00:09:871 (5,6,1) - Since others like 00:10:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - were a single combo, mind doing the same here too? And besides, I think placing the 1/2 and 1/4 at the same place was a little less effective in transition.
00:09:871 (5) - можно нк поставить, чтобы конситентно было с 00:10:171 (1,1) -
но я бы вообще снесла нк отсюда: 00:10:171 (1,1) - , но эт сам решай
00:16:921 - There's an instrument sound here and considering it was expressed at 00:16:471 - it was a little unclear why you left it empty along the combo setting or anti jump. If you were intending to express the vocals as 00:18:421 (1,2) - , then I think it should be clearer with the combo or spacing etc.
00:32:521 (1,2) - маловат спейсинг между ними, поскольку здесь 00:31:621 (1,1,1) - я прям с усилиями дергаю курсором, а потом идет этот кик и вялый 1/1 вейв
00:55:621 (1,2,3) - Since this is something like 00:41:221 (1,1,1) - and you expressed this similarly at 00:53:221 (1,1,1) - , I think you can try something similar here too.