:23:902 (6) - overmap - theres no sound for this circle

02:32:183 (6) - Because it is chorus, how about moving to x:233 y:104 with emphasis on speed of experience rather than overlap?

02:35:327 (1) - make this look better in combination with 02:33:932 (1) -

02:37:769 - make this the slider end and place a circle on 02:37:943 -

02:47:357 (2) - How about catching 02:46:834 (5) - as a pattern advance effect and moving it to the left to maintain the horizontal flow with the vertical slider i.e x:141 y:127

02:54:072 (2) - If you want to emphasize the guitar, I think it is more effective to release the spacing a little i.e x:366 y:105

03:05:671 (1,2) - I think it depends on the person, but considering that the previous flow is a triangle, I think that swapping will be a more comfortable flow

03:08:113 - It's a personal suggestion, but you can create a lingering sound by placing a simple reverse slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14438033/13b7

03:21:369 (1) - I think that it is better to move the white point to x:180 y:119 and x:88 y:130 as a shape

03:36:369 (5) - If you want to use the 03:35:322 (1,2) - 's shape, I think that moving it to the right will make it more balanced and opener

03:38:462 (2) - I want this to be SV1.60 for emphasis

03:40:729 (2,3,4) - The shape of the next stream is a round shape, so moving it to the left can emphasize the solution of the triangular flow and make it easier to hit. Optionally you can also build a triangle with 03:42:299 (1,2) - i.e x:131 y:27

03:50:671 (1) - I think that a straight line hit looks more beautiful if you move it to x:137 y:247 and make it perfect blanket. or SV1.60 T_T

04:05:322 (1) - It's too subjective, but you can direct the end by moving it to x:380 y:284(04:04:276 (5) - 's tail), for example, and I want to move it to incorporate the horizontal flow into the last passage. Somewhat difficult to read.