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gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月15日 at 21:12:58

Artist: Nekomirin feat. Miyu
Title: Flan's Music Class
Source: Touhou
Tags: Flandre Scarlet Sherry
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4976kb
Play Time: 04:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.18 stars, 229 notes)
  2. Hard (4.25 stars, 338 notes)
  3. Normal (3.57 stars, 310 notes)
  4. Sherry's Music Class (5 stars, 696 notes)
Download: Nekomirin feat. Miyu - Flan's Music Class
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy 100%
Normal 100%
Hard 100%
Sherry's Music Class 100%



Thank you modding!
baba1994
phonic
Lolikon1202
_Gezo_
Andruchon
Bobo
Komeiji Yuki
terametis
What
Mikumiku97
TicClick
Guy
Last edited by gekkiii , edited 224 times in total.
resona_old_1
resona_old_1
太鼓diff出来ました。
僕の太鼓diffを使って頂きありがとうございました。

Download: miyu - Flan's Music Class (reigeki) [baba`s Taiko Oni].osu
Last edited by resona_old_1 , edited 1 time in total.
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
Insane
Insane

AR+1
青線に置いているのが目立ちましたね
Kiai　Timeを追加してみるのもいいと思います

00:02:215 (3) 初見でこれは少し・・・配置を変えてみてはどうですか??
01:22:840 (1) なぜKiai Timeを切られてるんですか？
01:32:456 (5) 2グリット上
01:51:902 (7) リズムがおかしいと思います
02:04:090 (8) ^
02:43:745 (7) New combo
02:43:934 (1) remove combo
02:55:746 (5) New combo
02:55:934 (1) remove combo
02:58:184 (8) New combo
04:05:309 (2) 1グリット右

Insane　Mod　クリック

Rnked待ってます　ふぁいと♪
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic

Elize wrote:

Insane
Insane

AR+1
青線に置いているのが目立ちましたね
Kiai　Timeを追加してみるのもいいと思います

00:02:215 (3) 初見でこれは少し・・・配置を変えてみてはどうですか??
01:22:840 (1) なぜKiai Timeを切られてるんですか？
01:32:456 (5) 2グリット上
01:51:902 (7) リズムがおかしいと思います
02:04:090 (8) ^
02:43:745 (7) New combo
02:43:934 (1) remove combo
02:55:746 (5) New combo
02:55:934 (1) remove combo
02:58:184 (8) New combo
04:05:309 (2) 1グリット右

Insane　Mod　クリック

Rnked待ってます　ふぁいと♪

Kudosu Please
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
Elizeさんありがとうございますm(_ _)m

kiai Timeが切れているところは故意だったのですが、ラスト以外修正しました :D

01:51:902 (7) リズムがおかしいと思います
02:04:090 (8) ^
この部分のリズムがおかしいところはヴォーカルに合わせているからで
確かに初見ではやり難いと思いましたのでスライダーにしました。

02:43:745 (7) New combo
02:43:934 (1) remove combo
02:55:746 (5) New combo
02:55:934 (1) remove combo
02:58:184 (8) New combo
修正しました
04:05:309 (2) 1グリット右
ずれていましたね :? 修正しました

baba1994さんElizeさん　スターありがとうございます
resona_old_1
resona_old_1
太鼓修正しました。
Download: miyu - Flan's Music Class (reigeki) [baba`s Taiko Oni].osu


Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Feel free to use my Taiko BG if you want, because it's almost the same song XD

Mine is just the LV4 remix but whatever.

EDIT : Isn't the artist Nekomirin feat. Miyu ?
WeisCrahe
82 posts
Joined March 2011
WeisCrahe
よかったよ～うー☆


STAR～ :)

～My pending beatmap～
SPOILER
Ikakakaka!
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32402
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
thank _Gezo_ karasu1202 :)
fixed artist Nekomirin feat. Miyu
Andruchon
90 posts
Joined April 2011
Andruchon
Easy:
00:16:934 (1) - remove the last point on the grid...looks better+ there is no sense of it
00:22:934 (1,4) - please move (1) (2) and (3) or the slider so, that they don't get in the way of each other http://puu.sh/4gRQ
00:26:121 (1) - avoid repeater slider at the beginner level
00:40:184 (6,1) - ^ this part is too hard for easy
00:45:434 (4,5,6,1) - ^
00:52:184 (6,1) - ^
00:57:434 (10,11,12) - ^
01:07:934 (1) - remove new combo please
01:13:184 (4,1) - this circle overlap the edge of the slider http://puu.sh/4gSw
01:16:934 (1) - remove new combo please
01:28:934 (1,2) - this slider overlap the edge of the other slider http://puu.sh/4gSL
01:39:434 (4,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/4gTK http://puu.sh/4gTN
03:27:809 (6,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/4gT0
03:28:934 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/4gT2
03:49:934 (2) - how about doing it like that? http://puu.sh/4gTY
04:00:434 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/4gT9
04:12:434 (1,2) - slider should not overlap themselves


insane:
00:15:246 (1,2) - remove them, 00:15:434 (4) - new combo, 00:15:621 (2) - remove new combo...fix the spacing
00:19:184 (6,7,8,9,10) - dont do sth like that
00:18:246 (1,2,3,4,5) - sounds strange...try to remove (4) and (5) ?
00:17:871 (1,2,3) - make sth different
00:19:184 (7,8,9,10) - avoid that, its just confusing
00:21:246 (1,2) - remove them...00:21:434 (1) - new combo 00:21:621 (1) - remove combo...fix the spacing
00:25:184 (4,5,6,7) - avoid that
00:24:246 (1,2) - delete them...00:24:434 (4) - new combo...00:24:621 (1) - remove new combo...fix the spacing
00:25:184 (4,5,6,7) - avoid that
01:32:684 (3,4,5) - slider should not overlap other slider http://puu.sh/4gX3
03:35:683 (1,2,3,4,1) - avoid that


sorry, i can't mod taiko.
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
thank Andruchon!

fixed Easy and Insane

SPOILER

Andruchon wrote:

Easy:
00:16:934 (1) - remove the last point on the grid...looks better+ there is no sense of it
00:22:934 (1,4) - please move (1) (2) and (3) or the slider so, that they don't get in the way of each other http://puu.sh/4gRQ
00:26:121 (1) - avoid repeater slider at the beginner level
00:40:184 (6,1) - ^ this part is too hard for easy
00:45:434 (4,5,6,1) - ^
00:52:184 (6,1) - ^
00:57:434 (10,11,12) - ^
01:07:934 (1) - remove new combo please
01:13:184 (4,1) - this circle overlap the edge of the slider http://puu.sh/4gSw
01:16:934 (1) - remove new combo please
01:28:934 (1,2) - this slider overlap the edge of the other slider http://puu.sh/4gSL
01:39:434 (4,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/4gTK http://puu.sh/4gTN
03:27:809 (6,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/4gT0
03:28:934 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/4gT2
03:49:934 (2) - how about doing it like that? http://puu.sh/4gTY
04:00:434 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/4gT9
04:12:434 (1,2) - slider should not overlap themselves


insane:
00:15:246 (1,2) - remove them, 00:15:434 (4) - new combo, 00:15:621 (2) - remove new combo...fix the spacing
00:19:184 (6,7,8,9,10) - dont do sth like that
00:18:246 (1,2,3,4,5) - sounds strange...try to remove (4) and (5) ?
00:17:871 (1,2,3) - make sth different
00:19:184 (7,8,9,10) - avoid that, its just confusing
00:21:246 (1,2) - remove them...00:21:434 (1) - new combo 00:21:621 (1) - remove combo...fix the spacing
00:25:184 (4,5,6,7) - avoid that
00:24:246 (1,2) - delete them...00:24:434 (4) - new combo...00:24:621 (1) - remove new combo...fix the spacing
00:25:184 (4,5,6,7) - avoid that
01:32:684 (3,4,5) - slider should not overlap other slider http://puu.sh/4gX3
03:35:683 (1,2,3,4,1) - avoid that


sorry, i can't mod taiko.
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,842 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Taiko diff looks fine to me. Also the 1/6 is okay. Maybe a little combo breaker, but this is not a problem.
You should reupload his Taiko diff. with the right Artist name. Otherwise we can't download the map.

☆ Because of the Taiko diff.~
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
@^ The 1/6 gimmick is hard I admit it but it's the 1/3 before is where I missed

[attachment=0:e0c3c]screenshot493.png[/attachment:e0c3c]
[attachment=1:e0c3c]_Gezo_ - Nekomirin feat. Miyu - Flan's Music Class [baba`s Taiko Oni] (2011-08-19) Taiko.osr[/attachment:e0c3c]

the last miss was a bug ;;

__________________________________________________________

I went through your folder and I saw that your mp3 file isn't rankable. It MUST be between 128~192 kbps and I found this (though I'm surprised to see this as the 2 values would be 224 and 256 lol)



I re-encoded it to 192kbps, offset is now 1996 (+62ms) Don't forget to resnap everything, notes and timing points.
http://up.ppy.sh/files/flanchanreencoded.mp3
To Baba1994 (lolol almost the offset) : Put 1994 as your offset too.

Download this to your beatmap, rename it as flan's music class.mp3 and FULL SUBMIT.
(Called it reencoded so say that I reencoded it, obvious. :P)

[Insane]
Tick rate 0.5 isn't rankable anymore. Please set it to 1.

Difficulty spread is not really good, it needs a Normal and a Hard (if you REALLY WANT to keep easy.)

No kudo please. Just an addidtion to the previous post.
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
sorry I gived kudosu because I didn't read "No kudo please. Just an addidtion to the previous post.

thanks for re-encod and offset

fixed all diff
Bobo_old
492 posts
Joined February 2011
Bobo_old
-Easy-

03:53:371 - Remove the clap.
03:53:746 - Clap.
03:54:871 - Remove the clap.
03:55:246 - Clap.
03:56:371 - Remove the clap.
03:56:746 - Clap.
03:58:996 - Shorten by 2 ticks.
04:05:371 - Remove clap.
04:05:746 - Clap.
04:10:621 - Remove clappy.
04:10:996 - Clappity clap clap.
04:26:839 - Forward 3 ticks. Shorten 3 ticks.

-Normal-

00:07:996 - New combo.
00:07:996 - Make this 1 tick longer, same goes for (2), (3) and (4).
00:10:996 - New combo.
00:13:996 - New combo.
00:16:996 - New combo.
00:19:996 - ^
00:22:996 - ^
00:26:183 - ^
00:40:996 - ^
00:42:496 - ^
00:43:996 - ^
00:46:996 - ^
00:48:496 - ^
00:49:996 - ^
00:51:496 - ^
00:52:996 - ^
00:54:496 - ^
00:55:996 - ^
00:57:496 - ^
01:28:996 - ^
01:31:996 - ^
01:34:996 - ^
01:37:996 - ^
01:40:996 - ^
01:43:996 - ^
01:46:996 - ^
01:52:996 - ^

Why am I only now realising I'm modding something that isn't finished??? D:
Baka Ross :(

-Insane-

Argh! Difficulty curve D:

Hmm, circle size 4.
HP Drain 5.
OD 6.

00:19:246 - New combo.

:o Alright I guess...
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
thank Bobo :)

Bobo wrote:

-Easy-

03:53:371 - Remove the clap. done
03:53:746 - Clap. done
03:54:871 - Remove the clap. done
03:55:246 - Clap. done
03:56:371 - Remove the clap. done
03:56:746 - Clap. done
03:58:996 - Shorten by 2 ticks.I'm thinking
04:05:371 - Remove clap. done
04:05:746 - Clap. done
04:10:621 - Remove clappy. done
04:10:996 - Clappity clap clap. done
04:26:839 - Forward 3 ticks. Shorten 3 ticks.I'm thinking

-Insane-


Hmm, circle size 4.done
HP Drain 5.7→6　because of too easy
OD 6.done

00:19:246 - New combo.done
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki
こんばんは :3

Random Modです

[General]
SPOILER
02:10:996 - 02:34:996 The break is too long (Maximum is 20 secs , try to reduce ?)

02:58:808 - 03:22:996 ^

PreviewTime on baba's diff is different , please fix it

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:53:371 (7,1) - Switch NC (New combo)

00:55:996 (5) - NC? 10combo is too long for easy

00:55:996 (5) - Add a circle ?

01:58:996 (5) - NC?


[Normal]　Seems it haven't finished , so I just pick the obvious problems :3

SPOILER
AR+1?

00:36:496 (4) - Spacing

01:47:746 (2) - doen't stack perfectly

02:04:996 (1) - NC?


[Insane]
SPOILER
01:35:746 (2) - The end of the slider doen't stack perfectly , Try use 0.0x and turn off the grid snap then reverse the slider

01:37:433 (x) - How about add a circle here

02:58:246 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird , delete (2) and add note on 02:58:433 , 02:58:621 ?

03:35:746 - 03:36:402 lol
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
Komeiji Yuki , thank moding! :)
ALL fixed (but Normal has been changed sharply. )
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
mod初心者なので配置の気になったところだけmodします
気に入らなければスルーしてください！


[Insane]
00:16:058 (4)　 　　　　1grid下
00:16:621 (6)　　　　　　1grid上+1grid左?
00:16:996 (7)　　　　　　1grid上?
00:26:464 (2)　　　　　　2grid左
00:26:652 (3) 1grid左
00:27:027 (4)　　　　　　1grid左
00:35:558 (4)　　　　　　1grid左
00:35:746 (5)　　　　　　スライダー自体を1grid左スライダーの終点を1grid下?
00:36:871 (3)　　　　　　1grid左
SPOILER
00:40:621 (5)　　　　　　1grid上?
00:40:808 (6)　　　　　　1grid右?
00:40:996 (1)　　　　　　1grid下?
00:41:183 (2~4)　　　　(280,136)(312,224)(376,160)?
　　
00:43:058 (4)　　　　　　1grid左
00:50:558 (4~5)　　　　1grid左
01:41:759 (3)　　　　　　1grid右
01:45:871 (4)　　　　　　1grid下
02:41:746 (3)~　　　　　Beat snap divisorを1/6にセットしてスライダーを折り変えすとリズム通りになるかも
03:54:496 (1)~(6)　　　もう少し綺麗に置けると思います
04:03:871 (3),(7)　　　 2grid右?

頑張ってください!Ranked期待してます :)
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
terametisさん、moddingありがとうございます :)
とても丁寧に見ていただいてとても助かりました


ほとんどを適応しましたが
04:03:871 (3),(7)　　　 2grid右?
はすでに変更してアップロード前だったので
適応できませんでした :|



02:41:746 (3)~　　　　　Beat snap divisorを1/6にセットしてスライダーを折り変えすとリズム通りになるかも
この部分はとても参考になりました、本当にありがとうございます :)

ranked目指してがんばっていきます >:(
What
231 posts
Joined December 2010
What
Hi :)/ . this map is good map ^^. but very long ~ :o
um~my noob modding.this modding is only my think. and sorry my eng is very bad ; __ ;


[Easy]
01:28:246 - Add note
03:22:996 - http://puu.sh/5NiB

[Normal]
01:48:996 - new combo
02:22:996,02:25:996 - i think need break time
02:37:246 - change slider (http://puu.sh/5NkW)
02:48:496 and 02:49:246 - spacing

[baba's Taiko oni]
sorry i can't modding Taiko map..

[Insane]
00:25:246 - finish 00:25:902
02:16:996 and 02:19:996 : i think need break time
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
thank you modding :)

What wrote:

[Easy]
01:28:246 - Add note done
03:22:996 - http://puu.sh/5NiB done

[Normal]
01:48:996 - new combo done
02:22:996,02:25:996 - i think need break timedone
02:37:246 - change slider (http://puu.sh/5NkW)done
02:48:496 and 02:49:246 - spacingdone

[baba's Taiko oni]
sorry i can't modding Taiko map..

[Insane]
00:25:246 - finish 00:25:902done
02:16:996 and 02:19:996 : i think need break timedone
LightoHK
512 posts
Joined September 2010
LightoHK
Easy
(No jumps in easy diff :o )
*00:42:496 - The slider is far
*01:22:996 - Remove the kiai time?
*01:46:996 - Start kiai time here
*03:27:871 - Center the slider

Normal
(No much jumps in normal diff)

Insane
*00:54:871 - Clap
*00:56:371 - Clap
*00:57:871 - Clap
*01:13:996 - Bad ubication

Well, Good map :)
(Sorry, bad english :( )
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
thank you modding and Star! :)

Mikumiku97 wrote:

Easy
(No jumps in easy diff :o ) fixed
*00:42:496 - The slider is far fixed
*01:22:996 - Remove the kiai time? fixed
*01:46:996 - Start kiai time here fixed
*03:27:871 - Center the slider fixed

Normal
(No much jumps in normal diff) fixed

Insane
*00:54:871 - Clapfixed
*00:56:371 - Clap fixed
*00:57:871 - Clapfixed
*01:13:996 - Bad ubicationfixed

Well, Good map :)
(Sorry, bad english :( )
Sherry
213 posts
Joined December 2010
Sherry
こんにちわー

もしよろしければ難易度ひとつ作らせていただけませんか？ :)
もし一人で作りたいようでしたら参考作った譜面を参考にしていただいてもいいです

よろしくお願いいたしますー ;)
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
Sherryさん、ありがとうございます
作ってもらっても問題ありません
Sherry
213 posts
Joined December 2010
Sherry
曲(file)の長さが４分を超えているので(長くて4分30秒)最後の間奏部分をフィードアウト+切ったほうがいいかもしれません
それでも最後が４分30秒ぐらいに的が着てしまうのですが。。。ｗ
厳しいですな(´･ω･｀)
Sherry
213 posts
Joined December 2010
Sherry
私が作るとこんな感じになりました。
好きにしてしまって問題ないです :)
がんばってください ;)

[attachment=0:c3109]Nekomirin feat. Miyu - Flan's Music Class (reigeki) [Sherry's Music Class].osu[/attachment:c3109]
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
I might make a Gezo Special called Kyuuketsukyoda. First I should fix my computer. ><

This won't be a Taiko diff, however.
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii

Sherry wrote:

曲(file)の長さが４分を超えているので(長くて4分30秒)最後の間奏部分をフィードアウト+切ったほうがいいかもしれません
それでも最後が４分30秒ぐらいに的が着てしまうのですが。。。ｗ
厳しいですな(´･ω･｀)
そうですね、次は曲の最後の部分を切ってから再アップロードします
:)

Sherry wrote:

私が作るとこんな感じになりました。
好きにしてしまって問題ないです :)
がんばってください ;)

[attachment=0:7d086]Nekomirin feat. Miyu - Flan's Music Class (reigeki) [Sherry's Music Class].osu[/attachment:7d086]
Sherryさん一通りチェックしてみました
00:19:808 (9)(10) 2grid 上？
03:41:746 スピナーが短すぎます :(

自分と違うタイミングの取り方があってとても参考になりました！
アップロードしておきますね
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii

_Gezo_ wrote:

I might make a Gezo Special called Kyuuketsukyoda. First I should fix my computer. ><

This won't be a Taiko diff, however.
Sorry , I don't understand Taiko. :cry:
Please tell me the error Specifically.
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun

reigeki wrote:

_Gezo_ wrote:

I might make a Gezo Special called Kyuuketsukyoda. First I should fix my computer. ><

This won't be a Taiko diff, however.
Sorry , I don't understand Taiko. :cry:
Please tell me the error Specifically.
Actually it'll be a standard diff, but my computer is a little broken (Can't run osu! anymore)

If you find that your map is completed, send it to pending without waiting. It can take 2 days or until I get a new computer ><
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,422 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
General
  1. 03:22:962 ~ 03:34:212 — remove this kiai, it doesn't fit there
  2. 03:36:462 — start your next kiai here (right on big white tick), not before it
  3. Fix your kiai fountain in the end:
    1. 04:29:618 — remove this point
    2. 04:29:712 — enable kiai
    3. 04:29:805 — disable kiai
    Do it on all diffs. For Insane, remove point 04:29:665
Easy
  1. 00:13:962 (1) - finish to beginning?
  2. 00:24:462 (5) - add clap to the middle
  3. 00:26:149 (1) - uncomfortable a little. What about this (http://puu.sh/eXgg)?
  4. 00:27:462 — I would start spinner here until next big white tick (add finish to it)
  5. 00:43:962 (1,2) - fix spacing, get it back to 1.0x
  6. 00:53:337 — starting from this moment, I hear claps in music! What if you add them? You may use soft claps, if normal ones sound too loud for you
  7. 00:58:962 — either add note with finish here, or drag break's beginning to this moment: http://puu.sh/eXiq
  8. 01:11:712 (2) - add whistle?
  9. 01:13:212 (4) - ^ (and in other similar moments when you hear whistles in music)
  10. 01:19:962 ~ 01:22:212 — spinner?
  11. 01:22:962 (1) - add finish instead of clap to the first repeat
  12. 01:25:962 (3) - remove clap
  13. 01:40:962 (1) - add claps to the end
  14. 01:42:462 (2) - ^
  15. 01:45:462 (3) - remove finish and add it to the beginning of next slider
  16. 01:50:712 (4,6) - remove claps?
  17. 01:58:962 (1) - add finish
  18. 02:09:462 (1) - add finish
  19. 02:16:962 (1,1) - remove and make good solid break?
  20. 02:25:962 (1,2,3,4) - add quiet claps to their ends?
  21. 02:34:962 (1) - add finish
  22. 02:37:962 (1) - move it somewhere to avoid light overlap: http://puu.sh/eXn1 (you probably need to move previous sliders to get some free place...)
  23. 02:39:462 (2) - ^
  24. 02:46:962 (1) - add finish
  25. 02:54:462 (2) - add whistle to the end?
  26. 02:58:212 (4) - no, it sounds wrong. Make it longer (so it will become 1/2) and add finish to the end
  27. 03:12:462 and other similar moments — add a note?
  28. 03:22:962 (1) - add finish to beginning
  29. 03:41:337 (5) - add clap and remove finish
  30. 03:42:462 (1) - remove clap from beginning
  31. 03:45:462 (3) - add claps to 2nd and 4th repeats
  32. 03:46:962 (4) - ^
  33. 03:48:462 (1) - move it 1 grid right
  34. 04:00:462 (1) - add finish
  35. 04:04:962 (3) - add clap to the middle?
  36. 04:23:712 (1) - add finish to the beginning
  37. 04:25:212 (2) - ^
  38. 04:26:712 (1) - start it 1/4 earlier with the beat
Normal
  1. 00:26:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm... okay, let it be
  2. Also, what if you add spinner after 00:27:274 (5), like on Easy?
  3. 00:39:462 (4) - add whistle to the end
  4. 00:40:962 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they overlap each other. Maybe it's just me
  5. 00:42:462 (1,2,3) - ^ (okay, I won't mention it anymore)
  6. 00:46:962 (3) - add new combo and finish
  7. 00:46:212 (1) - remove new combo
  8. 00:53:337 — I hear claps in music (the same as on Easy)
  9. 00:58:962 — add note with finish, please!
  10. 01:11:712 (2,4) - add whistles (and so on)
  11. 01:22:962 (1) - add finish
  12. 01:23:337 — you better get claps back on 2nd and 4th tick to keep the rhythm constant
  13. 01:46:962 (1) - add finish!
  14. 01:48:462 (3,4,5) - fix spacing
  15. 01:51:837 (6) - sounds wrong. You better remove repeat and make this slider 2x longer
  16. 01:58:962 (1) - add finish
  17. 02:01:587 (7) - add clap
  18. 02:09:462 (1) - add finish
  19. 02:13:962 (1,1,1,2) - remove these notes and make break solid. If you don't agree, at least add breaks between 02:13:962 (1,1,1) to avoid hp drain
  20. 02:34:962 (1) - add finish
  21. 02:34:962 (1,2,3,4) - aww, they overlap each other a little. Switch to small grid using G key, then get some free place between them
  22. 02:40:962 (5) - remove whistle from slider body, it makes noisy sound. Add whistle to every repeat of it manually
  23. 02:42:462 (6) - ^
  24. 02:46:962 (1) - add finish
  25. 02:35:337 — I hear claps in music here
  26. 02:52:962 (1,2) - add whistles? Don't forget, to repeats only, not to slider body!
  27. 02:58:212 (4) - add repeat to it and add finish to it
  28. 03:10:962 (1) - add finish to beginning and remove clap from it
  29. 03:22:962 (1) - add finish to beginning
  30. 03:23:337 — get claps on 2nd and 4th tick, as they sound in music
  31. 03:36:462 (1) - add finish to beginning
  32. 03:37:962 (3,4,5) - fix spacing. Hmm... I see copypaste here :(
  33. 03:41:337 (6) - sounds wrong. You better remove repeat and make this slider 2x longer
  34. 03:46:962 (1) - add finish
  35. 03:51:087 (7) - add clap. Please, keep the rhythm constant
  36. 03:58:962 (1,1) - the distance between spinner and slider is too short. Make spinner 1/2 shorter
  37. 04:02:524 (3) - place it on beginning of 04:02:712 (4)
  38. 04:03:462 (5) - add new combo
  39. 04:04:962 (5,6) - fix spacing
  40. 04:06:462 (7) - new combo
  41. 04:18:462 (9) - new combo
  42. 04:21:462 (5) - new combo
  43. 04:22:587 (6) - it's fat and it's bad :( fix it, please
  44. 04:23:712 (7) - add finish to beginning and new combo
  45. 04:25:212 (2) - add finish to beginning
  46. 04:26:712 (1) - add finish
baba's Taiko Oni
  1. Well, the only the first thing that's wrong for me (because I can't mod taiko) is that your diff uses 0.5 slider tick rate
  2. 00:27:274 (174) - also, remove 3 last repeats
Insane
  1. Approach rate +1, overal diff. +1, HP drain +1 since it's Insane
  2. 00:13:962 (1) - add finish
  3. 00:38:337 (2) - move it 2 grids left to avoid that light overlap
  4. 00:45:462 (4,5) - no, make it sound as 00:39:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1)
  5. 00:52:212 (7) - add whistle
  6. 00:57:462 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the same about sounding as above ^
  7. 00:58:962 — add note with finish
  8. 00:57:462 (5,11) - add new combo
  9. 01:04:962 (1,2,3,4) - nice, but it totally makes no sense. Please, remove them and then map
  10. 01:10:962 (1) - add whistle to 3rd and 4th repeats
  11. 01:12:462 (2) - ^
  12. 01:13:962 (3) - clap to the end
  13. 01:15:462 (5) - ^
  14. 01:16:212 (6) - better make it 2x shorter and add repeat, then use whistles
  15. 01:18:462 (5) - add whistle to 3rd and 4th repeats
  16. 01:22:962 (1) - add finish
  17. 01:26:712 (5) - add clap to the end
  18. 01:29:337 (2,4) - add claps to their ends
  19. 01:46:962 (1) - add finish
  20. 01:49:587 (8) - add clap
  21. 02:04:962 (1) - 1 grid up and 02:05:712 (2) - 1 grid down
  22. 02:09:462 (1) - add finish
  23. 02:16:962 (1,1,1,2,1,2,3,4) - remove these notes and make solid break
  24. 02:34:212 (4) - add whistles when they appear in music
  25. 02:46:962 (1) - add finish to beginning
  26. 02:58:962 — add note with finish
  27. 03:07:212 (3,5) - new combo
  28. 03:10:962 (1) - finish to the beginning
  29. 03:15:462 (4) - move it left so it should be symmetrical with 03:13:962 (1)
  30. 03:22:962 (1) - add finish to the beginning
  31. 03:38:712 (5) - switch to tiny grid, then move it 1 grid down and 1 grid right to create stack manually
  32. 03:43:962 (5) - I would change its shape to usual one, there's no need to deform its beginning
  33. 03:46:962 (5) - replace with spinner
  34. 03:48:462 (1) - add finish to beginning
  35. 03:58:962 (1) - make it 1/2 shorter, fix symmetry and add note with finish to white tick
  36. 04:23:712 (1,2) - don't be lazy, map something here like on Easy or Normal
  37. 04:26:712 (1,5,1,5) - add finishes
  38. 04:28:962 (1) - make finish on it more quiet
    Sorry, so much errors that I pick only the most noticeable ones
Sherry's Music Class
  1. Fix preview time for this diff, it still has old one before offset change
    Ah, I'm a little bit lazy, so I didn't check anything else. Sorry. But I can see that you have empty places on kiai time. Map through them!
Your mapset needs more work on it, but please don't drop it.
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
TicClick ,Thank modding!
most points were fixed and changed
SPOILER

TicClick wrote:

General
  1. 03:22:962 ~ 03:34:212 — remove this kiai, it doesn't fit there
  2. 03:36:462 — start your next kiai here (right on big white tick), not before it
  3. Fix your kiai fountain in the end:
    1. 04:29:618 — remove this point
    2. 04:29:712 — enable kiai
    3. 04:29:805 — disable kiai
    Do it on all diffs. For Insane, remove point 04:29:665
Easy
  1. 00:13:962 (1) - finish to beginning?
  2. 00:24:462 (5) - add clap to the middle
  3. 00:26:149 (1) - uncomfortable a little. What about this (http://puu.sh/eXgg)?
  4. 00:27:462 — I would start spinner here until next big white tick (add finish to it)
  5. 00:43:962 (1,2) - fix spacing, get it back to 1.0x
  6. 00:53:337 — starting from this moment, I hear claps in music! What if you add them? You may use soft claps, if normal ones sound too loud for you
  7. 00:58:962 — either add note with finish here, or drag break's beginning to this moment: http://puu.sh/eXiq
  8. 01:11:712 (2) - add whistle?
  9. 01:13:212 (4) - ^ (and in other similar moments when you hear whistles in music)
  10. 01:19:962 ~ 01:22:212 — spinner?
  11. 01:22:962 (1) - add finish instead of clap to the first repeat
  12. 01:25:962 (3) - remove clap
  13. 01:40:962 (1) - add claps to the end
  14. 01:42:462 (2) - ^
  15. 01:45:462 (3) - remove finish and add it to the beginning of next slider
  16. 01:50:712 (4,6) - remove claps?
  17. 01:58:962 (1) - add finish
  18. 02:09:462 (1) - add finish
  19. 02:16:962 (1,1) - remove and make good solid break?
  20. 02:25:962 (1,2,3,4) - add quiet claps to their ends?
  21. 02:34:962 (1) - add finish
  22. 02:37:962 (1) - move it somewhere to avoid light overlap: http://puu.sh/eXn1 (you probably need to move previous sliders to get some free place...)
  23. 02:39:462 (2) - ^
  24. 02:46:962 (1) - add finish
  25. 02:54:462 (2) - add whistle to the end?
  26. 02:58:212 (4) - no, it sounds wrong. Make it longer (so it will become 1/2) and add finish to the end
  27. 03:12:462 and other similar moments — add a note?
  28. 03:22:962 (1) - add finish to beginning
  29. 03:41:337 (5) - add clap and remove finish
  30. 03:42:462 (1) - remove clap from beginning
  31. 03:45:462 (3) - add claps to 2nd and 4th repeats
  32. 03:46:962 (4) - ^
  33. 03:48:462 (1) - move it 1 grid right
  34. 04:00:462 (1) - add finish
  35. 04:04:962 (3) - add clap to the middle?
  36. 04:23:712 (1) - add finish to the beginning
  37. 04:25:212 (2) - ^
  38. 04:26:712 (1) - start it 1/4 earlier with the beat
Normal
  1. 00:26:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm... okay, let it be
  2. Also, what if you add spinner after 00:27:274 (5), like on Easy?
  3. 00:39:462 (4) - add whistle to the end
  4. 00:40:962 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they overlap each other. Maybe it's just me
  5. 00:42:462 (1,2,3) - ^ (okay, I won't mention it anymore)
  6. 00:46:962 (3) - add new combo and finish
  7. 00:46:212 (1) - remove new combo
  8. 00:53:337 — I hear claps in music (the same as on Easy)
  9. 00:58:962 — add note with finish, please!
  10. 01:11:712 (2,4) - add whistles (and so on)
  11. 01:22:962 (1) - add finish
  12. 01:23:337 — you better get claps back on 2nd and 4th tick to keep the rhythm constant
  13. 01:46:962 (1) - add finish!
  14. 01:48:462 (3,4,5) - fix spacing
  15. 01:51:837 (6) - sounds wrong. You better remove repeat and make this slider 2x longer
  16. 01:58:962 (1) - add finish
  17. 02:01:587 (7) - add clap
  18. 02:09:462 (1) - add finish
  19. 02:13:962 (1,1,1,2) - remove these notes and make break solid. If you don't agree, at least add breaks between 02:13:962 (1,1,1) to avoid hp drain
  20. 02:34:962 (1) - add finish
  21. 02:34:962 (1,2,3,4) - aww, they overlap each other a little. Switch to small grid using G key, then get some free place between them
  22. 02:40:962 (5) - remove whistle from slider body, it makes noisy sound. Add whistle to every repeat of it manually
  23. 02:42:462 (6) - ^
  24. 02:46:962 (1) - add finish
  25. 02:35:337 — I hear claps in music here
  26. 02:52:962 (1,2) - add whistles? Don't forget, to repeats only, not to slider body!
  27. 02:58:212 (4) - add repeat to it and add finish to it
  28. 03:10:962 (1) - add finish to beginning and remove clap from it
  29. 03:22:962 (1) - add finish to beginning
  30. 03:23:337 — get claps on 2nd and 4th tick, as they sound in music
  31. 03:36:462 (1) - add finish to beginning
  32. 03:37:962 (3,4,5) - fix spacing. Hmm... I see copypaste here :(
  33. 03:41:337 (6) - sounds wrong. You better remove repeat and make this slider 2x longer
  34. 03:46:962 (1) - add finish
  35. 03:51:087 (7) - add clap. Please, keep the rhythm constant
  36. 03:58:962 (1,1) - the distance between spinner and slider is too short. Make spinner 1/2 shorter
  37. 04:02:524 (3) - place it on beginning of 04:02:712 (4)
  38. 04:03:462 (5) - add new combo
  39. 04:04:962 (5,6) - fix spacing
  40. 04:06:462 (7) - new combo
  41. 04:18:462 (9) - new combo
  42. 04:21:462 (5) - new combo
  43. 04:22:587 (6) - it's fat and it's bad :( fix it, please
  44. 04:23:712 (7) - add finish to beginning and new combo
  45. 04:25:212 (2) - add finish to beginning
  46. 04:26:712 (1) - add finish
baba's Taiko Oni
  1. Well, the only the first thing that's wrong for me (because I can't mod taiko) is that your diff uses 0.5 slider tick rate
  2. 00:27:274 (174) - also, remove 3 last repeats
Insane
  1. Approach rate +1, overal diff. +1, HP drain +1 since it's Insane
  2. 00:13:962 (1) - add finish
  3. 00:38:337 (2) - move it 2 grids left to avoid that light overlap
  4. 00:45:462 (4,5) - no, make it sound as 00:39:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1)
  5. 00:52:212 (7) - add whistle
  6. 00:57:462 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the same about sounding as above ^
  7. 00:58:962 — add note with finish
  8. 00:57:462 (5,11) - add new combo
  9. 01:04:962 (1,2,3,4) - nice, but it totally makes no sense. Please, remove them and then map
  10. 01:10:962 (1) - add whistle to 3rd and 4th repeats
  11. 01:12:462 (2) - ^
  12. 01:13:962 (3) - clap to the end
  13. 01:15:462 (5) - ^
  14. 01:16:212 (6) - better make it 2x shorter and add repeat, then use whistles
  15. 01:18:462 (5) - add whistle to 3rd and 4th repeats
  16. 01:22:962 (1) - add finish
  17. 01:26:712 (5) - add clap to the end
  18. 01:29:337 (2,4) - add claps to their ends
  19. 01:46:962 (1) - add finish
  20. 01:49:587 (8) - add clap
  21. 02:04:962 (1) - 1 grid up and 02:05:712 (2) - 1 grid down
  22. 02:09:462 (1) - add finish
  23. 02:16:962 (1,1,1,2,1,2,3,4) - remove these notes and make solid break
  24. 02:34:212 (4) - add whistles when they appear in music
  25. 02:46:962 (1) - add finish to beginning
  26. 02:58:962 — add note with finish
  27. 03:07:212 (3,5) - new combo
  28. 03:10:962 (1) - finish to the beginning
  29. 03:15:462 (4) - move it left so it should be symmetrical with 03:13:962 (1)
  30. 03:22:962 (1) - add finish to the beginning
  31. 03:38:712 (5) - switch to tiny grid, then move it 1 grid down and 1 grid right to create stack manually
  32. 03:43:962 (5) - I would change its shape to usual one, there's no need to deform its beginning
  33. 03:46:962 (5) - replace with spinner
  34. 03:48:462 (1) - add finish to beginning
  35. 03:58:962 (1) - make it 1/2 shorter, fix symmetry and add note with finish to white tick
  36. 04:23:712 (1,2) - don't be lazy, map something here like on Easy or Normal
  37. 04:26:712 (1,5,1,5) - add finishes
  38. 04:28:962 (1) - make finish on it more quiet
    Sorry, so much errors that I pick only the most noticeable ones
Sherry's Music Class
  1. Fix preview time for this diff, it still has old one before offset change
    Ah, I'm a little bit lazy, so I didn't check anything else. Sorry. But I can see that you have empty places on kiai time. Map through them!
Your mapset needs more work on it, but please don't drop it.
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun

TicClick wrote:

Well, the only the first thing that's wrong for me is that your diff uses 0.5 slider tick rate
this doesn't change the gameplay... Dunno if this is unrankable on taiko diffs since the STR doesn't affect the tickd in the rolls.
Sherry
213 posts
Joined December 2010
Sherry
久しぶりに覗いたらだいぶよくなっていますねｗ

offset修正とかわいいholdＳＢありがとうございます :)
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
ありがとうございます :)
勝手に修正させてもらってます
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
こんにちは、mod reqからです ;)
気に入らないmodは無視してください。


　　[Insane]

　　●　00:26:430 (2),(3),(4),(5) - Ctrl+V,Ctrl+Hなどを使って形を整えましょう。↓このような感じで
SPOILER
　　●　01:56:337 (3) - Clap追加
　　●　01:56:524 (4) - Clap削除
　　●　03:42:087 (x) - note追加?
　　●　03:54:087 (x) - note追加?
　　使用していない緑線があるので削除した方が良いかもです。


　　[Sherry's Music Class]

　　●　00:26:993 (4) - 1grid↑
　　●　02:28:774 (8) - 1grid↓
　　●　02:57:462 (5) - 1grid↓


　　[Normal]

　　Good.


　　[Easy]

　　●　01:24:462 (3) 　03:10:212 (3) 03:24:462 (3) - AIModで確認するとこの3つだけdistance missしてるので修正した方がいいです。


少ないModですが以上です。
頑張ってください :)
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
Guyさん、modありがとうございます！

Guy wrote:

こんにちは、mod reqからです ;)
気に入らないmodは無視してください。


　　[Insane]

　　●　00:26:430 (2),(3),(4),(5) - Ctrl+V,Ctrl+Hなどを使って形を整えましょう。↓このような感じで
SPOILER
　　●　01:56:337 (3) - Clap追加　ok
　　●　01:56:524 (4) - Clap削除 ok
　　●　03:42:087 (x) - note追加? ok
　　●　03:54:087 (x) - note追加? ok
　　使用していない緑線があるので削除した方が良いかもです。 ok


　　[Sherry's Music Class]

　　●　00:26:993 (4) - 1grid↑ ok
　　●　02:28:774 (8) - 1grid↓ ok
　　●　02:57:462 (5) - 1grid↓ ok


　　[Normal]

　　Good.


　　[Easy]

　　●　01:24:462 (3) 　03:10:212 (3) 03:24:462 (3) - AIModで確認するとこの3つだけdistance missしてるので修正した方がいいです。
ok

少ないModですが以上です。
頑張ってください :)
助かりましたm(__)m
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
yo~

Insane
00:21:462 (8,9,10) - put them on 00:20:337 (3,4)
00:21:462 (8) - new combo
00:44:712 (3) - 1 short slider + 1 circle sounds better
00:50:712 (3,4) - not good ><
01:18:462 (5) - can confuse players
02:10:962 (1,2) - two long and boring sliders. let's make another shape for them
02:31:962 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - stop slider-spam

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sorry. have to go now. ~
nice mapset, anyway
gekkiii
69 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
gekkiii
-Bakari-
thanks moding!
Nanakase Gizumo
240 posts
Joined August 2009
Nanakase Gizumo
Hi
from #modreqs

General

  1. 全難易度のtagから"baba1994"を削除
  2. 全難易度でResnap All Notes
  3. Rankedを狙うためには、Hardを作った方が良いと思います(難易度は連続していないければならないので)
    現状はEasy Normal Insaneになってしまっています


Sherry's Music Class

  1. ODを7か8に設定
  2. KIAI TIMEをNormal以下と統一してみては？04:00:462の地点
  3. 最初のKIAI TIME中にBREAKが多すぎるように感じます。BREAK無しで良いのでは。残すとしても一番目だけ？
  4. 03:41:149 (6) - このアンチジャンプは非常に分かりづらいです。直後に2打があるのでさらに混乱します
  5. 03:58:587 (5) - (3)と左右対称にしてみてはどうでしょうか

Normal

  1. 01:17:712 (2) - 1 gird 右 1 grid 上
  2. 01:19:212 (4) - 1 grid 右 (01:19:962 (1)の位置を微調整)

Easy

  1. 00:26:149 (1) - 初心者にはタイミングが掴みづらいかもしれません。こうした方が良いかも？
  2. 04:25:212 (2) - Easyなのでスペーシングは統一した方が良いと思います。低速になる前のスペーシングで再配置

ganbatte~
gekkiii
69 posts
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Topic Starter
gekkiii
Nanakase Gizumoさんmod有難うございます
難易度Hardも作らないといけないんですね(；´∀｀)
Rankedしたいので参考になりました。
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