1. Extra (4.82 stars, 1248 notes)
2. Hyper (4.8 stars, 317 notes)

Yasora-chan wrote:

Hi~ time to mod your map

General
Priview point in the hyper diff is not set. Set it same with extra~!

Hyper
HP -1
AR -1
OD -1
00:23:665 (3) 2 grid down, 2 grid right?
00:33:665 (4) This slider stack with 5, and I don't like to see it D: can change it? (just suggestion)
01:03:331 (2,3,4) NC?
01:06:998 (7) ^
01:07:165 (1) del NC?
01:07:665 (2) same with 00:33:665
01:13:331 (3) 4 grid down?
01:13:831 (4) 1 grid down, 2 grid left?
01:40:331 (5) same with 00:33:665
01:53:998 (6,7) NC?
01:55:331 (2,3) ^
02:09:665 (1) same with 00:33:665
03:01:665 (3) 1 grid left?
03:03:665 (2) 1 grid up?

Extra
HP -1
AR -1
Error: http://puu.sh/757Y
00:40:331 (x) add circle?
01:16:998 (5) NC?
01:17:081 (1) del NC?
01:19:665 (8) NC?
01:19:748 (1) del NC?
01:14:331 (8) NC?
01:14:415 (1) del NC?
01:16:998 (5) NC?
01:17:081 (1) del NC?
01:19:665 (8) NC?
01:19:748 (1) del NC?
01:55:331 (2,3) NC?
01:57:665 (x) add circle?
02:21:498 (11) del clap

Crazy diff =w="

okay~ that's all~ maybe, this map will be approved beatmap : P

Anchor wrote:

Hello ~ random mod~

[General]
剛剛發現你會中文.. 我便用中文了
你應該要有個3星以下的diff... 很多新手不能打4星diff

[Mura's Relax]
00:38:999 (1) - 我不太喜歡這個... 可以用有反回的silder?
00:43:998 (3,4) - 3和4太近了... 第一次玩時,按太快miss了
01:08:665 (4,5) - 4和5很難看... 雖然不是看不到
加kiai time吧...

[Hyper]
00:52:331 (1,3) - 近一點會比較好... 突然jump遠了
02:36:498 (4,5) - 近一點
其他我找不到地方可以吐嘈了...

[Extra]
HP drain -2 (最少也-1吧... HP扣太快了)
01:56:165 (1,2,3) - 這發生什麼了...
03:12:331 (1,1,1) - 距離遠一點, 不要客氣!
04:52:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -放在同一點上不太好

Extra真可怕... (在分數和距離的意思上..)
我是新手moder.. 所以不喜歡我的建議那就算吧~
但能夠接受, 當然最好!

L_P wrote:

sorry 我没有check我的que

现在来mod

你这张只可以approve,因为要rank的一定要有easy/normal 3.00星以下，知道否？看看guideline啦

relax
00:24:332 (1) - spacing不均，有用distancesnap 的习惯吗？relax还开到1.5我跳
00:30:332 (4) - http://puu.sh/7pBe
00:37:665 (1) - 以relax来说，spinner太短了
01:03:998 (6) - 可以学前面的pattern,放在slider head 上
01:08:665 (4,5) - 这。。。unrankable

哇 你没开distance snap 我很难mod啊 我放弃了 还有，每一个难度的kiai time 要一致

hyper

00:21:665 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这些可以放一点pattern,如六角形 、 由小变大的三角形等等。强烈建议
有很多地方可以放pattern,好像
01:22:998 (1,2,3,4) - 可以做一个风扇形状的，slider 的 pattern可以重复的
你的map没有太多unrankable/不好的障眼的东西，但是缺乏了生气啊
其实作map需要作pattern,让玩家熟悉你的排法

要多帮别人作mod试试看,会加强你的map能力。你现在就好像我的第一张图，没啥好没啥坏，加油啊 不要骂我啊 我是真心的啊

sorry for my bad mod

L_P wrote:

加油加油 送星

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright im gonna mod only extra just as u requested

General:
Is the slider ball supposed to move like that? - yes


Extra:
00:59:665(5) - NC - no
01:04:331(6) - ^ - no
01:11:331(10) - ^ - no, but i add some nc on other positions of these combos. Actually i didn't notice the problem of hit sound here
01:56:165(1,2,3) - this is unreadable. people may mistaken the 1st note as a slider.- ok, i will change it
03:26:998(3) - x:230 y:65 (no distance or grid snap) aim carefully for this 1- it's disigned like that
03:48:581(3,4) - hidden repeat slider fix this- no thanks

This is the best i can do. GL

biwako wrote:

Hi,I mod [Extra] only because your request.
[Extra]
00:16:332 - soft hitsound? yes
00:26:332 (3) - stack to 00:26:082 (1) end? ok
00:27:498 (3,4) - 2 objects exist same time fixed
00:30:998 (5) - stack to 00:30:332 (3) end? ok
00:31:331 (6) - slider end stack to 00:30:665 (4)? ok
00:37:998 (1) - remove new combo - no, it's designed
00:38:332 (1) - ^ - no
01:14:415 (1) - ^ - no
01:17:081 (1) - ^ - no
01:19:748 (1) - ^ - no
03:01:498 (6) - stack error -fixed
03:12:665 (1) - remove new combo - no
03:12:998 (1) - ^ - no
03:16:331 (1) - ^ - no
03:18:998 (1) - ^ - no
04:53:998 (1) - ^ - no
04:54:331 (1) - ^ - no
04:54:915 - soft hitsound? - yes