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NicolArmarfi - Three Stars [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Shana Aisaka
467 posts
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Topic Starter
Shana Aisaka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 11 October, 2016 at 1:48:06 PM

Artist: NicolArmarfi
Title: Three Stars
Source: かたわ少女
Tags: - Magic Bomb - MerryNightmare Nicol Armarfi Hakamichi Shizune Shiina Mikado Misha Hisao Nakai Visual Novel Eroge Four Leaf Studios Katawa Shoujo Lily Satou Emi Ibarazaki Hanako Ikezawa
BPM: 85.8
Filesize: 4419kb
Play Time: 00:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (2.31 stars, 112 notes)
  2. Easy (0.94 stars, 48 notes)
  3. MBomb's Salad (1.68 stars, 79 notes)
  4. Normal (1.66 stars, 87 notes)
Download: NicolArmarfi - Three Stars
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Katawa Shoujo Shizune's Route ~ >w<"

PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD NEW GD ADDED&HITSOUND 09/6/2015

All Diff are done. Ready for mod .. I map this for fun! :3

Easy - by me.
Normal - by me.
Collab - by me & MerryNightmare
MBomb's Salad - by - Magic Bomb -

P/S A big thanks to cmn_891127! Help me a lot with my map! :oops:

10/6/2015 - Timing change
09/6/2015 - add new guest diff
08/6/2015 - change source,add hitsound thx to cmn_891127 :)
2/4/2013 - add hit sound
7/2/2013 - add video back
26/7/2012 - add SB
19/2/2012 - change the mp3 quality . 128kbps to 192kbps .
17/2/2012 - change video thx to cmn_891127 :D
11/2/2012 - add Normal diff
28/1/2012 - delete/change everything that useless thing
25/1/2012 - change artis & title name

People who mod my map! :D
  1. Miya :arrow: Timing help also the name of this mp3
  2. [CSGA]Ar3sgice
  3. arien666
  4. Kawayi Rika
  5. athiota33
  6. kosiga
  7. Byakugan249
  8. Sure@ykcarrot :arrow: Help Timing and Mod
  9. ikari_kyon <3
  10. cmn_891127 :arrow: IRC MOD :D <3
  11. Asgard :arrow: IRC MOD :) <3
  12. Frostmourne
  13. l1106188
  14. hillaryzx <3
  15. LaceWingfield <3
  16. Niva
  17. BeatofIke
  18. JoJo <3 Help Timing + Mod
  19. Cilvery
  20. Flower@iroseka
  21. kusano
  22. Ayu
  23. kurohana
  24. Tari@Taris
  25. Kirino Kousaka <3
  26. smallboat
  27. Natsu
  28. newtoniorock8
  29. Lanturn
  30. RandomEffect
  31. -Neptune- CTB's Mod
  32. [ Evil ]
  33. BoberOfDarkness CTB's Mod
  34. -Hakurei-
  35. TicClick Timing Help :)
  36. afk98 CTB's Mod
  37. JBHyperion
  38. DragonSlayer96 CTB's Mod
Thanks for your mod!! :D
Last edited by Shana Aisaka , edited 98 times in total.
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Hi. Timing assistance here from #modreqs :)

BPM 86
Offset 2172 (i'm not very confident about this thought, it seems it will be miss +- 5-10ms)

Also this is a waltz song. So the time signature is 3/4.



Ok, that's all for the timing. Keep the good work, and good luck :)
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shana Aisaka
Miya wrote this!!

Miya wrote:

Hi. Timing assistance here from #modreqs :)

BPM 86
Offset 2172 (i'm not very confident about this thought, it seems it will be miss +- 5-10ms)

Also this is a waltz song. So the time signature is 3/4.



Ok, that's all for the timing. Keep the good work, and good luck :)


Geez, Thanks a lot :D
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue

well it's short song, not much I can mod, give a star

Easy

  1. 00:11:241 (2) - 1 grid up
  2. 00:38:451 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot166-3.jpg make this slider like this
Collab

  1. 00:44:032 (7) - why whistle ? finish better ?
  2. 00:46:823 (7) - ^
that's all

Good luck~
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shana Aisaka
Someone wrote this!!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

well it's short song, not much I can mod, give a star

Easy

  1. 00:11:241 (2) - 1 grid up
  2. 00:38:451 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot166-3.jpg make this slider like this
Collab

  1. 00:44:032 (7) - why whistle ? finish better ?
  2. 00:46:823 (7) - ^
that's all

Good luck~

Thanks for your mod and star! >///<"
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
btw, where did you get this song?
I'm not confident about the artist name and the tittle name. It seems wrong.

Edit:
I have found the original artist of the song and the tittle too. It's true that your tittle and artist name is wrong.
Artist NicolArmarfi
Tittle Three Stars

I got it from downloading the original soundtrack of that vn in vn development blog : http://katawashoujo.blogspot.com/2012/0 ... p-for.html.
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shana Aisaka
Miya Wrote this AGAIN!!

Miya wrote:

btw, where did you get this song? I got it from somewhere... xD
I'm not confident about the artist name and the tittle name. It seems wrong. yeah, i know that @w@"

Edit:
I have found the original artist of the song and the tittle too. It's true that your tittle and artist name is wrong.
Artist NicolArmarfi
Tittle Three Stars

I got it from downloading the original soundtrack of that vn in vn development blog : http://katawashoujo.blogspot.com/2012/0 ... p-for.html.


Geez..! Thanks Again..! >///<"
You really helps a lot :D

Edit: Seems like i can't change the title & artist on this map. @w@" Can't upload since i got 2 maps(Pending) already. =///='
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
You can change the title & artist name via full submit o.o
just be sure web menu on editor is available or your map will be duplicated.
Future reference please read this : viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shana Aisaka
Miya Wrote this AGAIN & AGAIN!!

Miya wrote:

You can change the title & artist name via full submit o.o
just be sure web menu on editor is available or your map will be duplicated.
Future reference please read this : viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

lol... Really, Thanks a lot ! again... >///<"
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
you're welcome . It was nice to help you. :)
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shana Aisaka

Miya wrote:

you're welcome . It was nice to help you. :)

>///<" makes me feel so happy ~ <3
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
oh don't forget to change the title of this thread. Your title is still an old one :)
arien666
6,275 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
Actually, BPM seems little fast so some beats on last part are out-beat'd. So, why don't you adjust BPM into 85.87 :3?

[Easy]
00:44:096 (4) - [Suggestion] Nothing wrong about general thing but could you make it more spacing between peaks?
00:49:685 (2) - Route reverse into previous slider's way might be little hard on [Easy] orz

[Collab]
Actually, some spacing things are not same which are not seem like jump ;___; If possible, why don't you adjust spacing things on them?



meow :3
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Shana Aisaka ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~


Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove video sound pls.
  2. You need make normal diff,Because of the difficulty of unbalanced.

[Collab]


  1. 00:28:334 (4) - 1 grid up.

That's all ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shana Aisaka
arien666 wrote this~

arien666 wrote:

[General]
Actually, BPM seems little fast so some beats on last part are out-beat'd. So, why don't you adjust BPM into 85.87 :3?

[Easy]
00:44:096 (4) - [Suggestion] Nothing wrong about general thing but could you make it more spacing between peaks?
00:49:685 (2) - Route reverse into previous slider's way might be little hard on [Easy] orz

[Collab]
Actually, some spacing things are not same which are not seem like jump ;___; If possible, why don't you adjust spacing things on them?



meow :3

Thanks for mod... :D

Kawayi Rika wrote this~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Shana Aisaka ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~


Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove video sound pls.
  2. You need make normal diff,Because of the difficulty of unbalanced.

[Collab]


  1. 00:28:334 (4) - 1 grid up.

That's all ~

Good luck ~ ;)

Thanks for mod ~ I will fix it later.. :) (if i got time.. @w@")
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
Hi! :D

[General]

I think this map need more than 1 BPM,but I'm not sure.
I suggest you to make 1 more diff,since this song length only 00:57:391

[Easy]

00:16:125 (1) - Maybe add whistle?
00:21:009 (1) - RNC?
00:21:706 (2) - NC?
00:24:497 (4) - ^
00:26:590 (1) - RNC?
00:27:288 (1) - NC?
00:38:451 (2) - I think this long slider doesn't really fit the song
00:41:939 - Decreas the volume? It's too noisy
00:42:637 (3) - NC?
00:44:032 (4) - Same as 00:38:451
00:49:613 (2) - Overlapped with (1)

[Collab]

00:27:288 (1) - Add whistle?
00:29:730 (6) - Remove whistle?
00:30:078 (7) - Add whistle?
00:41:939 - Same as easy
00:44:032 (7) - Really,normal-finish hitsound doesn't really fit the song
00:46:125 (5) - Add whistle?
00:46:823 (7) - Same as 00:44:032
00:47:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think,anti-jump is fit more for this part. Since this part is slow.

That's all!~
Good luck :D
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
hi~ Shana Aisaka :)

from my m4m queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. I think that a difference of star rating is too big :( . maybe Collab diff is Hard diff ? so need Normal diff. ><;
  2. Song Setup - Colors - color of combo color 1 and 2 is too near :? Please change the order of the colors. maybe ↓ is better.
    Combo1 : 255,128,255
    Combo2 : 45,88,228
    Combo3 : 128,64,0
    Combo4 : 0,128,255
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:171 (1,2) - Why does only here different in DS ? Use change DS 0.8x
  2. 00:11:939 (1) - remove NC and 00:12:637 (2) - add NC
  3. 00:19:613 (4) - add NC and 00:21:009 (1) - remove NC
  4. 00:22:404 (3) - add NC
  5. 00:24:497 (5) - add NC and 00:26:590 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:36:358 (5) - add NC and 00:37:055 (1) - remove NC and 00:38:451 (2) - add NC
  7. 00:38:451 (2) - more beautiful curve ↓try
    208,216,38451,2,0,B|106:216|63:139|100:51|188:15|264:57|264:159,1,400,0|4
  8. 00:42:637 (3) - add NC
  9. 00:44:032 (4) - slider start 00:44:730 and 00:44:032 - add note is better. ( because it is not good that there is KIAI time end&start in a slider )
  10. 00:49:613 (2) - not overlap. map of the overlap is not good for beginners >:(
[Collab]
  1. 00:09:846 (1) - remove NC
  2. 00:15:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please align the DS. http://puu.sh/fkLY ↓code
    SPOILER
    440,192,15078,5,0
    368,288,15427,1,0
    296,192,15776,1,0
    224,288,16125,1,0
    152,192,16474,1,0
    224,96,16823,1,0
  3. 00:18:567 (3) - Suggestion: Ctrl+R
  4. 00:19:265 (4) - add NC
  5. 00:29:381 (6) - add NC and 00:30:427 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:46:823 (7) - add NC ?
I think that some offset or BPM do not match >:( But I can not check it. sorry... :(

Good luck Nyan~ :)
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur in-game request :)

General:
CLEAR!

Easy:
00:02:172(1,2) - itd flow nice if u can make these sliders curve like this?
00:05:660(2) - same as above but i think that ull get the idea
00:24:497(1) - since this is a calm and slow song, the finish is too loud. suggest that u reduce the finish to 10% or 20%. either will work.
00:38:451(2) - ^
00:44:032(2) - move it above the end of (1). i dont like how theyre overlapping.
00:48:218(1) - same as 00:05:660

Normal:
00:17:520(8,9) - make these curved sliders like this. it looks a lot nicer and fun IMO
00:29:381(1) - make this a curved slider to form a blanket around (2)
00:41:939(1) - the finish is too loud. reduce it to 20% like u did on the 1st finish.
00:44:730(1) - ^

Collab:
00:35:311(5) - make this a curved slider so that it can form a blanket around (6)
00:44:381(1) - again with the finish. its too loud. reduce it to 20%

this is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shana Aisaka
Forgot to wrote Fix All! Thanks! :D
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[General]
  1. Timing off. BPM 85.850 / Offset 1 : 2172 (same as current), Offset 2 : 30826 (for fix metronome). And metronome should be 4/4
  2. Kawayi Rika already pointed it out. You should remove audio from the video.
  3. I suggest using muted soft-sliderslide.wav

[Collab]
AR 8 in BPM 86? Come on, it's not funny. I recommend AR-1 highly.
00:04:613 (2) - No reason to add circle here due to you silenced it. Just remove it. Hitting silenced circle = meh. Or You'd better make a slider from previous note.
00:09:148 (4) - ^ yeah same.
00:41:939 (1) - Too loud! Decrease volume by 30 points.
00:44:032 (7) - I'm really suprised at this looooud normal hitfinish. Would you please change the sampleset and volume?
00:46:823 (1) - ^


[Normal]
You have unnecessary timing points.
00:23:451 - Delete
00:40:718 - ^
00:41:241 - ^

00:04:613 (5) - Start from next white tick
00:44:032 (5) - Same opinion with Collab diff. It's normal whistle but whatever.
00:46:823 (5) - ^


[Easy]
00:42:637 (1,2) - Spacing. Also slider overlapping is ugly with big circle. You'd better find other position. Example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/243563


I believe you can improve your map, specially formation of notes.
Good luck anyway. ;3
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