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00:00:678 (678|1,678|0,1281|1,1281|3) - should be the same as 00:03:090 (3090|0,3090|3,3693|2,3693|3) - and 00:01:130 (1130|2) - if this for vocal then should be 1/2 LN , so, something like this will do https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14357709/9396

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ah, my bad, thanks

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00:00:979 00:01:582 add a single note here for the little guitar sound

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ah, okay thankyou

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thankyou xD

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00:02:939 make this 1/2 ln? like at 00:03:542 when you followed the vocal

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i think 1/2 ln better xD

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00:03:831 (3831|0) - wondering why this was triple but 00:03:228 - double ? same sound tbh should be triple too or u can decide to remove the triple n make double as other

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done

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00:04:145 (4145|0,4145|2) - delete one of this two to maintain consistency

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okay done

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if you apply this #1349147 , then 00:04:296 - till 00:05:502 - I suggest to rearrange into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14357720/1ee8

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if you want to apply this u need to delete this note 00:05:577 -

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apply this, done

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00:05:426 drag a note up to 00:05:502 to follow into a triple for the impact? then move a few notes so it doesn't jack

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ah i see, okay ...

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00:13:944 - since u make this part like 00:01:884 - , be better u consist with it

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okay thanks ...

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00:16:959 00:17:110 make these double for the kick?

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umm i think double for kick is nice choice

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00:17:562 double for the kick

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done xD

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00:19:057 (19057|2) - shouldn't jack n the jack was here 00:19:358 (19358|2) -

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done

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00:20:564 - double for kick

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done

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00:22:223 (22223|1,22373|1) - no jack lah like before -_-

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done

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00:23:579 (23579|1) - 00:27:197 (27197|1) - change col to make them become jack for consistency

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00:25:552 (25552|0,25552|1) - make it single? since you make 00:35:200 - single

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ah, you're right, fixed ..

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Overall, There are some sections where the number of notes is inconsistent. For example, 00:30:514 - missed double since you've expressed this kick to double before at 00:20:866 - >

There are also sections in which the expression of sound is inconsistent. For example, 01:12:273 - you didn't expressed guitar code to NM.

So, I recommend that you check again what rhythm you accidentally missed or made an inconsistent pattern to prevent minor issue.

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01:35:338 (95338|2,95338|3,95941|2) - same but again, this problem is widespread throughout this difficulty, so I recommended you to look carefully from beginning to end.

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i think this part is already consistent

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but on this part 01:12:273 - i appreciate it , thanks

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I think it's necessary to separate 00:36:695 (36695|3,36695|2) - because the snares 00:36:393 (36393|1,36393|0,36544|2,36544|1) - are obviously louder than the drum so there's need to distinguish them

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okay

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00:41:984 (41984|1) - change with 1/1 LN

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oki

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00:44:095 pattern suggestion, since you started mapping 00:42:889 with 3 syllables then a fourth ln, I think you should continue it. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14097513/d660

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thankyou for your suggest

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00:46:808 - need to add a note here and 00:47:713 - need to be triple so http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14357757/049e

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okay

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00:52:009 (52009|3,52009|2) - ???? what r these? delete

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00:52:085 (52085|0) - move to col 4

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00:52:235 - double

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done

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00:52:223 - single enough n 00:52:223 (52223|2,52373|1,52524|2) - change to LN for transition n vocal emphasize

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done

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00:52:373 2 notes here instead of 00:52:223 because of the clap

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thankyou

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00:54:484 (54484|0) - should be end at 00:54:635. If you accept, It can get better to place 2 notes at 00:54:635

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okay thankyou

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00:54:484 - double n 00:54:785 - triple, kick n snare

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ok

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00:57:047 - should be double imo since it share the same sound like 00:57:197 - . suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14414876/f643

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fixed

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00:57:197 - triple snare

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ok

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00:57:800 Drum-snare here. 3 notes please

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done

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01:00:212 - should be double. how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14414925/85eb ?+

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it's confort when i put it double ?

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wut? :v welp, the pattern is up to you but that spot need to be double since its the same thing like 01:00:815 -

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https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14414942/aa78 this also works fine to me

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fixed

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01:01:419 (61419|2) - I think it should be also a LN to keep consistency with 01:01:117 (61117|1,61117|0) - because they are same sounds

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as same as 01:24:333 (84333|2) -

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thankyou

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01:01:582 - idk why u make this as trill but this was not supposed to be trill ,for sure.. or u can make like this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14338816/d2bc but it's up to you tho, since this was hardest diff on ur spread, or u can make a better and fit pattern on it

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ohh thanks for your suggest, to be honest, I'm having a little problem in this part.

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or if you want to make a stair then https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14357769/c0c0

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okay done

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01:06:632 - add 1 note ? or nah, but i fell like here has piano sound

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i hear it too, thankyou

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01:06:770 (66770|1,66846|2,66846|0,66846|3) - not consistent with what you have before at 00:57:047 - . suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14414889/2ce6

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thank you

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01:06:846 - triple as snare

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ok

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01:07:449 - till 01:08:504 - a little bit inconsistent with 00:57:800 - till 00:58:856 - . suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14415046/b62b

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fixed

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01:09:107 - till 01:11:368 - is not consistent with what you have at 00:59:459 - till 01:01:720 - . suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14414903/e96c https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14414906/8c0b

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okay, thank you for your suggest

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01:09:120 - triple ?

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like 01:08:517 sound, right .. okay fixed

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Comparing 01:11:368 to 01:01:720 - I thought 01:11:368 was a bit strange because of the lack of consistency. Since 01:11:670 - is appropriate with double LN since its vocal but also kick sound, but 01:11:821 - doesn't have any vocal, kick sound but only increasing laser sound.

The problem can be solved for now while maintaining 01:11:670 (71670|2,71670|3) - and adding a slight stream pattern like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14422421/7bb6 , but is not recommended very much. This is because the pattern of anchor, which is not good to see how it is made, is formed unconditionally.

Therefore, I recommend that you just follow the stream pattern of 01:01:720 - Or you can create a completely new pattern.

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i think 01:01:720 - isn't recommended to follow the stream pattern, because in this part i expressing a vocal sound, that's why i put long note on this part.

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fixed for consistensy

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01:15:740 - single only hat

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done

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missing triple 01:20:577 - 01:21:180 - 01:21:783 - 01:22:386 - and etc like u did on first kiai in 00:58:265 -

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ah okay, sorry for my missing OwO , fixed

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or anything that you think its good

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sound's good, i'll fixed it

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01:23:127 missing notes here

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ah, my bad, thanks

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01:24:497 - same issue like i notice before about the trill

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okay, thanks

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01:25:238 no drum or snare here please delete some notes

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okay

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do you have suggest on this part ?

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It's better that 2 notes appear continuously in the same col in order to play well and look better

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like this ? osu.ppy.sh/ss/14384253/f7f7

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https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14384467/ce3b nah, i know what you mean

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updates

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01:30:062 (90062|0,90212|1) - I know this section is in the climax section of this beatmap but imo its better to delete it for consistency

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fixed

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fixed

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big thanks for this , done

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01:43:190 - till end, you can use this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14357792/586f

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done

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