00:57:917 (1,2,3,4) - 00:59:329 (1,2,3,4) - 01:00:740 (1,2,3,4) - etc. expected more variation in the choruses instead of 1/2 spamming. Here are some examples you could try.
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I feel like currently the beginning lacks some hitsound feedback. I suggest adding some soft whistles like you had in the top diff and make the hitsounds consistent so that the 00:02:851 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , 00:08:498 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , etc. are hitnormals and 00:00:028 (1) - , 00:05:675 (1) - , etc. have whistles included