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---Assault[K]---
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 4 March, 2013 at 4:10:52 PM

Artist: Infinity
Title: Dancing Naked In The Rain
Tags: quantumtea Byakugan249
BPM: 137
Filesize: 3892kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. 249's Normal (3.52 stars, 248 notes)
  2. Easy (1.73 stars, 247 notes)
  3. Mayhem (4.29 stars, 471 notes)
  4. quantumtea's Topless (4.76 stars, 536 notes)
Download: Infinity - Dancing Naked In The Rain
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mod it please!
Revived from eternal slumber.
Easy - Me
249's Normal - Byakugan249
Mayhem (Hard) - Me
Topless(Insane) - quantumtea
Thanks for mods! :)
Kings
Good

Normal should be hard/normal+
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

Deaf Zone wrote:

Good

Normal should be hard/normal+
Mayhem = Hard
itankn
Maybe the countdown speed is too fast...


EASY
00:45:198 the end of slider can move to 00:44:980
00:46:074 ^
00:46:950 ^
00:47:607 the end of slider can move to 00:48:045
01:14:866 the beginning of slider can move to 01:14:975
01:17:119 have a new combo(maybe the break is a little long)
01:21:215 I don't think it's easy :(
01:41:468 have a new combo
02:00:078 the spinner is too short
02:05:004 move to 02:05:114
02:10:697 the end of slider can move to02:10:587
02:25:476 add a note
02:35:985 ^
02:47:480 note 3 is far from note 2
02:55:362 to 02:56:676 move the note to the red line
03:18:023 add a note
03:21:526 ^
03:32:035 ^

S h i a
Hi ~ :D

[Overall]
Good hitsound.
sets a preview points in all your diffs.
(choose the right spot, the click [Timing -- set current position as preview point])
I'd like to set at 01:05:123 :P
Add quantumtea in your every diff tag~
Delete .osb file if you don't want to make storyboard

Ok here we go.

[Easy]
you have 4 unsnapped objects, fix them by clicking [Timing --- Resnap All Notes]
00:38:411 (3) - you should continue mapping after this note. cuz it's weird for a breaktime here xD
01:01:838 (1) - let the spinner start from 01:01:619 (1) - would be better, and ends at 01:02:933
01:14:866 (5) - move it to 01:14:975 (5) - and continue mapping after this slider
01:22:857 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about like this? my first note start from here 01:24:390 you should contiune mapping that part and don't left breaktime here
02:00:078 (1) - this spinner is to short. let it start from 01:59:859 (1) - and ends at 02:01:611
02:05:004 (1) - remove this note. and ofcouse you need to mapping after that spinner
02:06:865 (4) - let the slider ends at 02:07:741
02:09:931 (4) - ends at 02:10:806
02:11:682 (1) - spinner should ends at 02:15:185
02:23:067 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,2,3,4) - hehe. you ctrl+c ctrl+v it? don't be so lazy try mapping them not copy paste them.
02:47:042 (1) - move to 02:47:151 (1) -
02:47:480 (2) - move to 02:47:589 (2) -
02:47:918 (3) - move to 02:48:027 (3) -
02:55:362 (5) - move to 02:55:252 (5) - plz
02:55:909 (6,7,8) - same
02:58:318 (1) - from here i thought you were not have finish on your easy diff. just copy and paste. :(


[Mayhem]
3 unsnapped object. fix them as I told you :P
01:01:838 (1) - same as easy
01:46:613 (1) - unrankable spinner. change it into a slider would be nice
01:46:613 (1) - after this spinner i don't see any sliders. and they were allllll notes. if you playing it you will feel boring.. try mapping them not just put notes.

[Topless]
9 unsnaped object
becouse of Mayhem diff I thought your map were really not finished.and it's far from finished. too many notes and just few sliders.
:D
If I point out errors everywhere i think this will takes me about half day or even more. so I suggest you finish your map first. otherwise this will never get ranked.

I think modding is help you fix errors and makes map better. not help you finish your map, right?


Feel free to asking me any questions about mapping. If you really wants to make osu! beatmap.
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

itankn wrote:

Maybe the countdown speed is too fast...


EASY
00:45:198 the end of slider can move to 00:44:980 fix
00:46:074 ^ fix
00:46:950 ^ fix
00:47:607 the end of slider can move to 00:48:045 fix
01:14:866 the beginning of slider can move to 01:14:975 fix
01:17:119 have a new combo(maybe the break is a little long) i dont know what to put
01:21:215 I don't think it's easy :( my begginer friends can do it
01:41:468 have a new combo fix
02:00:078 the spinner is too short fix
02:05:004 move to 02:05:114 fix
02:10:697 the end of slider can move to02:10:587 Nope
02:25:476 add a notefix
02:35:985 ^fix
02:47:480 note 3 is far from note 2fix
02:55:362 to 02:56:676 move the note to the red linefix
03:18:023 add a notefix
03:21:526 ^fix
03:32:035 ^fix
Loneight
Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
[raining.jpg] should 800x600 or 1027x768
[Easy] can't have spacing .

[Mayhem]
let something in 00:38:630~00:42:790 . There have break time let me feel strange .

00:47:169 (5,1) - (5)add NC and (1) remove NC ?!
01:49:788 (6,1) - why (6)~(1) have empty ?!.
01:59:421 (6,1) - add something in (6)~(1) ?!
02:05:004 (1) - let it on 02:05:114 ?!
02:03:253 (5) - let it on 02:03:362 ?!
02:03:253 (5,1) - add something in (5)~(1) ?!
02:16:827 (6) - let it on 02:16:937 ?!
02:17:265 (7) - let it on 02:17:375 ?!
02:17:484 (8) - let it on 02:17:594 ?!
02:17:922 (9) - let it on 02:18:032 ?!
02:32:373 (8) - let it on 02:32:482 ?!
02:35:876 (9) - let it on 02:35:985 ?!
02:55:362 (5,6,7,8.1) - there let me feel strange . let on white line ?!
03:21:417 (8) - let it on red line ?!
03:24:044 (4) - let it on red ling ?! :)

[Topless]
00:56:803 (1,2,3) - I can't see (3) rotation ...so let it don't cover (3) rotation ?!

Good song ~ :)
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

l1106188 wrote:

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
[raining.jpg] should 800x600 or 1027x768 FIX 800x600
[Easy] can't have spacing . I don't understand

[Mayhem]
let something in 00:38:630~00:42:790 . There have break time let me feel strange . Maybe

00:47:169 (5,1) - (5)add NC and (1) remove NC ?! FIX
01:49:788 (6,1) - why (6)~(1) have empty ?!. FIX added 7,8,9
01:59:421 (6,1) - add something in (6)~(1) ?! FIX add 1,2,3
02:05:004 (1) - let it on 02:05:114 ?! FIX
02:03:253 (5) - let it on 02:03:362 ?! FIX
02:03:253 (5,1) - add something in (5)~(1) ?! Nope
02:16:827 (6) - let it on 02:16:937 ?! FIX
02:17:265 (7) - let it on 02:17:375 ?! FIX
02:17:484 (8) - let it on 02:17:594 ?! FIX
02:17:922 (9) - let it on 02:18:032 ?! FIX
02:32:373 (8) - let it on 02:32:482 ?! FIX
02:35:876 (9) - let it on 02:35:985 ?! FIX
02:55:362 (5,6,7,8.1) - there let me feel strange . let on white line ?! FIX
03:21:417 (8) - let it on red line ?! FIX
03:24:044 (4) - let it on red ling ?! :) FIX

[Topless]
00:56:803 (1,2,3) - I can't see (3) rotation ...so let it don't cover (3) rotation ?! FIX

Good song ~ :) Thanks! <3
i will mod your map soon o/
riffy
General
dancing_in_the_rain.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. (it's fine, too) (but i suggest you)
raining.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

But there's also some BIG problems

Fix countdown please
Fix source please
Fix tags please
Fix combo colours
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
use same tags\countdown\source\colours on EVERY DIFF

too loud hitsounds

add kiai-time D:

Easy
use 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor for easy
don't use blue ticks for easy

02:43:191 - too short i think
00:43:009 (1,2,3) - no. bad spacing

Mayhem
No way! Please use distance snap! For this diff D:

Topless
OMG
/me hides
00:51:091 - too short
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Nice song. Good luck ;3
Beige
Sorry... I can't mod this map..

So many wrong...

Don't give kudosu.. sorry :?
Sure
Hi, as your M4M request

First, all of mods must be fixed.


[General]
  1. Timing - BPM : 137.000 / Offset 9076
    Don't forget 'Resnap All Notes'
  2. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
    - [Easy] : 2000
    - [Mayhem] : 2000
    - [Topless] : 2011 < Fix to 2000 by notepad

[Topless]
00:25:274 (7) - NC
00:25:712 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:150 (2) - This half-spaced note isn't funny
00:27:902 (3) - ^
00:37:097 (1,2,3,4) - Use consistent spacing
00:44:980 (3,3) - Avoid using large grid level, it makes ugly overlap. This way is prettier. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/247492
01:00:963 (7) - Find other place, it's ugly. Maybe stack under 01:00:525 (6)?
01:07:312 (6) - NC. Spacing is changed. NC makes sense spacing of 01:07:531 (7,8,9)
01:43:219 (5,7) - Exchange place
01:48:474 (1) - It's hard to notice stream. Yeah, I mean spacing
01:49:350 (5) - Spacing
01:55:480 (1) - ^
01:56:356 (5) - ^
01:59:421 (1,2) - What are these beats? It doesn't fit music at all. Try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/hEr7
02:03:581 (5) - NC
02:05:004 (1) - There is no reason to start from blue tick.
02:07:960 (10) - God damn spacing. Compare 02:06:865 (7,8) and 02:07:522 (9,10). They are same appearance, but rhythm of 10 isn't same.
02:25:038 (7,8,9,10,11) - No hard spacing
02:40:583 (8) - NC
02:41:021 (1) - Remove NC
02:43:210 (1) - Extend its end to 02:44:524
02:45:619 (3) - Spacing
02:47:151 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:48:684 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:55:362 (4) - Move to next white tick
...
Alright, I can't mod this diff anymore.
Please use distance snap. Or you fail.


[Mayhem]
00:23:085 (1,2,3) - Look at these and 00:24:399 (4,5,6) - these. Their spacing look almost same, but rhythm is different. Why don't you use same distance snap? If you want to keep those spacing, at least you should make them to some pattern. Then player can notice they are different rhythm easily.
...
Hmm this diff has same problem with Topless.
You'd better ues consistent distance spacing.


[Easy]
Oh my god, Slider velocity 1.4 is too fast to beginner. x_x
I give you a tip. Press "Ctrl+Shift+A", then AiMod will run.
Don't make spacing problems in Easy diff. AiMod points them out what you have to fix.
That's all for now.


This map really needs improvement. Play more ranked maps before you make a map.
-kevincela-
Hi

[General]


  1. You should put more tags on the difficulties.

[Easy]


  1. There are MANY spacing errors. When you map,you really should use the distance snap,that wil help you really much to map. As now,there are many spacing errors that need to be fixed, like 00:27:026 (1,2,1) - and maaaaaany others. If you don't know how to use the distance snap,use the FAQ.
  2. Please,use a bigger grid size. The actual one is pretty big,and the spacing will not be very good.
  3. 00:25:712 (2) - Actually,this is covered by the slider,so put this on the note 1
  4. 00:27:902 (3) - Try to make it like this:
  5. 00:28:778 (4) - 1 grid down
  6. 00:31:405 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh no,you really need to change this. The spacing here is horrible,and a bit confusing for new players,too.
  7. 00:38:630 - Why this break? It isn't needed,actually.
  8. 00:44:323 (1) - Please,move this on 00:44:323 (1) - and make this shorter (till 00:44:980 - )
  9. 00:45:417 (1,1) - Make them shorter,like I said before
  10. 00:47:169 - Add a note
  11. 00:47:607 (1) - Make this longer till 00:48:045 -
  12. 00:48:264 (1,2) - This isn't easy at all. Using a 1/2 pattern space like this will literally destroy the new players. Try to change this.
  13. 01:05:123 (1,2,3,4) - Horrible spacing
    Oh well,sorry,it's better not to continue. You should remap this difficulty,because as now it's not rankable at all. Sorry if I'll not mod this fully,but this diff is FULL of errors.

[Mayhem]


  1. Same as Easy diff,there are MANY spacing errors. Please use the distance grid,and use a smaller grid.
  2. 00:46:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Horrible spacing
  3. 00:47:607 (1) - Make this longer till 00:48:045 -
  4. 01:00:306 (5,6) - No,this is really unexpected,and not rankable at all. Try to put the note 6 on the note 5.
  5. 01:07:312 (6,7) - ^
  6. 01:24:828 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really ugly spacing
  7. 00:38:630 - Why this break? It isn't needed,actually.
    ..Well,the rest of the map has all really bad spacing. I'm actually really tired,so you should use the distance snap,like I said on the Easy diff

[Topless]


  • Same as the other diffs. <_<
  1. There are many places where the triplets are really unnecessary. Please,don't overmap the song and listen to it carefully.
  2. 00:51:110 - Why this empty space?
  3. 01:00:963 (7) - Put it on the note 6.
    ...Sorry,I can't mod this anymore. It's really full of errors,like the other diffs.
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---
Spacing error for Easy and Mayhem all clear
Timing all changed to 137.000 offset 9076
distance snap every single note.
riffy
now i see that you want to finish this map!
don't give up!
star
and don't kd this post
Fenya
Hi~ :)

General:
I think it should be in WIP as it lacks a lot.
Only if you want to change the Grid level of 3
Do you used the distance snap?
You've done the mod before?... It seems not... D:
No kiai?

Easy:
Wow...Many space errors >_<
... When you changed the offset and bpm, did resnap all notes? http://puu.sh/hKes Are out of the ticks. D:
or you should change the beat snap divisor to 1/4
Usually the beat goes on the white tick ... Look at this
00:23:090 (1,2) - Spacing
00:25:280 (1,2) - ^
00:26:156 (1) - Do not you think it would look nice if you left straight or curved?
00:27:032 (1,2,1) - Copypaste? o.O
00:30:097 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:31:411 (4) - Do you wanted to make a bending slider? ... It looks like a slider straight.
00:32:287 (1) - Spacing
00:34:039 (1) - ^
00:35:353 (1) - ^
00:44:112 (3,1) - ^
01:01:849 (1) - A spinner so short for easy? >_<
01:20:900 (4,5) - Wtf! This one above the other note. D:
In my opinion... I think you should re-do the easy... There is much mistakes...

Mayhem:
00:48:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - I do not think that comes... Try to play it and really confused me...
I can't keep this modding. D:
I think you should finish the map ... It lacks many things.

Sorry, it did everything I could u.u
Sorry for my bad English, good luck~
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

Fenya wrote:

Hi~ :)

Easy:
Wow...Many space errors >_< Wtf ytd I update after aimod 0 warning ==
... When you changed the offset and bpm, did resnap all notes? http://puu.sh/hKes Are out of the ticks. D:
or you should change the beat snap divisor to 1/4 on top ppl ask me 1/2 T.T
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod from queue

General:
  1. Remove .osb file if it is unnecessary
  2. Recommend preview time : 9075
  3. I suppose countdown is unnecessary, uncheck it~
  4. Audio Lead-in is really unnecessary, set it to 0 please.
Some suggestion::
  1. Generally, highly recommend to map with Distance snap, the spacing now is too mess. Generally, try to avoid any overlap in Easy or Normal diff, and as less as possible in Hard diff. Set grid level to 3 or 4 can help u to map easily.
  2. And then let me say something about hitsounds. In common, hitsounds should be placed consistent, for example, 2/4whistle, put whistle on the 2nd & 4th white line from each downbeat (long white line), or 2w4c, or something similar. It could help player to follow ur beats, especially in low diffs.
  3. So, i won't mod this diff thoroughly, just give u these recommendations. I think it's need more work :)
  4. All right, same issues on ur other two diffs. Sorry to say that but please try to make ur map more clear and neat with Distance snap (spacing 1.0x) and consistent hitsounds. I know this kind of map is looked boring but it will be a good start for new mappers: learn how to make a rankable map first, and then to make a good map :)
so that's all~
Low
I'll give you some suggestions.

• An easy difficulty really shouldn't have spacing inconsistencies and jumps like your does.
• Try to arrange the beats in symmetrical patterns and not just randomly place them.
• Make sure to set a real preview point. Don't set it before the song starts!
• Your break times seem a little random.
• Make sure that all circles, sliders, and spinner follow the rhythm of the song!
• Try to arrange your combos in patterns. Don't just place new combos randomly.

I wish you best of luck in mapping. Keep trying! Look at some mapping tutorials on YouTube, ask users for help, try checking out #modhelp on IRC, and keep experimenting around. ;)
YTYuyu
DONE :D. you can use my diff as a reference to make your other diffs better. just don't make any changes on my map when there's a mod request. also can use this BG for my diff. i'd feel guilty if i use your BG. also don't forget to put my name in the tags.

Download: Infinity - Dancing Naked In The Rain (---Assault[K]---) [249's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

Byakugan249 wrote:

DONE :D. you can use my diff as a reference to make your other diffs better. just don't make any changes on my map when there's a mod request. also can use this BG for my diff. i'd feel guilty if i use your BG. also don't forget to put my name in the tags.
thanks alot 249 :D
YTYuyu
can you do a full submission? my BG isnt showing.
Cygnus
Hoo. A three minute map. I guess I'll just mod 1 diff atm. Sorry x.x Anyway, the song is nice, but seriously, the map is bad. It needs a lot more improvements especially with your spacing and what not. Hope this gets fixed soon.
GENERAL
  1. You gotta be serious that you only have one timing section on your diffs. O.O
MAYHEM
  1. 00:27:032 (Whole Combo) - This one is quite strange. I mean, yeah it really is strange. Try to increase the spacing.

  2. 00:34:039 (1) - Please use distance snap for this note to make the spacing consistent.

  3. 01:00:316 (5,6) - Eh? Try to make the notes in a straight pattern instead.

  4. 01:01:849 - This slider should start at 01:01:630.

  5. 01:06:448 (4) - Please use distance snap.

  6. 01:13:455 (3) - ^

  7. 02:19:148 (Whole Combo) - Ear Rape? Remove all finishes.

  8. 03:39:623 - This slider should start at 03:39:294.
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

Byakugan249 wrote:

can you do a full submission? my BG isnt showing.
does it show now?
YTYuyu

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

does it show now?
now it does.
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

Philippines wrote:

MAYHEM
  1. 00:27:032 (Whole Combo) - This one is quite strange. I mean, yeah it really is strange. Try to increase the spacing.

  2. 00:34:039 (1) - Please use distance snap for this note to make the spacing consistent.

  3. 01:00:316 (5,6) - Eh? Try to make the notes in a straight pattern instead.

  4. 01:01:849 - This slider should start at 01:01:630.

  5. 01:06:448 (4) - Please use distance snap.

  6. 01:13:455 (3) - ^

  7. 02:19:148 (Whole Combo) - Ear Rape? Remove all finishes.

  8. 03:39:623 - This slider should start at 03:39:294.
thanks um all fixed~
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---
Double Post
Mitsuneko
._. Alright

Guess you don't want a guest diff from me then
YTYuyu

nekonomitsu wrote:

._. Alright

Guess you don't want a guest diff from me then
he asked you to make a GD for this map?
Mitsuneko

Byakugan249 wrote:

he asked you to make a GD for this map?
Yep :T
Cygnus
Where's my kudo? lol

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Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

Philippines wrote:

Where's my kudo? lol

Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.
forget. done. =w=
Topic Starter
---Assault[K]---

nekonomitsu wrote:

._. Alright

Guess you don't want a guest diff from me then
Sorry!
Leorda
Hello, new mappers.... Here are advice for you

* Use distance snap! Don't believe with AIMod stuff, they just error (maybe?). I suggest you to set the distance spacing to 1,0x

* Don't use 1,40 Slider velocity for all diff Make a slider velocity is same for all diff is doesn't make sense. For easy/normal, use a low/average SV. And for Hard/Insane, use high SV. Anyway, it's up to you

* Don't overlap the pattern I saw the pattern that overlapping them. I suggest you to look at this thread for more cool pattern for this map

* Follow the beat/rhythm/vocal of the song It's important if your map is following beat/rhythm/vocal of the song. Because players will easier to find the rhythms

* Read this thread for beginners mapper It's very very recommended for beginners who started to mapping/modding on these days. You'll get confuse if you don't read this thread

* Use hitsounds! Use claps on object when the object is snap at 2nd and 4th white ticks. And use finish when the object is snap at 4th heavy white ticks (long white tick)

Well, that's my advice for you

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For Byakugan249 :

249's Normal
00:40:170 (4) - New combo for preventing long combo
00:50:243 (5) - New combo and move further away from stacks. Because average player will confusing about reading the slider speed
01:05:572 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by spinner-osu and it's makes hidden for beginners/average players
01:47:616 (1) - ^
02:57:689 (1) - ^

Good luck for your map :)
YTYuyu

Leorda wrote:

Hello, new mappers.... Here are advice for you



For Byakugan249 :

249's Normal
00:40:170 (4) - New combo for preventing long combo no the vocals are still going.
00:50:243 (5) - New combo and move further away from stacks. Because average player will confusing about reading the slider speed ohh i see. fixed.
01:05:572 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by spinner-osu and it's makes hidden for beginners/average players alright i moved it somewhere else.
01:47:616 (1) - ^ ^
02:57:689 (1) - ^ ^

Good luck for your map :)
Ty for the mod :D

EDIT: Give Leo kd since i followed his/her suggestion

Download: Infinity - Dancing Naked In The Rain (---Assault[K]---) [249's Normal].osu
Kuria
came here for some mod

Topless:
00:24:404 (4,5,6) - move this one grid lower? so the spacing for the 00:25:280 (7) part will not be too far.
00:25:718 (1) - 1 grid down
00:26:156 (2,3,4) - use distance snap, move it a bit to the right
00:27:032 (1,2,3) - add some spacing here?
00:29:221 (1,2,3) - move it here
00:30:097 (7) - move it one grid lower from this this notes 00:29:659 (4,5,6)
00:31:849 (5) - make it like these one

00:32:725 (2) - 1-2 grid lower
00:33:601 (5) - left a bit
00:33:601 (5) - add note here?
00:33:601 (5) - ^
00:43:236 (5) - move the timing of this notes to here

00:48:054 (6) - remove this notes, replace it with the extended previous slider?
00:48:054 (6) - add note here?
00:48:054 (6) - ^
00:48:054 (6) - ^
00:48:054 (6) - ^

i think it just that for now, cant give a full modding because i don't have much time ><
good luck for it^^
BanchoBot
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