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Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 May 2012 at 02:38:08 PM

Artist: Konomi Suzuki
Title: CHOIR JAIL (TV Size)
Source: Tasogare Otome x Amnesia
Tags: osu tatakae ouendan, jdle07, anzo-nii, jonmaku_025
BPM: 181
Filesize: 17824kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. anzo-nii's Choir (4.99 stars, 247 notes)
  2. Chi's Choir (4.3 stars, 123 notes)
  3. Jdle07's Taiko Oni (4.92 stars, 564 notes)
  4. Jm's Choir (0.98 stars, 60 notes)
  5. Ouendan Deluxe (5 stars, 262 notes)
Download: Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (TV Size)
Download: Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Difficulties available:
Jm's Choir - 100% (by jonmaku_025)
Chi's Choir - 100% (by me)
Anzo-nii's Choir - 100% (by anzo-nii)
Jdle07's Taiko Oni - 100% (by jdle07)
Ouendan Deluxe - 100% (by Osu Tatakae Ouendan)

Song is from Tasogare Otome x Amnesia
Square Enix is really the best.

EDIT: THE VIDEO WAS CHANGED, DOWNLOAD AGAIN FOR THE NEW VIDEO.

FACTS:
1st fact is
TASOGARE OTOME x AMNESIA ROCKS!!
2nd fact is
THIS BEATMAP IS COMPOSED OF DIFFS MADE BY FILIPINOS :D
Nyquill
BPM is 181, offset is around 151? Get an offset check.

I know the BPM because I timed it this morning when I finished an insane diff xD.
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Nyquill wrote:

BPM is 181, offset is around 151? Get an offset check.

I know the BPM because I timed it this morning when I finished an insane diff xD.
thanks! you can post your diff here :D
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
making an insane+ because i was bored
will post when done
also please kudosu Nyquill's post
the .osz is 22.1 MB . your video size is a little too big. find something smaller
Normal diff has randomly placed notes, though i'm pretty sure you'll fix it later on
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

making an insane+ because i was bored
will post when done
also please kudosu Nyquill's post
the .osz is 22.1 MB . your video size is a little too big. find something smaller
Normal diff has randomly placed notes, though i'm pretty sure you'll fix it later on
Yeah I forgot to give kd, I'm still looking for a video converter that compresses the file, do you have any?
And I just posted the normal with randomly placed notes so someone can help me with the bpm and offset.
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
your deluxe is here
now give me kudosu $3.00
don't kudosu lol
is my message too short
btw there should be a "(TV Size)" in the title. before you change that and reupload just gonna let you know that maps duplicate when you do that so better find a way around it first.

Download: Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (_-Chihara-_) [Ouendan Deluxe].osu
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

your deluxe is here
now give me kudosu $3.00
don't kudosu lol
is my message too short
btw there should be a "(TV Size)" in the title. before you change that and reupload just gonna let you know that maps duplicate when you do that so better find a way around it first.
LOL this post should have a kd because you gave your diff haha. Yeah I forgot about that, well I'll just finish the map before changing it to (TV Size)
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
1. I'd like to keep the diff name Ouendan Deluxe please. [Insane+(Ouendan Deluxe)] looks rather unclean
2. Please only kudosu for timing help/mods. Not for guest diffs
3. thanks to Odaril for denying my kudosu *runs*
4. reminding you about that video
5. reminding you to make an easy
6. ??
7. profit
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

1. I'd like to keep the diff name Ouendan Deluxe please. [Insane+(Ouendan Deluxe)] looks rather unclean
2. Please only kudosu for timing help/mods. Not for guest diffs
3. thanks to Odaril for denying my kudosu *runs*
4. reminding you about that video
5. reminding you to make an easy
6. ??
7. profit
haha, still looking out for a video converter XD, ok I'll put the name back, haha
jonmaku_025
wow, you got ahead of me on uploading this song couz XD. Can I make the easy diff?
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

jonmaku_025 wrote:

wow, you got ahead of me on uploading this song couz XD. Can I make the easy diff?
Lol your online? pm me in-game, and yes you can make an easy diff :3
jonmaku_025

_-Chihara-_ wrote:

Lol your online? pm me in-game, and yes you can make an easy diff :3
dito ko na i post girl XD

geh lagay mo na

Download: Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (_-Chihara-_) [jm's choir].osu
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

jonmaku_025 wrote:

dito ko na i post girl XD

geh lagay mo na
thanks couz for the easy diff :3
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_
ok, I have edited the name of the song to TV Size
KoumeSh
My diff here, sorry it took so long...

Download: Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (_-Chihara-_) [anzo-nii's choir].osu
Jdle
~few mods
change the source "Tasogara Otome x Amnesia OP1" to "Tasogara Otome x Amnesia OP"
change the resolution of your background into 1024x768 (you can download the new resolution below if you want)
151 offset is little bit off.. so far what i get from average is 172 (this is not recommended)


ohh yeah my taiko guest diff is below including the taiko bg :)
SPOILER
ATTACH[Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (_-Chihara-_) [Jdle07's Taiko].osu]

Download: Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (_-Chihara-_) [Jdle07's Taiko].osu

Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

jdle07 wrote:

~few mods
change the source "Tasogara Otome x Amnesia OP1" to "Tasogara Otome x Amnesia OP"
change the resolution of your background into 1024x768 (you can download the new resolution below if you want)
SPOILER
[attachment=0:c5c01]Yuuko_001.jpg[/attachment:c5c01]
151 offset is little bit off.. so far what i get from average is 172 (this is not recommended)


ohh yeah my taiko guest diff is below including the taiko bg :)
SPOILER
[attachment=2:c5c01]Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (_-Chihara-_) [Jdle07's Taiko].osu[/attachment:c5c01]
[attachment=1:c5c01]taikoBG.jpg[/attachment:c5c01]
thanks for the taiko diff, the bg you were talking about seems a bit stretched so I think let's stick with the current background dimensions, maybe I'll go edit the bg and make it big.

THANKS AGAIN :D

EDIT: oh yeah, the source, I had a typo-error, it should be TASOGARE XD not tasogara :))
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

anzo-nii wrote:

My diff here, sorry it took so long...
haha, it's ok that it took you so long XD

anyways thanks for the diff :D
Siesta-_old
when i download map, i can see 3 level ...

where is others 0.0?
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Siesta- wrote:

when i download map, i can see 3 level ...

where is others 0.0?
I haven't uploaded the map fully sorry, but i'm uploading it now
Tsukasa
Hi~

JM's

00:02:139 - add a note
00:08:769 - add a note with clap sound and new combo
00:12:747 - add a note
00:24:018 (1,2) - add clap hitsound to the end of both sliders
00:31:974 - add a slider here that's ends on 00:32:637
00:33:631 (2) - move this to 00:33:456
00:34:626 (3) - new combo
00:42:913 (5) - new combo
00:45:648 (7) - move 2 grids down
00:47:222 - add a note
00:49:874 - add a note
00:53:852 (6) - new combo
01:01:145 (5) - new combo
01:22:209 - add a note

chi's

00:03:465 - add note + new combo
00:04:128 (1) - remove new combo if you've done that ^
00:07:775 (5) - new combo
00:27:001 (6) - new combo and move 1 grid to the left
00:28:327 (8) - move 1 grid to the right
00:33:631 (4) - should be at 00:33:797
00:34:128 (5) - ^after this replace the slider with a note at 00:34:294

anzo's
Isn't HP drain 8 too much or it's just me?

00:08:106 (4) - move center waypoint up by 1 grid
00:25:344 (5) - put it at 00:25:178 and pull it closer to 4
00:27:996 (4) - ^ (only this time it's 4 :3)
00:58:493 (7) - new combo
01:02:139 (5) - ^

Deluxe
Isn't HP drain 8 torture enough? ._.
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

thenewearth wrote:

Hi~

JM's

00:02:139 - add a note
00:08:769 - add a note with clap sound and new combo
00:12:747 - add a note
00:24:018 (1,2) - add clap hitsound to the end of both sliders
00:31:974 - add a slider here that's ends on 00:32:637
00:33:631 (2) - move this to 00:33:456
00:34:626 (3) - new combo
00:42:913 (5) - new combo

thenewearth wrote:

00:45:648 (7) - move 2 grids down
when you said move 2 grids down, does it mean, just move freely or with distance snapping?

thenewearth wrote:

00:47:222 - add a note
00:49:874 - add a note
00:53:852 (6) - new combo
01:01:145 (5) - new combo
01:22:209 - add a note

chi's

00:03:465 - add note + new combo
00:04:128 (1) - remove new combo if you've done that ^
00:07:775 (5) - new combo
00:27:001 (6) - new combo and move 1 grid to the left
00:28:327 (8) - move 1 grid to the right
00:33:631 (4) - should be at 00:33:797
00:34:128 (5) - ^after this replace the slider with a note at 00:34:294

anzo's
Isn't HP drain 8 too much or it's just me?

00:08:106 (4) - move center waypoint up by 1 grid
00:25:344 (5) - put it at 00:25:178 and pull it closer to 4
00:27:996 (4) - ^ (only this time it's 4 :3)
00:58:493 (7) - new combo
01:02:139 (5) - ^

Deluxe
Isn't HP drain 8 torture enough? ._.
thanks for the MOD :D, really helps me a lot, haha, I think I'll just ask OTO about his HP Drain, maybe he would suggest something about it

kd for your post :)

gonna fix this later after lunch :D
Tsukasa
Use distance snapping. w/out it it's going to be VERY hard
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

thenewearth wrote:

Use distance snapping. w/out it it's going to be VERY hard
thanks again, anyways gonna edit now offline. :) I'll just update it later.
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

thenewearth wrote:

Hi~

JM's

01:22:209 - add a note
at this part, uhhh, you sure? it would look like this http://puu.sh/pSrU

I don't think it's quite ok... hehe

EDIT:

thenewearth wrote:

00:27:996 (4) - ^ (only this time it's 4 :3)
00:58:493 (7) - new combo
what do you mean by 4 :3?

LOL I got it now XD
jonmaku_025
shoots a star
Wylo
[General]
Source is "Tasogare Otome x Amnesia".
__________________

[Video]
Choir Jail - Konomi Suzuki.avi
14.4 MB, proper encode, taken from episode 2 of Hadena Subs and MUCH better quality.
Offset is 0 ms.
__________________

[Jm's Choir]
00:06:780 (5) - Put clap instead on repeat and finish at slider end.
01:20:371 (1) - Move to 01:20:206, end at 01:21:200.
01:22:029 (2) - Move to 01:21:697, end at 01:22:029.
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[Chi's Choir]
00:08:438 (3) - Get rid of finish here.
00:08:106 (2) - Finish here instead.
__________________

[Jdle07's Taiko Oni]
I don't play Taiko but isn't it preferable for the SV to be set at 1.40?
__________________

[anzo-nii's choir]
I think "anzo-nii's Choir" is better.
Use these volumes, currently it's a bit too loud:

00:30:482 - Add a circle here and stack it on 00:30:648 (5) for better readability.
__________________

[Ouendan Deluxe]
Maybe these volumes? Same case as above.

__________________

Overall nice mapset. Hoping to see this ranked soon. Starred.
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

doomed151 wrote:

[General]
Source is "Tasogare Otome x Amnesia".
__________________

[Video]
Choir Jail - Konomi Suzuki.avi
14.4 MB, proper encode, taken from episode 2 of Hadena Subs and MUCH better quality.
Offset is 0 ms.
__________________

[Jm's Choir]
00:06:780 (5) - Put clap instead on repeat and finish at slider end.
01:20:371 (1) - Move to 01:20:206, end at 01:21:200.
01:22:029 (2) - Move to 01:21:697, end at 01:22:029.
__________________

[Chi's Choir]
00:08:438 (3) - Get rid of finish here.
00:08:106 (2) - Finish here instead.
__________________

[Jdle07's Taiko Oni]
I don't play Taiko but isn't it preferable for the SV to be set at 1.40?
__________________

[anzo-nii's choir]
I think "anzo-nii's Choir" is better.
Use these volumes, currently it's a bit too loud:

00:30:482 - Add a circle here and stack it on 00:30:648 (5) for better readability.
__________________

[Ouendan Deluxe]
Maybe these volumes? Same case as above.

__________________

Overall nice mapset. Hoping to see this ranked soon. Starred.
Thanks for your mods :D, btw, what video converter did you use? I loved the quality of the video you gave me.

gonna fix it now :)
Wylo

_-Chihara-_ wrote:

Thanks for your mods :D, btw, what video converter did you use? I loved the quality of the video you gave me.

gonna fix it now :)
You're welcome.

Encoder is Handbrake (http://handbrake.fr/)
It can burn-in SSA subs too. Takes a bit of tweaking to get good quality and small size.
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

doomed151 wrote:

You're welcome.

Encoder is Handbrake (http://handbrake.fr/)
It can burn-in SSA subs too. Takes a bit of tweaking to get good quality and small size.
Thanks again for the converter this time XD
I wanted to kd your post but kd's are only for mods XD, I've tried to kd last time a post it was rejected XD
Wylo
I think offset is 168.

Also:
AudioLeadIn: 1750
Don't kudosu.
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

doomed151 wrote:

I think offset is 168.

Also:
AudioLeadIn: 1750
Don't kudosu.
lol thanks again XD :)

fixed it now
Cygnus
A FULL MOD FOR MY COUNTRYMEN!

This mod is not yet finished though, I'll get back on to this next weekend cause my mom's about to blast. x.x

  • GUIDELINES
  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
SPOILER
  1. Why is there no "No Video" Download? Please do a full mod after this mod set-up.

  2. Your background seems to be 1365x768. It must be 1024x768. Here's resized image, just replace this one with the same file name of your current background. http://puu.sh/qTcP

  3. Inconsistent Kiai Times detected at Ouendan Deluxe. Please remove the 2nd Kiai Time to make consistencies.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY
SPOILER
  1. 00:02:156 (2) - Bad overlap. Move this where it can be seen easily by players.

  2. 00:09:449 (2) - Please fix this heart-shaped slider. I prefer moving the end slider away from the start point of slider.

  3. 00:12:764 - Watch your spacing. Please use distance snap.

  4. 00:24:035 (1) - Please make this slider aligned straight.

  5. 00:29:339 (3) - Fix this heart slider too.

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XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXXHARD

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXXINSANE

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXSTORYBOARD

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  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~
  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
Wylo

Philippines wrote:

Your background seems to be 1365x768. It must be 1024x768. Here's resized image, just replace this one with the same file name of your current background. http://puu.sh/qTcP]
You made it worse.
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Philippines wrote:

A FULL MOD FOR MY COUNTRYMEN!

This mod is not yet finished though, I'll get back on to this next weekend cause my mom's about to blast. x.x

  • GUIDELINES
  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
SPOILER
  1. Why is there no "No Video" Download? Please do a full mod after this mod set-up.

  2. Your background seems to be 1365x768. It must be 1024x768. Here's resized image, just replace this one with the same file name of your current background. http://puu.sh/qTcP

  3. Inconsistent Kiai Times detected at Ouendan Deluxe. Please remove the 2nd Kiai Time to make consistencies.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY
SPOILER
  1. 00:02:156 (2) - Bad overlap. Move this where it can be seen easily by players.

  2. 00:09:449 (2) - Please fix this heart-shaped slider. I prefer moving the end slider away from the start point of slider.

  3. 00:12:764 - Watch your spacing. Please use distance snap.

  4. 00:24:035 (1) - Please make this slider aligned straight.

  5. 00:29:339 (3) - Fix this heart slider too.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXXHARD

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXXINSANE

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXSTORYBOARD

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXXCOMMENT

  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~
  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
lol thanks for the mod XD, I think I'll fix the bg myself XD, i don't want to distort the background,

also thanks for shooting many stars :)

I'll fix this later after my dinner.
KoumeSh
Hope I did a better improvement in the BG: (about the JPEG's quality, it's puush's fault for this, anyway)

It's PNG, btw... http://puu.sh/r01a, (save it as JPEG in your PC's editor, puu.sh always reducing the quality hmfff~~)

Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

anzo-nii wrote:

Hope I did a better improvement in the BG: (about the JPEG's quality, it's puush's fault for this, anyway)

It's PNG, btw... http://puu.sh/r01a, (save it as JPEG in your PC's editor, puu.sh always reducing the quality hmfff~~)

lol, I already have an edited image like that too, I used fireworks then edit the Canvas only :) the problem was, my internet was cutted off last night XDD

thanks though :)

kd for you

EDIT : SUBMITTING NOW :)

lol i've been having troubles for submitting the map look here, I hope I could submit it now >.<

Garven
Posting since Chihara wanted me to.

Just did a quick half-play of the ouendan difficulty...

It needs work. The patterns are nonexistant - it feels all randomly placed. There are spacing changes in odd places, slider velocity changes... it's really messy. What's worse is that it's at AR9, so it's hard to tell where to go next. Work on improving your patterns, and also try to avoid overlapping notes so much. It makes things really messy and hard to read and not very fun to play.
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Garven wrote:

Posting since Chihara wanted me to.

Just did a quick half-play of the ouendan difficulty...

It needs work. The patterns are nonexistant - it feels all randomly placed. There are spacing changes in odd places, slider velocity changes... it's really messy. What's worse is that it's at AR9, so it's hard to tell where to go next. Work on improving your patterns, and also try to avoid overlapping notes so much. It makes things really messy and hard to read and not very fun to play.
thanks for the mod! :D
Osu Tatakae Ouendan

Garven wrote:

Posting since Chihara wanted me to.

Just did a quick half-play of the ouendan difficulty...

It needs work. The patterns are nonexistant - it feels all randomly placed. There are spacing changes in odd places, slider velocity changes... it's really messy. What's worse is that it's at AR9, so it's hard to tell where to go next. Work on improving your patterns, and also try to avoid overlapping notes so much. It makes things really messy and hard to read and not very fun to play.
AR 8 feels too slow. i don't know. makes me wish there was an AR 8.5 . i'll set it at 8 anyway

here. change the diff name as well please.

Download: Konomi Suzuki - CHOIR JAIL (TV Size) (_-Chihara-_) [Ouendan Deluxe2].osu
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

AR 8 feels too slow. i don't know. makes me wish there was an AR 8.5 . i'll set it at 8 anyway

here. change the diff name as well please.
Thanks :3, btw, what would be the name of your diff? is it with 2 in the end? or just the same.
Osu Tatakae Ouendan

_-Chihara-_ wrote:

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

AR 8 feels too slow. i don't know. makes me wish there was an AR 8.5 . i'll set it at 8 anyway

here. change the diff name as well please.
Thanks :3, btw, what would be the name of your diff? is it with 2 in the end? or just the same.
Same
again, no kudosu for post. find a BAT to deny that
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

Same
again, no kudosu for post. find a BAT to deny that
lol, sorry, haha, I'll find Garven to deny that kd, I always forget the rules about giving kd's.
jonmaku_025
yeah ALL-FILIPINO map, I hope this gets ranked sooner :3 can't wait for this.

Yoh chihara, text me if my diff needs modding huh! :)
Cygnus
Here's a new mod for this map.

  • GUIDELINES
  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.

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SPOILER
  1. Inconsistent Combo Color. Try to make them the same?
  2. Almost all green lines are unsnapped. Please snap them.

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SPOILER
  1. 00:06:797 (5) - Move it down a bit to avoid the overlapping.

  2. 00:33:151 (1,2) - Please move this away from the next note.

  3. 00:47:239 (5) - Please don't hide this behind a slider, it would be too hard for beginners to read this note.

  4. 00:55:195 (2) - Fix the Spacing.

  5. 01:11:107 (1) - I suggest you replace this slider with a circle then add a slider at 01:11:770 that ends at 01:12:433.

  6. 01:17:074 (6) - Remove this circle. I suggest you start your spinner here instead.

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SPOILER
  1. 00:19:063 (1) - I suggest you start this spinner at 00:18:897.

  2. 00:22:709 - Remove Break Time on this section.

  3. 00:31:991 (8) - New combo for this note. Then remove new combo on the next note.

  4. 00:36:300 (4) - Avoid this little overlap please. This makes the spacing consistent too.

  5. 01:02:488 (3) - Fix this little blanket to make the gameplay better.

  6. 01:14:919 (3) - Please try not to stack this note to make it a bit more easier to read by players.

  7. 01:22:709 (1) - Start your spinner at 01:22:543.

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SPOILER
  1. 00:24:532 (3) - Remove the Red Point of the slider. Make a right click on that point to turn it to a white one. Preview

  2. 00:30:333 (3) - Move this nearer to the previous note.

  3. 00:55:029 (1,2) - The spacing O.O Try to reduce a bit.

  4. 01:12:267 (4) - This note is too far away from the previous one. Please fix the spacing.

  5. 01:26:355 (Whole Combo) - How bout making a perfect square pattern than a rectangle? :O

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SPOILER
  1. 00:34:643 (1) - Weird slider. I think a curve one will do.

  2. 00:38:123 (7) - Move to the right? Sup to you how many grids.

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SPOILER
  1. The mapset was okay. But I believe it needs a bit more improvement with sliders. The way the curve sliders go is a bit awkward and weird. Pero maganda pa din siya. I like anzo-nii's diff, nicely mapped.

  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~
  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Philippines wrote:

Here's a new mod for this map.

  • GUIDELINES
  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
SPOILER
  1. Inconsistent Combo Color. Try to make them the same?
  2. Almost all green lines are unsnapped. Please snap them.

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  1. 00:06:797 (5) - Move it down a bit to avoid the overlapping.

  2. 00:33:151 (1,2) - Please move this away from the next note.

  3. 00:47:239 (5) - Please don't hide this behind a slider, it would be too hard for beginners to read this note.

  4. 00:55:195 (2) - Fix the Spacing.

  5. 01:11:107 (1) - I suggest you replace this slider with a circle then add a slider at 01:11:770 that ends at 01:12:433.

  6. 01:17:074 (6) - Remove this circle. I suggest you start your spinner here instead.

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  1. 00:19:063 (1) - I suggest you start this spinner at 00:18:897.

  2. 00:22:709 - Remove Break Time on this section.

  3. 00:31:991 (8) - New combo for this note. Then remove new combo on the next note.

  4. 00:36:300 (4) - Avoid this little overlap please. This makes the spacing consistent too.

  5. 01:02:488 (3) - Fix this little blanket to make the gameplay better.

  6. 01:14:919 (3) - Please try not to stack this note to make it a bit more easier to read by players.

  7. 01:22:709 (1) - Start your spinner at 01:22:543.

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  1. 00:24:532 (3) - Remove the Red Point of the slider. Make a right click on that point to turn it to a white one. Preview

  2. 00:30:333 (3) - Move this nearer to the previous note.

  3. 00:55:029 (1,2) - The spacing O.O Try to reduce a bit.

  4. 01:12:267 (4) - This note is too far away from the previous one. Please fix the spacing.

  5. 01:26:355 (Whole Combo) - How bout making a perfect square pattern than a rectangle? :O

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  1. 00:34:643 (1) - Weird slider. I think a curve one will do.

  2. 00:38:123 (7) - Move to the right? Sup to you how many grids.

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  1. The mapset was okay. But I believe it needs a bit more improvement with sliders. The way the curve sliders go is a bit awkward and weird. Pero maganda pa din siya. I like anzo-nii's diff, nicely mapped.

  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~
  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
Thanks again :D i've already edited it, submitting it now, check if it's ok :)
Cygnus
I'll do another recheck when everyone is done with their diffs. Call me again when everything's done! :) :)
jonmaku_025
:O it looks like everything is done :3
Topic Starter
_-Chihara-_

Philippines wrote:

I'll do another recheck when everyone is done with their diffs. Call me again when everything's done! :) :)
Yoh sorry for being late :) finished it already :D.
jonmaku_025

_-Chihara-_ wrote:

Yoh sorry for being late :) finished it already :D.
YOH! what happen to you? tagal mo ndi nag oonline? tapos naba toh? hehe :3
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