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Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)

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DarknessAngel
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月26日 at 上午 07:13:07

Artist: Fujiwara Marina
Title: Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)
Source: Zettai Junshu Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou!!
Tags: Softhouse-seal GRANDEE opening galgame hentai eroge galge bishoujo gal game bossandy R_a_i_n S_h_i_o_n
BPM: 220
Filesize: 15638kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Boss Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 624 notes)
  2. D.N.Angel (4.9 stars, 284 notes)
  3. Hard (5 stars, 264 notes)
  4. R a i n's Easy (2.43 stars, 104 notes)
  5. S h i o n's Normal (4.23 stars, 151 notes)
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd


『ぜったい遵守☆強制子作り許可証!!』 OP


I hope you will like it ~



R a i n's Easy - Done - by R a i n (1/27/2012)
S h i o n's Normal - Done - by S h i o n (1/30/2012)
Hard - Done - by me(1/26/2012)
D.N.Angel - Done - by me(1/22/2012)
Boss Taiko Oni - Done - by bossandy (2/02/2012)
Selee
OTZ...please upload again, I have trouble downloading this
S h i o n
卧槽 I 神图...
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

S h i o n wrote:

卧槽 I 神图...
fanzhen0019
timing试试看这个?
bpm 220.000
offset 2561

不过从01:11到01:13这一段可能有点off(这一段唱的本身就off?)
其他部分应该都还好吧OAO
只是建议 还是找找timing方面的专家吧lol
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

fanzhen0019 wrote:

timing试试看这个?
bpm 220.000
offset 2561

不过从01:11到01:13这一段可能有点off(这一段唱的本身就off?)
其他部分应该都还好吧OAO
只是建议 还是找找timing方面的专家吧lol
我一直在煩惱的就是01:11...
正在等待Selee的幫助
我不知道該不該給你KD...lol


Editted : 還是給好了
R a i n
Hi~

If you are OK, please I make guestdif
R a i n
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

R a i n wrote:

Done!
updated !

good diff ~ ;)

but some place are a little hard for Easy :O
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

抱歉久等了 >. <

可以的话加个slidertick, 然后帮我在01:02:833 01:03:379 01:03:924 加一下音效~ 我懒= =
不加slidertick也行 没什么问题~

good luck
bossandy
抱歉 剩下20%了 晚點再給你 先給Taiko BG
好了 抱歉讓你久等了>_<



Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [Boss Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

bossandy wrote:

抱歉 剩下20%了 晚點再給你 先給Taiko BG~
Taiko BG的話,用這張做吧↓




這樣才能達成每個難度不同的BG :3
不好意思,要你在做一次Taiko BG了..
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ DarknessAngel ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'opening,galgame and guest diff creator names' in tags.
  2. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video.
  3. You need change Source : Zettai Junshu Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou!!

[D.N.Angel]


  1. 00:07:470 (3) - Add new combo to here,because jump.
  2. 00:08:561 (3) - ^
  3. 00:26:151 (4) - Remove this note will be fine with me.
  4. 00:56:561 - Add note will be better.
  5. 01:23:676 (3) - Suggestion stack on 01:23:811.
  6. PS:我觉的这难度...不用板子根本玩不了...太多跳了(不能这么鬼畜).

[Hard]


  1. HP,OD+1
  2. 00:13:197 - Add clap.
  3. 00:30:651 (3,4) - Don't overlap, confusion here.

[S h i o n's Normal]


  1. AR+1 will be fun with me.
  2. 00:39:106 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.
  3. 01:02:561 (3) - Add finish.
  4. 01:09:651 - Add note will be better.

[R a i n's Easy]


  1. Change same offset as other diff.
  2. 00:02:560 (1) - Add finish.
  3. 00:06:924 (1) - ^
  4. 00:11:288 (1) - ^
  5. 00:20:015 - ^
  6. 00:33:106 - ^
  7. 00:38:561 - ^
  8. 00:47:288 - ^
  9. 01:13:448 - ^
  10. 01:22:176 - ^

That's all ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ DarknessAngel ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'opening,galgame and guest diff creator names' in tags. fixed
  2. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video. fixed
  3. You need change Source : Zettai Junshu Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou!! fixed

[D.N.Angel]


  1. 00:07:470 (3) - Add new combo to here,because jump. fixed
  2. 00:08:561 (3) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:26:151 (4) - Remove this note will be fine with me. fixed
  4. 00:56:561 - Add note will be better. fixed
  5. 01:23:676 (3) - Suggestion stack on 01:23:811. 放那裏玩起來不順,我改到其他地方了
  6. PS:我觉的这难度...不用板子根本玩不了...太多跳了(不能这么鬼畜).
    呵呵,我用滑鼠玩得挺開心的呢~

[Hard]


  1. HP,OD+1 fixed,啊咧,star rate = 4.96
  2. 00:13:197 - Add clap. fixed
  3. 00:30:651 (3,4) - Don't overlap, confusion here. 唔,我想保留這個
謝謝MOD~ :)


Editted:

Add tags,change source and cancel letterbox during breaks in R a i n's Easy and S h i o n's Normal
R a i n

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]


  1. Change same offset as other diff.
  2. 00:02:560 (1) - Add finish.
  3. 00:06:924 (1) - ^
  4. 00:11:288 (1) - ^
  5. 00:20:015 - ^
  6. 00:33:106 - ^
  7. 00:38:561 - ^
  8. 00:47:288 - ^
  9. 01:13:448 - ^
  10. 01:22:176 - ^
)
All fixed
thanks MOD~ :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[S h i o n's Normal]


  1. AR+1 will be fun with me. fixed
  2. 00:39:106 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here. fixed
  3. 01:02:561 (3) - Add finish. no for here, but 01:00:106 (3)
  4. 01:09:651 - Add note will be better. no, thanks

)
Thank you for mod ~
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

S h i o n wrote:

update !
And thanks star ~ m(_ _)m
Wafu
[-S h i o n's Normal-]

00:43:297 (Inherited Point) - Offset 43333

[-Hard-]

01:32:266 (4) - Please, make this slider awesome, not linear ^^

I think there is no lot of things to mod. :o Nice map, good luck.

And Taiko background is bugged. Here is fix, only add song name.. http://www.mediafire.com/?7nlso32zeljyinl
TW-KUMA01
[Taiko] 整體來說不錯 不過還是有點小問題

音效很小聲,要不要把每條線的音效都改成normal ?大概70%聽起來比較好

00:56:015 這裡遮到note了,個人是覺得這歌不太需要什麼變速的變化,維持1倍速我覺得比較好看

00:37:470 ~ 00:38:561 跟 00:46:197 ~ 00:47:288 我覺得沒必要下成這樣o.o 因為你別的部分下的沒有很難,然後這邊突然來一個大長串,會顯得有點突兀,可以試試看別的下法來處理這段音樂看看

01:32:879 這個轉盤不加反而比較舒服

大致上就這樣! 加油摟
Kryptogram
Hi there ! Here is my Mod

General:

- Make Taiko.jpg 800x600 since the other are 800x600

[R a i n's Easy]

00:07:470 (2,4) - More symetrical
328,72,7470,2,0,B|360:64|392:72|408:104|408:144,1,120,8|0
304,168,8560,1,8
272,272,9106,2,0,B|240:280|208:272|192:240|192:200,1,120,0|8
00:21:651 (5,6) - 1 grid to the left
00:28:470 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider
00:56:015 (1) - ^
01:00:379 (2) - ^
01:04:742 (1) - ^
01:17:811 (1) - ^

[S h i o n's Normal]

00:05:833 (4) - Add a inheriting section whit soft-slidertick2 http://puu.sh/fGrZ
00:10:197 (8) - Same here but like this http://puu.sh/fGsx
00:32:288 (3) - Add finish at the end of the slider
00:35:288 (7) - Move the tail of the slider to x:336 y :220 http://puu.sh/fGtw
00:43:297 (x) - This timeline its unsnnaped 2ms fix it
00:44:015 (3) - Add a inheriting section whit soft-slidertick2 in the first tick
01:21:084 (6) - Add a inheriting section whit soft-slidertick2 in both ticks

[D.N.Angel]

OD +1

00:20:424 (2) - Move to x:51 y:222
00:22:879 (3) - ctrl+j then move it to x:308 y:156 http://puu.sh/fGDu
01:00:379 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
01:00:924 (3) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:01:742 (1) - Add clap
01:02:288 (3) - ^
01:04:742 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
01:05:288 (2) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:06:106 (1) - Add clap
01:06:651 (4) - ^
01:06:924 (6) - Delete clap at the begin of the slider and add it in the end

[Hard]

01:09:106 (3) - Add finish
01:19:448 (3) - Delete clap
01:20:538 (3) - ^
01:28:175 (2) - ^
01:29:266 (3) - ^

Nice mapset :) ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck!
R a i n

[Te][Amo] wrote:


[b][R a i n's Easy]


00:07:470 (2,4) - More symetrical fixed
328,72,7470,2,0,B|360:64|392:72|408:104|408:144,1,120,8|0
304,168,8560,1,8
272,272,9106,2,0,B|240:280|208:272|192:240|192:200,1,120,0|8
00:21:651 (5,6) - 1 grid to the left no
00:28:470 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider fixed
00:56:015 (1) - ^ fixed
01:00:379 (2) - ^ fixed
01:04:742 (1) - ^ fixed
01:17:811 (1) - ^ fixed
[/b]
thanks MOD!

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

dragonxcz wrote:

[-Hard-]

01:32:266 (4) - Please, make this slider awesome, not linear ^^ It's for symmetry

I think there is no lot of things to mod. :o Nice map, good luck.

And Taiko background is bugged. Here is fix, only add song name.. http://www.mediafire.com/?7nlso32zeljyinl thanks ^^


[Te][Amo] wrote:

General:

- Make Taiko.jpg 800x600 since the other are 800x600 fixed

[D.N.Angel]

OD +1

00:20:424 (2) - Move to x:51 y:222 you are so tough :O,fixed
00:22:879 (3) - ctrl+j then move it to x:308 y:156 http://puu.sh/fGDu change another part
01:00:379 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider nonononono,bad idea... D:
01:00:924 (3) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:01:742 (1) - Add clap
01:02:288 (3) - ^
01:04:742 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
01:05:288 (2) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:06:106 (1) - Add clap
01:06:651 (4) - ^
01:06:924 (6) - Delete clap at the begin of the slider and add it in the end

[Hard]

01:09:106 (3) - Add finish fixed
01:19:448 (3) - Delete clap
01:20:538 (3) - ^
01:28:175 (2) - ^
01:29:266 (3) - ^ ... ... D:

Nice mapset :) ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck!

Okay,thank you for your modding ~ (:
Dino99
Mod here~ ;)

[R a i n's Easy]
  1. 00:04:742 (4) - Make the slider better? not linear.. :? Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236320
    168,256,4742,2,0,B|232:240|248:168,1,120,0|8
  2. 00:06:106 - Clap
  3. 00:10:470 - ^
  4. 01:16:993 (6) - ^
  5. 01:21:357 - ^
  6. 01:25:720 - ^
  7. 01:30:084 - ^
  8. 01:32:811 - Add a note with finish here? spinner start at 01:33:084? Do this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236328
    200,360,91993,2,0,B|152:352|120:320|112:288,1,120
    104,232,92811,1,4
    256,192,93084,12,0,95811
    You can try to add some whistle~ then it will be better~ :D
[S h i o n's Normal]
  1. 00:04:197 (5) - 形狀跟(4)一樣吧:3 覺得這樣好看些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236334
    72,268,4197,2,0,B|96:224|96:172,1,100,2|8
    176,168,4742,6,0,B|208:224|288:200,1,100,2|8
  2. 00:26:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - 換種排法吧o.o 這樣如何><?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236338
    364,112,26561,6,0,B|268:84,1,100,0|8
    260,164,27106,2,0,B|164:136,1,100,0|8
    88,112,27651,1,0
  3. 00:33:106 - Finish
  4. 00:36:379 (1) - 覺得有點怪怪的.. 感覺拖了一拍lol 試試轉盤在00:38:015結束? 然後分別在00:38:561 & 00:38:833 - 加個圈?
  5. 00:53:833 (1) - 5個折返...有點太多了._. 把它縮成3個 然後後面那兩個改圈? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236342
  6. 00:59:833 - 加個圈
  7. 01:17:402 - Clap
  8. 01:31:720 (1,2) - 這兩個形狀一樣吧~
[Boss Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:08:697 (2) - d
  2. 00:14:833 (4) - k
  3. 00:24:106 (3) - d
  4. 00:42:583 - 加個d?
  5. 01:07:197 (3) - k
    不太會mod太鼓>w< 都只是建議!!~~~ :D
[Hard]
  1. OD+1?
  2. 00:16:742 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣如何? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236349
  3. 00:36:379 (1) - 轉盤到00:37:197, 然後在00:37:470 ~ 00:38:561加8個圈(白線) 再做個音量漸增如何??
  4. 01:22:038 (5) - NC?
  5. 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:515 (3,4) - 位置對調?
  2. 00:33:106 (1,2) - 略坑了lol 移近點嘛?
  3. 00:36:379 (1) - 同Hard吧
  4. 00:46:879 & 00:47:015 & 00:47:151 - 加note吧 這樣感覺有點空..
  5. 00:56:561 (3) - 節奏不好._. 加個折返?
  6. 01:10:197 (2) - ^
  7. 01:13:008 - 加個圈
  8. 01:13:312 - ^
  9. 同H吧 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~
就這樣了~
祝早日RANK!!~~~ ;)
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

12BARRY21 wrote:

Mod here~ ;)

[Hard]
  1. OD+1? 還加啊,要5星了喔><
  2. 00:16:742 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣如何? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236349 原本的其實就OK了
  3. 00:36:379 (1) - 轉盤到00:37:197, 然後在00:37:470 ~ 00:38:561加8個圈(白線) 再做個音量漸增如何?? 是個好主意,不過這邊每個難度都放轉盤,所以為了一致...
  4. 01:22:038 (5) - NC? 就算要加也是加在前一個,但是不怎麼需要呢
  5. 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~ 恩,fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:515 (3,4) - 位置對調? 原本的比較好吧:O
  2. 00:33:106 (1,2) - 略坑了lol 移近點嘛? 保留
  3. 00:36:379 (1) - 同Hard吧 同Hard吧
  4. 00:46:879 & 00:47:015 & 00:47:151 - 加note吧 這樣感覺有點空.. 不了
  5. 00:56:561 (3) - 節奏不好._. 加個折返? ^
  6. 01:10:197 (2) - ^ fixed
  7. 01:13:008 - 加個圈 你好像沒注意到兩條紅線,有各自的時間差,所以我盡量少放note
  8. 01:13:312 - ^ ^
  9. 同H吧 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~ fixed
就這樣了~
祝早日RANK!!~~~ ;)
謝謝建議 ~ :)

Editted:
忘記補一句...還有star ~ !! ><
R a i n

12BARRY21 wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
  1. 00:04:742 (4) - Make the slider better? not linear.. :? Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236320
    168,256,4742,2,0,B|232:240|248:168,1,120,0|8
  2. 00:06:106 - Clap
  3. 00:10:470 - ^
  4. 01:16:993 (6) - ^
  5. 01:21:357 - ^
  6. 01:25:720 - ^
  7. 01:30:084 - ^
  8. 01:32:811 - Add a note with finish here? spinner start at 01:33:084? Do this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236328
    200,360,91993,2,0,B|152:352|120:320|112:288,1,120
    104,232,92811,1,4
    256,192,93084,12,0,95811
    You can try to add some whistle~ then it will be better~ :D
All fixed
thanks MOD~ :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

[Te][Amo]: All fixed~

12BARRY21: 改了那个finish, 至于spinner是要和别的难度统一。
Bobo_old
Description
In 20XX, the humans are about to go extinct...

Since the ratio of men and women is now 1:10721, the authorities establish a new law, "Sex New Law", and issue a card called "Free Sex Licence". Once a man shows his card to a girl, he will be able to have sex with her soon. However, it doesn't work...

The authorities decide to issue a new license to break the deadlock...
That's interesting ._.

[General]

This is obviously from a hentai game, add "Hentai" to the tags.

[Easy]

00:15:379 (2,3,4) - For a 220bpm song, this is actually quite hard for an Easy, just turn them into 2 sliders.
00:41:015 (2,3,4) - ^
00:49:742 (2,3,4) - ^

[Normal]

00:10:197 (8) - I would just play around with the slider points so that the startpoint and the endpoint aren't touching each other.
00:48:924 (4) - ^

[Hard]

The jumps in this diff are quite difficult.
And the patterns are really confusing.

00:19:606 (3,4) - Replace with a slider?
00:24:379 (3) - New combo.

Ehh...

[DNAngel]

Why not just call it Insane?

01:32:539 (4,1,2) -
Give NC to (4) and delete NC on (1), then form a triangle.

Hmm.... could use some work, good luck getting ranked.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Bobo wrote:

Description
In 20XX, the humans are about to go extinct...

Since the ratio of men and women is now 1:10721, the authorities establish a new law, "Sex New Law", and issue a card called "Free Sex Licence". Once a man shows his card to a girl, he will be able to have sex with her soon. However, it doesn't work...

The authorities decide to issue a new license to break the deadlock...
That's interesting ._.

[General]

This is obviously from a hentai game, add "Hentai" to the tags. fixed


[Hard]

The jumps in this diff are quite difficult.
And the patterns are really confusing. I don't think so

00:19:606 (3,4) - Replace with a slider? no
00:24:379 (3) - New combo. fixed

Ehh...

[DNAngel]

Why not just call it Insane? someone told me "D.N.Angel" is better than "Insane"

01:32:539 (4,1,2) -
Give NC to (4) and delete NC on (1), then form a triangle. no

Hmm.... could use some work, good luck getting ranked.
thanks sugguestion
R a i n

Bobo wrote:

[Easy]

00:15:379 (2,3,4) - For a 220bpm song, this is actually quite hard for an Easy, just turn them into 2 sliders.
00:41:015 (2,3,4) - ^
00:49:742 (2,3,4) - ^
no chenged
thanks MOD
L_P
hi, from mod queue

因为看不出问题,全部我都给建议罢了,跟不跟在于你,谢谢~

DNA, look through (i cant pass it haiz) i dont see mistake

Hard
00:11:151 (4) - http://puu.sh/gnqk this first, and then next pattern you can keep this (to make the player familiar to the rhythm)
00:15:106 (2,3,1) - 很适合antijump哦
00:30:651 (3,4) - 不移去别的地方吗?(这时候video闪了一下,容易误解)像在下一个slider的头上更好吧
另外这个难度的spacing有些大,果然是触手做的图,下次建议做小一点的哈哈
00:49:470 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个感觉上是一组的,不如做个四个slider的形状/pattern
00:51:379 (1) - stack在下个note上面感觉良好?
00:55:061 (1) - stack吧,不然太难了
01:11:781 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing由小至大?
01:32:675 (1,2) - spacing过大啊啊啊

s h i o n
00:09:651 (7) - 这里用note?
00:32:015 (x) - 用个slider?到32561,然后再加个slider
00:40:742 (1,2,3,4) - 微微弯?
00:53:833 (1) - 第一个repeat 加finish?没加感觉不合群
01:25:448 (5) - 头加finish,两次都要,自我感觉良好

rain
00:15:379 (2,3) - one slider is easier
00:36:379 (1) - no finish is better?
00:40:742 (1,2,3) -yeah. one slider is enough
behind there got a lot of stuff can be easier, take your time if you wanna change, however, up to you

慢来,慢来,加油!
wmfchris
taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:03:106 - this tone of this phrase is higher than the last one, try k d k
00:03:651 - ^ k
00:07:470 - ^
00:08:015 - ^
00:10:197 - try k d k d k or stream?
00:38:288 - observing the gituar pitch I think kkddd sounds better
00:56:015 - this note belongs to both last and next sentences. but if you maintain the stream, apply higher SV to this note as well, in order to avoid misleading players.
01:12:872 - try k---d d k...
01:32:879 - place the spinner 1/2 later than the notes

哇靠 不帶這麼兇殘的萌妹子
I think the 1/4 style is maintained throughout the song, which is ok for me, but the 1/4 since the red line sounds very random and need some fixing there.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

L_P wrote:

hi, from mod queue

因为看不出问题,全部我都给建议罢了,跟不跟在于你,谢谢~

DNA, look through (i cant pass it haiz) i dont see mistake

Hard
00:11:151 (4) - http://puu.sh/gnqk this first, and then next pattern you can keep this (to make the player familiar to the rhythm)不行啊這個,會造成間距問題
00:15:106 (2,3,1) - 很适合antijump哦 不懂..
00:30:651 (3,4) - 不移去别的地方吗?(这时候video闪了一下,容易误解)像在下一个slider的头上更好吧 改成一個slider
另外这个难度的spacing有些大,果然是触手做的图,下次建议做小一点的哈哈
因為我覺得相對於最難難度已經算很簡單,所以不知不覺把間距弄開一點lol
00:49:470 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个感觉上是一组的,不如做个四个slider的形状/pattern
雖然是這麼說,但是第4個也排成同樣的形狀會有各種問題...
00:51:379 (1) - stack在下个note上面感觉良好? 保留,因為我原本就打算這麼放的~
00:55:061 (1) - stack吧,不然太难了 不行,這裡就是要放跳躍的
01:11:781 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing由小至大? 好主意,fixed
01:32:675 (1,2) - spacing过大啊啊啊 ...是喔,雖然看不出來但還是fixed了

慢来,慢来,加油!
謝謝MOD ~ :)
spboxer3
Hello from tutuhaha and spboxer3's Mod queue

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 影片必須要無聲的~

[R a i n's Easy]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:23:266 (2,3) -
  2. 超過6以上的combo都太長了 改一下
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)


mapping
  1. 00:07:470 (2,3,4) - 頭尾,(3)之間的間距要相同才會好看~
  2. 00:40:742 (1,2,3,4) - 直線吧 會好看些

[S h i o n's Normal]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:10:963 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:13:470 (5,6) -
mapping
  1. 00:11:833 (2,3) - 覆蓋,有一點點凸出來了 把他完全覆蓋吧
  2. 00:19:742 (1,2,3) - 間距不平均
  3. 00:39:106 (1) - Bug NC不見了 請加回去
  4. 01:13:144 (3) - unsnap note

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:35:539 -
    01:10:963 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
mapping
  1. 00:54:379 (3,1,2) - (3,1)和(3,2)等間距會好看些
  2. 01:03:106 (1,3,4) - 3的結尾還有4使用clap 1的clap拿掉

[D.N.Angel]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:35:539 -
    01:10:963 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:06:651 (4,6) -
mapping
  1. none~

[Boss Taiko Oni]


  • Settings
  1. 拿掉影片 換上Taiko BG
mapping
  1. wmf看過我就不多說了 Taiko mod只要一個就可以了~
紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

恩~這張作的不錯!! 不過我覺得Hard做的比你的特有難度好lol
star
加油瞜~
R a i n
fixed~

I cant't read Taiwanese...

I use exsite :?

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

spboxer3 wrote:

Hello from tutuhaha and spboxer3's Mod queue

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 影片必須要無聲的~ 不會用怎麼辦...

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:35:539 -
    01:10:963 - 有啊這個[/color]
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
mapping
  1. 00:54:379 (3,1,2) - (3,1)和(3,2)等間距會好看些 居然看這麼仔細...調好了
  2. 01:03:106 (1,3,4) - 3的結尾還有4使用clap 1的clap拿掉 3已經有了,其他fixed

[D.N.Angel]


  • Settings
  1. 未需要使用的綠線:
    01:35:539 -
    01:10:963 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:06:651 (4,6) - 保留
mapping
  1. none~

恩~這張作的不錯!! 不過我覺得Hard做的比你的特有難度好lol
star
加油瞜~
謝謝MOD & STAR ~ :)
也謝謝L_P的星 ~ ><
YTYuyu
Yo im here from 249 and sekai's Moe queue :D

General:
i think itd be better if u can set the lead in to 500 or 1000 because u could giv players some time to adjust.

R a i n's Easy:
00:47:220 - re-snap this line to the red tick.
00:47:288(1) - this curve looks ugly IMO. itd look nice if u can make this look the same as (2)
01:33:084(1) - end this spinner till 01:36:357 to follow the rest of the guitar

S h i o n's Normal:
00:16:197(4,5) - how about making curved sliders like this? it would make a nice, flowy pattern to the next note.
00:47:220 - same as my 1st suggestion on easy.
01:00:106(3) - can u move this down because its touching the score? this may cause a distraction to players causing them to mess up.
01:32:948(1) - end it till 01:36:357 to follow the rest of the guitar.

Hard:
00:47:220 - same as my suggestion on easy
01:32:879 - ^

D.N.Angel:
01:32:879 - same as my suggestion on easy.

this is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
bossandy

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:03:106 - this tone of this phrase is higher than the last one, try k d k
00:03:651 - ^ k
00:07:470 - ^
00:08:015 - ^
00:10:197 - try k d k d k or stream?
00:38:288 - observing the gituar pitch I think kkddd sounds better
00:56:015 - this note belongs to both last and next sentences. but if you maintain the stream, apply higher SV to this note as well, in order to avoid misleading players.
01:12:872 - try k---d d k...
01:32:879 - place the spinner 1/2 later than the notes

哇靠 不帶這麼兇殘的萌妹子
I think the 1/4 style is maintained throughout the song, which is ok for me, but the 1/4 since the red line sounds very random and need some fixing there.
瘋了 你真的mod了好多我的Taiko diff喔...
Thx for mod~~


Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [Boss Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo im here from 249 and sekai's Moe queue :D

General:
i think itd be better if u can set the lead in to 500 or 1000 because u could giv players some time to adjust. fix to 500


Hard:
00:47:220 - same as my suggestion on easy I think it is fine :O
01:32:879 - ^ ^

D.N.Angel:
01:32:879 - same as my suggestion on easy. ^

this is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
Thanks MOD and star ~ :)
Yasora
yo

General
  1. Inconsistency kiai times in taiko diff
Easy
00:33:651 (3) new combo should in here (because same as 00:30:651 (1,2) and 00:32:560 (1,2)). also, remove clap in the next note
00:53:833 (5) add new combo
01:09:106 (6) ^
umm.. since the BPM is too high, not good if put note 1/1 and the pattern is too hard for beginner players. I mean, you put note like this. this isn't looking easy diff orz

Normal
00:09:106 (6) this combo set is too long imo. I suggest to add new combo in here
00:24:106 (1) uhh... maybe this is just me.. this slider is too weird to look orz. can make that into curve slider usually?
00:39:106 (1) I think this slider sound in the beginning is too silent in my ear. add sound like whistle or something, maybe?
01:23:266 (3).. spacing?
yeah, like a hard diff... but whatever :D

That's all...orz
Nice map :3 Good luck~
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Yasora-chan wrote:

yo

General
  1. Inconsistency kiai times in taiko diff
Easy
00:33:651 (3) new combo should in here (because same as 00:30:651 (1,2) and 00:32:560 (1,2)). also, remove clap in the next note
00:53:833 (5) add new combo
01:09:106 (6) ^
umm.. since the BPM is too high, not good if put note 1/1 and the pattern is too hard for beginner players. I mean, you put note like this. this isn't looking easy diff orz

Normal
00:09:106 (6) this combo set is too long imo. I suggest to add new combo in here
00:24:106 (1) uhh... maybe this is just me.. this slider is too weird to look orz. can make that into curve slider usually?
00:39:106 (1) I think this slider sound in the beginning is too silent in my ear. add sound like whistle or something, maybe?
01:23:266 (3).. spacing?
yeah, like a hard diff... but whatever :D

That's all...orz
Nice map :3 Good luck~
wait for their reply
Thanks MOD & star ~ :)
ririco
from my and byaku queue ~ :3

[R a i n's Easy]

  1. 00:18:106 (2) - 1 grip down maybe?
  2. 00:31:470 (2) - spacing ~
  3. 00:32:560 (1) - delete this note seems useless?
  4. 00:51:106 (4) - add a finish on the end of the slider?
  5. 00:53:833 (5) - NC, new vocal start here~
  6. 00:58:197 (X) - add a note?
  7. 01:00:106 (1) - delete it just like 00:32:560 (1) - ?
  8. 01:16:720 (5) - NC?

[S h i o n's Normal]

  1. 00:41:288 (3) - like this will look better?
  2. 00:53:833 (1) - boring, maybe add a slow timing point?
  3. 01:02:561 (3) - ^
  4. 01:24:629 (2) - maybe like this?

other diffs seems fine to me, GL :3
S h i o n
R a i n

Byakugan249 wrote:

R a i n's Easy:
00:47:220 - re-snap this line to the red tick.
00:47:288(1) - this curve looks ugly IMO. itd look nice if u can make this look the same as (2)
01:33:084(1) - end this spinner till 01:36:357 to follow the rest of the guitar
Nochenged
thanks MOD!

Yasora-chan wrote:

Easy
00:33:651 (3) new combo should in here (because same as 00:30:651 (1,2) and 00:32:560 (1,2)). also, remove clap in the next note
00:53:833 (5) add new combo
01:09:106 (6) ^
umm.. since the BPM is too high, not good if put note 1/1 and the pattern is too hard for beginner players. I mean, you put note like this. this isn't looking easy diff orz
All fixed
thanks MOD!

-Sekai- wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]

  1. 00:18:106 (2) - 1 grip down maybe? fixed
  2. 00:31:470 (2) - spacing ~ fixed
  3. 00:32:560 (1) - delete this note seems useless? ok,it delete
  4. 00:51:106 (4) - add a finish on the end of the slider? add end of the slider
  5. 00:53:833 (5) - NC, new vocal start here~ fixed~
  6. 00:58:197 (X) - add a note? ok,add
  7. 01:00:106 (1) - delete it just like 00:32:560 (1) - ? ok
  8. 01:16:720 (5) - NC? fixed
thanks MOD! :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
R a i n
Leorda
NI HAO

R a i n's Easy
00:14:560 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider and add whistle at end slider?
00:19:470 (x) - Add note here?
00:32:833 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern
00:33:651 (1) - Remove new combo
00:35:288 (1) - ^


S h i o n's Normal
00:06:651 (x) - Add note here?
00:39:106 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug


Boss Taiko Oni
* 2nd Kiai should end at 00:56:015 to make consistent on each diff
* If you have a taiko BG, you have to remove the video via .osu files


Hard
00:55:061 (1,2) - This jumps seems sudden, consider to reduce it?


D.N.Angel
01:32:879 (1) - End at 01:35:538, like others diff


Ohhh!!!! Another Fujiwara clan! The name is "Fujiwara no Marina"!!! aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

EDIT : wait, why "Fujiwara no Marina"? I'm just joking D:
R a i n

Leorda wrote:

R a i n's Easy
00:14:560 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider and add whistle at end slider? add whistle
00:19:470 (x) - Add note here? no
00:32:833 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern ok~ fixed
00:33:651 (1) - Remove new combo ^
00:35:288 (1) - ^ ^
thanks MOD! :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO


S h i o n's Normal
00:06:651 (x) - Add note here? no fixed
00:39:106 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug fixed


Boss Taiko Oni
* 2nd Kiai should end at 00:56:015 to make consistent on each diff fixed
* If you have a taiko BG, you have to remove the video via .osu files fixed


Hard
00:55:061 (1,2) - This jumps seems sudden, consider to reduce it? no fixed


D.N.Angel
01:32:879 (1) - End at 01:35:538, like others diff fixed


Ohhh!!!! Another Fujiwara clan! The name is "Fujiwara no Marina"!!! aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

...fixed
thanks MOD ~ :)
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from In-Game PM~
     
    General :
     
  1. 01:32:879 (1) - 每個diff spinner上的 綠線都不一樣 統一吧 ( All diff have different green line on the spinner ,make it the same )
     
    R a i n's Easy :
     
  2. 01:00:106 (X) - add a note?
     
    S h i o n's Normal :
     
  3. 00:10:197 (3) - 拜託 別讓頭尾碰在一起 打起來感覺不好
  4. 00:19:742 (1) - 頭加個whistle聽起來更好 ^_^
  5. 00:44:015 (3) - 結尾clap吧 跟著音樂 這裡停止加clap感覺不好!
  6. 00:48:924 (4) - 不好看
  7. 01:11:781 (5) - 結尾whistle~
  8. 01:17:266 (3) - spacing~
  9. 01:32:266 (2) - ^
     
    Hard :
     
  10. 坑爹的Hard...挑不出東西啦!!!~
     
    D.N.Angel :
     
  11. 00:47:015 (X) - 加個note 複製00:46:742 (4) - 然後Ctrl+>兩次 XD
  12. 00:56:424 (2) - spacing有那麼一點不一樣 但應該沒差多少~
     
    You must to read~!
    red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.
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哭了 難譜我mod不來lol~~
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3
S h i o n
Download: Fujiwara no Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [S h i o n's Normal].osu

bossandy wrote:

[list][size=125]
S h i o n's Normal :
 
[*]00:10:197 (3) - 拜託 別讓頭尾碰在一起 打起來感覺不好 fixed
[*]00:19:742 (1) - 頭加個whistle聽起來更好 ^_^ x
[*]00:44:015 (3) - 結尾clap吧 跟著音樂 這裡停止加clap感覺不好! fixed
[*]00:48:924 (4) - 不好看 ;_;
[*]01:11:781 (5) - 結尾whistle~ k
[*]01:17:266 (3) - spacing~ fixed
[*]01:32:266 (2) - ^ ^
多谢mod~
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

bossandy wrote:

  • Hi hi~ request from In-Game PM~
     
    General :
     
  1. 01:32:879 (1) - 每個diff spinner上的 綠線都不一樣 統一吧 ( All diff have different green line on the spinner ,make it the same ) 再說...orz 
     
    Hard :
     
  2. 坑爹的Hard...挑不出東西啦!!!~ :O
     
    D.N.Angel :
     
  3. 00:47:015 (X) - 加個note 複製00:46:742 (4) - 然後Ctrl+>兩次 XD 是個好主意,不過這裡我是故意這樣放的,能讓玩家暫停稍作休息
  4. 00:56:424 (2) - spacing有那麼一點不一樣 但應該沒差多少~ 這真的是差那麼一丁點啊...我移掉grid調了..
     
    You must to read~!
    red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.
--------------------------------------------------------
哭了 難譜我mod不來lol~~
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3
Thanks MOD (&...star ? ) ~ :)
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