00:02:229 (1,2,3,4) - I want to suggest you do like this. And that 2-3-4 was the same spacing.(subjective) https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/642349305113477126/643394835314638853/screenshot690.jpg
00:07:175 (7,1,4,1,2) - why change the rhythm? I think it would be normal with a slider.(subjective)
00:07:654 (2,3,4,5) - It could be hard to notice for you (rank), but patterns like this break the flow and are annoying to play. Try to keep consistent movement whenever you can
00:08:132 (3,5) - Avoid visual overlaps like this, it looks clustered. Try to place objects in similar visual spacing from each other
00:18:026 (3,4) - Tilt straight sliders by the same degree unless they make a structure, otherwise it will be inconsistent
you can put slider on 00:38:611 (3) , then the sound will be justified.
00:49:941 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - It looks ugly. for example, I tried to do something(subjective): https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/642349305113477126/643434259809566739/screenshot692.jpg https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/642349305113477126/643434559777800196/screenshot693.jpg
00:55:846 (5,6) - Listen here please. You can put the slider on voice and continue with jumps to the sounds.