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Kuraki Mai with Stefanie - Tonight,I Feel Close to You

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Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月7日星期六 at 16:10:51

Artist: Kuraki Mai with Stefanie
Title: Tonight, I Feel Close to You
Tags: Sun Rainbow Love miku1
BPM: 92
Filesize: 5774kb
Play Time: 02:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4.65 stars, 246 notes)
  2. Easy (0.42 stars, 105 notes)
  3. Normal (1.78 stars, 48 notes)
  4. Spinner (3.92 stars, 48 notes)
Download: Kuraki Mai with Stefanie - Tonight, I Feel Close to You
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kuraki Mai with Stefanie - Tonight,I Feel Close to You
1st Bestmap>.<
Easy:Done
Collab:Done
Normal:No done

SB:52%
Last edited by Sun Rainbow , edited 22 times in total.
Ulysses
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Ulysses
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Raging Bull
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Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
General:
Already said it. Remove vocaloid 2 from source. Add it to tags.
Kiai times are inconsistent. Make them all start and end the same please. Hard and easy....have two completely different kiai times.
Easy:
...I think SV is too fast for easy. I suggest lowering it, but then it leads to a remap.
00:13:973 (1) - This spinner is really long. About 10 seconds of spinning would tire beginners out. I suggest maybe make a long slider then make a 5 second spinner, or maybe add a break and map a 5 second spinner.
00:26:131 (1,2) - I don't like stacking in lower diffs....but this is an easy 190 BPM so this will be way too fast for beginners. I suggest using only one note.
00:30:236 (3) - Why is there a slowdown all of a sudden? There's nothing in the music that needs slowdown. Please change it to 1x.
00:32:131 (x) - Delete the break. It's so short and the HP drain is so low you don't really need it.
00:34:026 (1,2,3,4) - I consider this pattern a "normal/hard" pattern. I Think this will be hard for beginners to read. Maybe try another pattern?
00:42:868 (8) - End slider at 00:43:499. Sounds nicer.
00:49:184 (1) - Remove this kiai time....it's useless. The entire kiai time is just a break. Either you map something in the kiai time or remove it.
01:04:341 (1) - I suggest you use like .75 here instead of 1x. Beginners probably forgot slider speeds were this fast.
01:06:236 (2) - ....You made a jump in easy...Space this.
01:06:868 (1) - And....remove this spinner. This is way too short for beginners.
01:08:289 (2) - Space properly.
01:16:657 (1) - Start at 01:16:973 (1) and end at 01:17:289 (1) instead? Feels like it follows vocal better.
01:21:078 (6) - Space this correctly. Beginners might click early because of different spacing.

Normal:
Normal+ is an ugly name. Rename it to hard. Sounds more suited than normal the way you mapped.
00:06:236 (1,2) - Can't silence repeats. You can only silence slider ends or spinners. Please raise volume for these sliders.
00:13:815 (1) - Same note about spinner in easy.
00:28:973 (1,2) - Don't do this.. a fast slider than a slow slider when the song doesn't feel like any of those speed up or slow down fit. Use 1x.
01:32:131 (1,1) - Idk I think this might be kinda hard for hard. 1/2 note after spinner. :s Maybe just remove note and start spinner from there.

Nold:
00:34:815 (3) - Maybe stack at slider end? It feels kinda awkward movement since you have to move back after a slider when it doesn't have a repeat. Just my opinion.
00:39:552 (2,3) - Idk about this. Kinda high AR, so people without snaking sliders might read 2 as a slider. Maybe move 2 somewhere else? Or make the slider end somewhere else?
00:42:078 (2,3) - ^
00:52:657 (2) - off grid. Please move this note up more. Currently it is off the grid which is unrankable.
Ulysses
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Joined September 2010
Ulysses
ALL FIXED :)
8-) words words words words words words words

Download: Hatsune Miku - Infinity (Short Ver.) (Sun Rainbow) [Nold].osu
JoJo
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Joined July 2010
JoJo
Request from IRC @.@

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. Source: cosMo
  2. Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 nold_1702
  3. 2个你的难度的KIAI时间不一样,不统一下么
[Nold]
  1. 00:22:657 (4,5) - Spacing?
  2. 00:28:657 (3) - 没叠好
  3. 00:30:236 (1,2,3) - DS太难读了,(第一次玩)完全反应不过来的
  4. 00:30:710 (2) - 可以叠更好在00:29:920 (4)上
  5. 00:43:499 (5,6,7) - Spacing
  6. 00:46:184 (4,5,1,2) - 都挤一块了.....
  7. 00:58:341 (x) - 加个note?
  8. 01:11:289 (2) - 都快出屏幕了...
  9. 01:13:500 (2) - 没叠好.
  10. 01:26:920 (x) - 加note
[Easy]
  1. HD+2 AR+2
  2. easy难度用2.0x的DS...不太妥吧@ @
  3. 00:30:236 (x) - 无用的timing section,删
  4. 00:39:078 (1) - 从这里开始到该难度结束DS突然就变小了,能解释下理由么...我认为这是绝对unrankable的
  5. 00:49:184 (x) - 这里有2根重叠的timing section,一根kiai一根没有,删掉不需要的那根
  6. 00:50:447 (2,3,4) - 没有叠好,完美堆叠的方法:设置0.0x的DS然后关掉网格snap,开启DSsnap,最后移动note
[关于Storyboard的吐槽]
  1. [Title-SR.png] bestmap=>beatmap
  2. 01:04:341 01:14:447 这转的也太违和了..还不如不要..
  3. 01:05:605 这是专门用来瞎眼的么..
先写这么多了@ @
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow

JoJo wrote:

Request from IRC @.@

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. Source: cosMo
  2. Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 nold_1702
  3. 2个你的难度的KIAI时间不一样,不统一下么
那是别人做的……不用也可以的吧…………

[Nold]
  1. 00:22:657 (4,5) - Spacing?
  2. 00:28:657 (3) - 没叠好
  3. 00:30:236 (1,2,3) - DS太难读了,(第一次玩)完全反应不过来的
  4. 00:30:710 (2) - 可以叠更好在00:29:920 (4)上
  5. 00:43:499 (5,6,7) - Spacing
  6. 00:46:184 (4,5,1,2) - 都挤一块了.....
  7. 00:58:341 (x) - 加个note?
  8. 01:11:289 (2) - 都快出屏幕了...
  9. 01:13:500 (2) - 没叠好.
  10. 01:26:920 (x) - 加note
等NOLD~
[Easy]
  1. HD+2 AR+2
  2. easy难度用2.0x的DS...不太妥吧@ @
  3. 00:30:236 (x) - 无用的timing section,删
  4. 00:39:078 (1) - 从这里开始到该难度结束DS突然就变小了,能解释下理由么...我认为这是绝对unrankable的
  5. 00:49:184 (x) - 这里有2根重叠的timing section,一根kiai一根没有,删掉不需要的那根
  6. 00:50:447 (2,3,4) - 没有叠好,完美堆叠的方法:设置0.0x的DS然后关掉网格snap,开启DSsnap,最后移动note
已改~
[关于Storyboard的吐槽]
  1. [Title-SR.png] bestmap=>beatmap
  2. 01:04:341 01:14:447 这转的也太违和了..还不如不要..
  3. 01:05:605 这是专门用来瞎眼的么..
是的~
已改~
先写这么多了@ @
Ulysses
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Ulysses
:)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Infinity (Short Ver.) (Sun Rainbow) [Nold].osu
S h i o n
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Joined July 2010
S h i o n
:) 你好~ (in-game request)

General
  1. easy直接跳到5星? 分数差了近十倍,加个hard.
  2. storyboard转得我头晕...这还能忍受, 00:41:605 (1) - 这个实在...

Easy
  1. 为什么 spacing so BIG ? 和慢速的slider超违和.
  2. 00:32:447 (4) - 我猜这里本来有个spinner? 删了之后忘记把绿线删了?
  3. 00:35:289 (4) - 2.0的spcing 放不下了吧...

Nold
  1. 00:49:657 (3，4) - 很奇怪的节奏，真要用的话把这2note个换成slider吧
  2. 01:08:131 (1,2) - 1/3 snap
  3. 01:22:499 (2) - 1/3 snap

恕我直言,insane还算不错,想要rank的话就必须把easy扔了，按1.0左右的spacing作图，然后保持一个好的难度传播.(easy-normal-hard-insane)
祝好运~
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Ulysses
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Ulysses
你說什麼我都fix了什麼
但是這是我的難度~
名字不是問題吧...
另外~在所有diff加上tag:nold_1702
讓別人知道我的存在T^T :(

Download: Hatsune Miku - Infinity (Short Ver.) (Sun Rainbow) [Nold].osu
Love
osu! Alumni
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Love
Can I make a taiko diff?
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow

Love wrote:

Can I make a taiko diff?
Yes,Thanks.
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow
给nold KD。
聊天MOD记录



Ulysses
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Ulysses

Sun Rainbow wrote:

给nold KD。
聊天MOD记录



mold1702 isn't my account.
mold1702 is my big brother 's account and I always use it for playing osu mode and use my account for mapping.
Also,mold1702(My brother)still plays osu now.
So,ALL MAT AND BAT PLEASE DON'T REPORT ME BECAUSE I FOLLOW THE INSTRUSTION.(MOLD1702 IS NOT MINE)
L_P
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L_P
insane
00:05:447 (3) - 移上点（现在你这种spacing说跳不跳，说小不小，不如干脆一点，跳大）
00:13:657 (5) - delete
00:14:920 (3) - 为何在这里jump?
00:17:447 (3) - 同上
00:19:973 (3) - 前面↑jump了 这里又没有jump?
00:29:762 (3,4) - 给combo burst 遮太多了
00:38:605 (4) - spacing跟前面不一样
00:45:236 (4,1,2,3) - 遮太多了
00:49:920 - 这里空着，不好打
00:50:447 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里不好打
00:52:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里怪怪的，节奏不适合
01:21:394 (4,2,3,4) - 打的时候被combo hit burst 遮住了

虽然kiai不知道加在哪里好，但是还是建议你加一个。。。。

um....你的insane现状 最多能approve...你要吗？不要的话 就改，要改很多很多，因为有太多的note遮住了，approve是个不错的选择
*spacing怪怪酱

hard
哪有人一开头四个note然后break的，先做完啦
ar太快了吧对hard来说

easy
喂喂喂spacing对easy来说大了两倍不止了
00:15:078 (2) - 太好笑了吧这个形状
00:20:447 (3) - easy不能用这种
啊。。。。你的easy简直比normal难，虽然我能够ss,但是对初学者来说很难。。。。不如找人帮你做？别找我啊哈哈

慢来慢来。。。。
wule
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Joined April 2011
wule
支持一下，蛮棒的！孙彩虹加油 :)
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow
.....到了这儿还叫我孙彩虹……
Shirahane_Suoh
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Shirahane_Suoh
@@ 這行嗎?

Download: Kuraki Mai with Stefanie - Tonight, I Feel Close to You (Sun Rainbow) [Collab].osu
Sun Rainbow
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Potential wrote:

@@ 這行嗎?
我的天啊，你做得太好了。。。做得比我好……
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
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Strawberry
:) hi 孙彩虹
request in game

[Collab]
-ar7或者ar6比较合适？（仅供参考
-normal的circle size？
-more jump
-nc一般都下在长白线（起码规则一些
-offset2105
00:20:391 (1) - 摆正？
00:23:000 (3) - ^
00:38:652 (1,2) - 拉的更美观点？比如把00:38:652 (1) - 中间的锚点移动到x220 y132 另一个复制一下然后翻转一下就可以了 另外感觉这种timing间距比较大的slider可以适当拉大spac
00:43:544 (6,1) - so closed
00:45:826 (1) - 有点被挡住
01:24:957 (2,3) - ^
01:29:196 (1,2) - 把1复制过来到2就好了 形状不一样啊
02:07:348 (1,2) - ^ 再翻转一下
01:30:826 - 怎么这里开始这么长一个nc都没有orz
01:48:109 (3) - 有点丑
02:03:435 (1) - ^
02:10:935 (6) - ^
02:49:087 - 这根红线意义不明 也导致后面的slider对不上节奏(如果想更改sv的话+绿线就可以了

[Easy]
00:43:870 (4) - NC
00:45:174 (1) - remove NC
02:02:783 (2) - NC
02:03:435 (1) - remove NC
02:07:348 (3) - NC
02:49:087 (1) - 问题和collab一样

this is all goodluck guys
Sun Rainbow
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Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow
OK~
Shigure Sakuya
Shigure Sakuya
Your message is too short
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
ah?你这什么意思

Sun Rainbow wrote:

-->=w=那个玩过了，FAIL。。。好吧。进入正题（为什么你电脑会有我的LISA的歌曲呢？我记得没叫你帮我MOD？）
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38370

L_P wrote:

insane
00:05:447 (3) - 移上点（现在你这种spacing说跳不跳，说小不小，不如干脆一点，跳大）
00:13:657 (5) - delete
00:14:920 (3) - 为何在这里jump?
00:17:447 (3) - 同上
00:19:973 (3) - 前面↑jump了 这里又没有jump?
00:29:762 (3,4) - 给combo burst 遮太多了
00:38:605 (4) - spacing跟前面不一样
00:45:236 (4,1,2,3) - 遮太多了
00:49:920 - 这里空着，不好打
00:50:447 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里不好打
00:52:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里怪怪的，节奏不适合
01:21:394 (4,2,3,4) - 打的时候被combo hit burst 遮住了

虽然kiai不知道加在哪里好，但是还是建议你加一个。。。。

um....你的insane现状 最多能approve...你要吗？不要的话 就改，要改很多很多，因为有太多的note遮住了，approve是个不错的选择
*spacing怪怪酱

hard
哪有人一开头四个note然后break的，先做完啦
ar太快了吧对hard来说

easy
喂喂喂spacing对easy来说大了两倍不止了
00:15:078 (2) - 太好笑了吧这个形状
00:20:447 (3) - easy不能用这种
啊。。。。你的easy简直比normal难，虽然我能够ss,但是对初学者来说很难。。。。不如找人帮你做？别找我啊哈哈

慢来慢来。。。。
不是mod过了吗。。。kudos 都给了
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
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Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow

L_P wrote:

ah?你这什么意思

Sun Rainbow wrote:

-->=w=那个玩过了，FAIL。。。好吧。进入正题（为什么你电脑会有我的LISA的歌曲呢？我记得没叫你帮我MOD？）
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38370

L_P wrote:

insane
00:05:447 (3) - 移上点（现在你这种spacing说跳不跳，说小不小，不如干脆一点，跳大）
00:13:657 (5) - delete
00:14:920 (3) - 为何在这里jump?
00:17:447 (3) - 同上
00:19:973 (3) - 前面↑jump了 这里又没有jump?
00:29:762 (3,4) - 给combo burst 遮太多了
00:38:605 (4) - spacing跟前面不一样
00:45:236 (4,1,2,3) - 遮太多了
00:49:920 - 这里空着，不好打
00:50:447 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里不好打
00:52:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里怪怪的，节奏不适合
01:21:394 (4,2,3,4) - 打的时候被combo hit burst 遮住了

虽然kiai不知道加在哪里好，但是还是建议你加一个。。。。

um....你的insane现状 最多能approve...你要吗？不要的话 就改，要改很多很多，因为有太多的note遮住了，approve是个不错的选择
*spacing怪怪酱

hard
哪有人一开头四个note然后break的，先做完啦
ar太快了吧对hard来说

easy
喂喂喂spacing对easy来说大了两倍不止了
00:15:078 (2) - 太好笑了吧这个形状
00:20:447 (3) - easy不能用这种
啊。。。。你的easy简直比normal难，虽然我能够ss,但是对初学者来说很难。。。。不如找人帮你做？别找我啊哈哈

慢来慢来。。。。
不是mod过了吗。。。kudos 都给了
那是INFINITY吧……这个是TONIGHT,I FEEL CLOSE YOU。………………
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
IRC
21:42 <tutuhaha> : easy
21:42 <tutuhaha> : 00:02:131 (1) - 这个绿线去掉
21:42 <tutuhaha> : 先IRC=A=
21:43 <Sun Rainbow> : o
21:43 <Sun Rainbow> : OK
21:43 <tutuhaha> : 00:04:739 (3) - 中间那个note+whistle
21:43 <Sun Rainbow> : OK
21:44 <tutuhaha> : 然后尾巴建议用减小声音的finish
21:44 <Sun Rainbow> : .
21:44 <tutuhaha> : 00:23:000 (1) - 然后这个和前面的4间距不对
21:45 <tutuhaha> : 然后把这个slider加在轨道上的音效去掉....太吵了
21:45 <tutuhaha> : 稍等一下下
21:46 <Sun Rainbow> : 我改这样行吗？
21:46 <Sun Rainbow> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/200480
21:47 <tutuhaha> : 唔
21:47 <tutuhaha> : 这样
21:47 <tutuhaha> : 你搞一个slider
21:47 <tutuhaha> : 00:23:000 (X) - 这边开始
21:48 <tutuhaha> : 00:24:304 (X) - 这边结束
21:48 <tutuhaha> : 然后折返一下
21:48 <tutuhaha> : 00:26:913 (X) - 然后这边加个circle
21:49 <tutuhaha> : 00:41:913 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这5个最好排成直线
21:49 <tutuhaha> : 你现在时摆的属于有点层次不齐...
21:49 <Sun Rainbow> : ...
21:49 <tutuhaha> : 00:45:174 (3) - 这个加在轨道上的音效也去掉
21:50 <tutuhaha> : 00:48:109 (1,1) - 这两个和前面的3挤在一起几乎读不出来,对于新手来说太难了
21:50 <Sun Rainbow> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/200482
21:50 <tutuhaha> : 00:48:109 (1) - 顺便一说在这个slider的中间加个whistle会好一点
21:51 <Sun Rainbow> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/200482
21:51 <Sun Rainbow> : 这样吧？
21:51 <tutuhaha> : 00:53:652 (5) - 在这里加个circle会好一点,前面重复的节奏稍多
21:51 <tutuhaha> : 恩
21:52 <tutuhaha> : 00:58:870 (3) - 这边也加个circle
21:52 <Sun Rainbow> : ok
21:52 <tutuhaha> : 00:54:304 (1) - 这个轨道的音效也去掉._.
21:52 <tutuhaha> : 太刺耳了
21:52 <Sun Rainbow> : .
21:52 <Sun Rainbow> : ._.'''''
21:53 <tutuhaha> : 顺便一说
21:53 <Sun Rainbow> : ?
21:53 <tutuhaha> : 00:49:250 (X) - 从这里开始的那个SBunrank了
21:53 <tutuhaha> : 调一下
21:54 <tutuhaha> : 再建议一个
21:54 <Sun Rainbow> : SB LOAD?
21:55 <tutuhaha> : 00:49:087 (X) - 01:09:957 (X) 这边加个KIAI会比较好
21:55 <tutuhaha> : 恩
21:55 <tutuhaha> : 显红色的差不多都是unrank...
21:55 <Sun Rainbow> : ....不会吧……
21:56 <tutuhaha> : 是的.-.
21:56 <Sun Rainbow> : 有些人的到了6.9都RANK
21:56 <Sun Rainbow> : 我看看
21:56 <tutuhaha> : 停
21:56 <tutuhaha> : 这SB你做的?
21:57 *Sun Rainbow is editing (Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35701]
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : 嗯
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : 这个的
21:57 <tutuhaha> : 哇哦好帅
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : 00:13:603-
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : 这里都到8.00了啦
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : KPY的
21:58 <tutuhaha> : 嘛其实我对SB了解不太深
21:58 <tutuhaha> : 就先这样了
21:58 <tutuhaha> : 01:06:044 (1) - 接下来说这个
21:58 <tutuhaha> : 这个唔建议你去掉两个折返然后加spinner
21:59 <Sun Rainbow> : oo
21:59 <tutuhaha> : 01:20:391 (1) - 这个尾巴加whistle
21:59 <Sun Rainbow> : 噢
21:59 <tutuhaha> : 噢噢噢还有一件比较重要的
21:59 <Sun Rainbow> : 我得下了啦……
21:59 <Sun Rainbow> : 说吧
21:59 <tutuhaha> : 那我先把这个post了
21:59 <tutuhaha> : 01:20:391 (1) - 从这里开始我觉得timming不准
22:00 <tutuhaha> : 你还是重新找人测一下
22:00 <tutuhaha> : 前面我打的时候是差3秒左右
22:00 <tutuhaha> : 从这里开始我差30秒左右-A-

另，个人感觉easy的SV太慢了
98BPM的歌0.8sv稍许胃疼，摆的太挤会显得不好看，也会拖你的星数和分数，个人比较不喜欢这种挤死人的排法，加油
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tutuhaha wrote:

IRC
21:42 <tutuhaha> : easy
21:42 <tutuhaha> : 00:02:131 (1) - 这个绿线去掉
21:42 <tutuhaha> : 先IRC=A=
21:43 <Sun Rainbow> : o
21:43 <Sun Rainbow> : OK
21:43 <tutuhaha> : 00:04:739 (3) - 中间那个note+whistle
21:43 <Sun Rainbow> : OK
21:44 <tutuhaha> : 然后尾巴建议用减小声音的finish
21:44 <Sun Rainbow> : .
21:44 <tutuhaha> : 00:23:000 (1) - 然后这个和前面的4间距不对
21:45 <tutuhaha> : 然后把这个slider加在轨道上的音效去掉....太吵了
21:45 <tutuhaha> : 稍等一下下
21:46 <Sun Rainbow> : 我改这样行吗？
21:46 <Sun Rainbow> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/200480
21:47 <tutuhaha> : 唔
21:47 <tutuhaha> : 这样
21:47 <tutuhaha> : 你搞一个slider
21:47 <tutuhaha> : 00:23:000 (X) - 这边开始
21:48 <tutuhaha> : 00:24:304 (X) - 这边结束
21:48 <tutuhaha> : 然后折返一下
21:48 <tutuhaha> : 00:26:913 (X) - 然后这边加个circle
21:49 <tutuhaha> : 00:41:913 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这5个最好排成直线
21:49 <tutuhaha> : 你现在时摆的属于有点层次不齐...
21:49 <Sun Rainbow> : ...
21:49 <tutuhaha> : 00:45:174 (3) - 这个加在轨道上的音效也去掉
21:50 <tutuhaha> : 00:48:109 (1,1) - 这两个和前面的3挤在一起几乎读不出来,对于新手来说太难了
21:50 <Sun Rainbow> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/200482
21:50 <tutuhaha> : 00:48:109 (1) - 顺便一说在这个slider的中间加个whistle会好一点
21:51 <Sun Rainbow> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/200482
21:51 <Sun Rainbow> : 这样吧？
21:51 <tutuhaha> : 00:53:652 (5) - 在这里加个circle会好一点,前面重复的节奏稍多
21:51 <tutuhaha> : 恩
21:52 <tutuhaha> : 00:58:870 (3) - 这边也加个circle
21:52 <Sun Rainbow> : ok
21:52 <tutuhaha> : 00:54:304 (1) - 这个轨道的音效也去掉._.
21:52 <tutuhaha> : 太刺耳了
21:52 <Sun Rainbow> : .
21:52 <Sun Rainbow> : ._.'''''
21:53 <tutuhaha> : 顺便一说
21:53 <Sun Rainbow> : ?
21:53 <tutuhaha> : 00:49:250 (X) - 从这里开始的那个SBunrank了
21:53 <tutuhaha> : 调一下
21:54 <tutuhaha> : 再建议一个
21:54 <Sun Rainbow> : SB LOAD?
21:55 <tutuhaha> : 00:49:087 (X) - 01:09:957 (X) 这边加个KIAI会比较好
21:55 <tutuhaha> : 恩
21:55 <tutuhaha> : 显红色的差不多都是unrank...
21:55 <Sun Rainbow> : ....不会吧……
21:56 <tutuhaha> : 是的.-.
21:56 <Sun Rainbow> : 有些人的到了6.9都RANK
21:56 <Sun Rainbow> : 我看看
21:56 <tutuhaha> : 停
21:56 <tutuhaha> : 这SB你做的?
21:57 *Sun Rainbow is editing (Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35701]
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : 嗯
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : 这个的
21:57 <tutuhaha> : 哇哦好帅
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : 00:13:603-
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : 这里都到8.00了啦
21:57 <Sun Rainbow> : KPY的
21:58 <tutuhaha> : 嘛其实我对SB了解不太深
21:58 <tutuhaha> : 就先这样了
21:58 <tutuhaha> : 01:06:044 (1) - 接下来说这个
21:58 <tutuhaha> : 这个唔建议你去掉两个折返然后加spinner
21:59 <Sun Rainbow> : oo
21:59 <tutuhaha> : 01:20:391 (1) - 这个尾巴加whistle
21:59 <Sun Rainbow> : 噢
21:59 <tutuhaha> : 噢噢噢还有一件比较重要的
21:59 <Sun Rainbow> : 我得下了啦……
21:59 <Sun Rainbow> : 说吧
21:59 <tutuhaha> : 那我先把这个post了
21:59 <tutuhaha> : 01:20:391 (1) - 从这里开始我觉得timming不准
22:00 <tutuhaha> : 你还是重新找人测一下
22:00 <tutuhaha> : 前面我打的时候是差3秒左右
22:00 <tutuhaha> : 从这里开始我差30秒左右-A-

另，个人感觉easy的SV太慢了
98BPM的歌0.8sv稍许胃疼，摆的太挤会显得不好看，也会拖你的星数和分数，个人比较不喜欢这种挤死人的排法，加油
这个是哪里来的啦。。。
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