As requested, sorry for late
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General]
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Video has audio, this need to be remove,
forum pm me if you do not know how- If you're going to full submit (for new video), please remove the .osb file as well.
- Please change source to (for consistency with vndb)
Secret Game -Killer Queen- Depth Edition http://puu.sh/cFwH http://vndb.org/v1099- Consider these tags since this is a 18+ visual novel
hentai eroge Note: eroge is a visual novel which contain sexual content
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Easy]
00:28:741 (2,3) - Repeating slider instead? There is a big gap between (1) & (2) so it make it hard to hit (2) properly (get 300 on it), making the first note after a gap a slider make this play a lot easier and more friendlier for beginners.
00:30:915 (1,2) - Why not repeating slider
http://puu.sh/cFxW? It follow the music much better and hit circle doesn't feel intuitive here since I can hear notes in between the hit circle.
00:34:393 (1,2) - ^
00:37:871 (1,2) - ^
00:53:089 (2,3,4) - Similar to 00:28:741, there is a big gap between (2) & (1) in the timeline, so why not just a repeating slider instead for these hit circle?
01:11:784 (2) - I didn't suggestion making this into slider because here, because of music, it feel intuitive, while the others one that you did not really. No problem here, just saying why I didn't suggestion making this a slider.01:23:958 (4) - Why not a slider that end at 01:24:393? Fits nicer with the vocal and I feel it lead nicer to the spinner as well.
Pretty nice.
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Normal]
00:17:002 (1) - Use 3 points for this slider, it'll look better.
00:24:828 (3,4) - I like it more like this
http://puu.sh/cFyP, when you curve it, the transition from these notes to the next feel a lot smoother.
00:27:437 (1,3) - Similar to above ^, more smoother feel if you curve these two sliders
http://puu.sh/cFze00:28:089 (2) - 3 anchor points for this, doesn't look really good right now
00:30:806 (T) - Not so sure about the slow down... it makes the slider too slow for me and makes the hit circle play weird for me, but I guess it's fine.
00:36:567 (2) - Stack this properly with 00:33:958 (4)?
01:07:002 (7,8) - I suggest slider instead, vocal is more prominent here so hitting (7) felt weird since it was following the drum so it feel better if you do a slider instead.
01:15:915 (5) - Same as 00:28:089, 3 anchor points
01:18:741 (2,3,4) - Curve this pattern a bit
http://puu.sh/cFA7, straight pattern doesn't feel natural to play.
Like this diff as well, a bit difficult, but fits fine with the mapset's difficulty spread.
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Hard]
00:17:871 (3) - This repeating slider repeat on the blue tick sound really offbeat, do a slider + 2 hit circles instead
http://puu.sh/cFAG.
00:19:176 (2) - Copy (1), paste it here and Ctrl+J and Ctrl+H it
http://puu.sh/cFAY Looks nicer to me.
00:19:610 (3) - Same as 00:17:871.
00:21:350 (4) - Same as 00:17:871 (you can try another pattern if you think you reuse this one too many times)
00:17:871 & 00:19:610 & 00:21:350 - If you seriously don't want to change, remove clap from the repeat, it make the repeat feel even more off beat.00:23:415 (4) - Clap on blue ticks sound horrible, please remove.
00:26:893 (4) - ^
00:48:089 (5,6,1) - Since this is a stream, please do compressed stream (1.0x distant snap) here.
00:48:958 (3,4) - Should be a slider instead since you are following the vocal here. (4) play really weird for me because you follow instrument instead.
00:59:393 (3,4) - May be nicer if you do repeat slider for here as well.
01:11:132 (2,3) - These double stacks really feel more fitting for Insane, short slider seems nicer for a Hard.
01:11:458 (4,5) - ^
01:12:001 (2,3) - ^
01:12:327 (4,5) - ^
01:25:045 (2,3) - ^
01:25:371 (4,5) - ^
01:25:915 (2,3) - ^
01:26:241 (4,5) - ^
01:27:328 (2,3) - Blue ticks notes 1/1 pattern notes, hmmm, do a slider here, (2) play really weird for me and I think it'll make those hit circles play nicer, follow below suggestion if you follow this
01:27:763 (3,4,5) - Continuing from above, repeating slider for these notes. Transition from (5) to (1) in next combo feel weird for me with hit circle so doing this feel better for me.
01:29:176 (3) - Same as 00:17:871
01:32:654 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Long stream in Hard?? Please do something else.
01:36:132 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:38:306 (5,6) - Again transition from blue tick to white tick feel really weird, please do slider to make it feel nicer (as you do not need to hit slider precisely to get 300).
Not fond of blue ticks pattern here, and I highly recommend you rework those repeating slider aka 00:17:871 and similar and reworking the clap pattern for that section as well. It sound really off compare to the music. This is definitely an Insane so I hope the next diff is Crazy/ or considerably harder than this or you'll have to tone it down.
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Killer Queen]
00:47:219 (3) - Align this properly with 2?
http://puu.sh/cFF6 Be sure to adjust next notes if you do this.
Personally I would have prefer if you use a lower slider velocity and do 1.5x slider velocity for the really intense part like 01:24:828 - 01:28:197 and similar. The rest would play a lot better with lower slider velocity. For me, this difficulty is difficult just because of slider velocity (getting 100s on them really kill your hp bar). Overall, not fond of the high slider velocity used here.
Hard have some problem with hitsounds at beginning and end and some patterns which is more fitting for Insane and don't like mapping style used for Killer Queen, no star because of this.
Good luck on your beatmap through.
Edit: Kudosu after 1 min?? XD
