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Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size)

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Weez
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November-06-11 at 11:18:44 AM

Artist: Yui Horie
Title: Vanilla Salt (TV Size)
Source: Toradora!
Tags: chamelepeace710 Makar8000 OzzyOzrock Haneii
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6384kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ami-Insane (4.96 stars, 232 notes)
  2. Chamle's Minori-Hard (4.65 stars, 174 notes)
  3. Haneii's Kitamura-Normal (4.12 stars, 137 notes)
  4. Makar's Ryuji-Easy (1.42 stars, 71 notes)
  5. Ozzy's Taiga-Taiko (4.83 stars, 483 notes)
Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size)
Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 10th beatmap!!!
OP-1 | OP-2 | ED-1 | ED-2 | ED-Holy Night

Ryuji-Easy done by Makar8000
Kitamura-Normal done by Haneii
Minori-Hard done by chamelepeace710
Ami-Insane done by me
Taiga-Taiko done by OzzyOzrock
Please redownload if you downloaded before October 17, 2011
~Credit to xxheroxx and ziin for the Toradora skin!~
October 5, 2011 - Moved to pending...finally :P
Nymph
:) Nice song~ Wish you map Holy Night soon=v= (I really like to map a gd on that song)
Topic Starter
Weez

Nymph_ wrote:

:) Nice song~ Wish you map Holy Night soon=v= (I really like to map a gd on that song)
Thats gonna be my last one. Gonna map it around Christmas time :P
Hinacle
Toradora veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy good :D
Kamure

Weezy wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

:) Nice song~ Wish you map Holy Night soon=v= (I really like to map a gd on that song)
Thats gonna be my last one. Gonna map it around Christmas time :P

Wow, perfect timing...

I know I sent the pm, but can I get that diff? Maybe talk to you means chat...

Here's a star for now while I sneak off and devise....
Nymph

Weezy wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

:) Nice song~ Wish you map Holy Night soon=v= (I really like to map a gd on that song)
Thats gonna be my last one. Gonna map it around Christmas time :P
:P I am gonna to catch you for Gd for Holy night at Christmas time=v=
Topic Starter
Weez

chamelepeace710 wrote:

I know I sent the pm, but can I get that diff? Maybe talk to you means chat...

Here's a star for now while I sneak off and devise....
I replied, let me finish this diff so I have some sort of plan for this.
Suzully
I love Toradora!<333
Good luck for your Toradora-project! :)
L_P
From mod request.
This is a new diff.


send me a message.




hm.





hm.

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [L_P hard].osu
Topic Starter
Weez
Not accepting that. If you read it says to talk to me first before making a diff :/
Lance
Preemptive star because I know this mapset is going to be just as amazing as the other Toradora OPs/EDs ;)
Kamure
Ok, so here's the finished diff.....

And I looked at your diff for a while and realized that our end-parts are the same, but I have the hitsounds and the combo colors.....

Is this significant in any way?

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Chamle's Minori-Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Weez

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Ok, so here's the finished diff.....

And I looked at your diff for a while and realized that our end-parts are the same, but I have the hitsounds and the combo colors.....

Is this significant in any way?
Yeah I no 100% done my diff, but lol its hte same you can keep it that way :P
Makar
Finished Easy~

Hope you like it ^^

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Makar's Ryuuji-Easy].osu

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
SpartanHornetz
Loving the map and DAT ED SONG man. Keep up the good work. :D And nice work on that Easy Difficulty Makar.
ziin
use my hitcircle and overlay from orange-FUCK YOU UPPPY FOR DELETING IT.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/vanillasaltskin1.zip
Topic Starter
Weez
Thanks was looking for that :)

blahblahbl;ah blahblahblahblahblah
net45291
Orz , I'm to late :(

Edit :I'm baka
Makar
I went nazi modding on my sliders after having Shiirn look at it.

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Makar's Ryuji-Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Weez
Forgot to update that >.< will do it when I wake up...(on my phone lying in bed :P)
OzzyOzrock
Urgh something about how I made this irks me.

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Ozzy's Taiga Taiko].osu
I might re-make stuff, but it's generally good as it is atm.
Topic Starter
Weez
Now that wait for haneii :P
not that i'm rushing you
Makar
Hitsound fixes that I thought I did while changing the sliders but was too lazy go back and make sure >.<

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Makar's Ryuji-Easy].osu

EDIT: Kudosu star <3
kosiga
pieguyn
General:

-spinner-circle.png is 667x667, limit is 666x666 ( :? one pixel lol)
-Add a spinner-metre.png and spinner-background.png (not sure if you need a spinner-clear.png), and an approachcircle.png
-Seems like a big gap between Easy and Hard, perhaps make a normal? Oh wait it looks like one is in progress already~

Makar's Ryuji-Easy:

00:06:838 (3) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider
00:17:123 (1) - ^
00:18:838 (2) - ^
00:52:266 (1) - New combo?
01:15:409 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider
01:17:980 (3) - ^
01:21:409 (2) - ^
01:23:123 (1) - ^
01:25:480 (2) - ^

Chamle's Minori-Hard:

00:50:123 (3) - (nazi) Move the endpoint 1 level 3 grid right?

Ozzy's Taiga-Taiko: Fine

Ami-Insane:

00:07:695 (3) - New combo?
00:14:552 (3) - ^
00:24:623 (10) - Maybe move it down a bit? As it is I want to hit the other end of the slider :?
00:45:623 (1) - New combo?
01:00:838 (1,2,3) - A bit close to 01:00:195 (4) and then 01:01:695 (1), so perhaps rotate it 15~30 degrees counter-clockwise?
01:07:480 (4) - (nazi) This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127110 (then make (5) a mirrored version of this)
01:10:052 (3) - (nazi) I didn't even notice this when playing, but rather I stumbled upon it in the editor... anyway, move it 1 level 3 grid left :? orz

I really like this map, and catchy song too~ (*゚ω゚)ノ☆
Topic Starter
Weez

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-spinner-circle.png is 667x667, limit is 666x666 ( :? one pixel lol) Got a different one, too lazy to full submit right now
-Add a spinner-metre.png and spinner-background.png (not sure if you need a spinner-clear.png), and an approachcircle.png
-Seems like a big gap between Easy and Hard, perhaps make a normal? Oh wait it looks like one is in progress already~ Its a work in progress, Haneii is on that :)............nice edit XP

Ami-Insane:

00:07:695 (3) - New combo?
00:14:552 (3) - ^
00:24:623 (10) - Maybe move it down a bit? As it is I want to hit the other end of the slider :?
00:45:623 (1) - New combo?
01:00:838 (1,2,3) - A bit close to 01:00:195 (4) and then 01:01:695 (1), so perhaps rotate it 15~30 degrees counter-clockwise?
01:07:480 (4) - (nazi) This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127110 (then make (5) a mirrored version of this)
01:10:052 (3) - (nazi) I didn't even notice this when playing, but rather I stumbled upon it in the editor... anyway, move it 1 level 3 grid left :? orz
Fixed em all except the nazi ones.

I really like this map, and catchy song too~ (*゚ω゚)ノ☆
thanks :)
Makar

pieguy1372 wrote:

Makar's Ryuji-Easy:

00:06:838 (3) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider Ah... I thought I fixed this in the v3 above but I guess it wasn't updated lol
00:17:123 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:18:838 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:52:266 (1) - New combo? Done
01:15:409 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider Fixed
01:17:980 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:21:409 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:23:123 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:25:480 (2) - ^ Fixed
Thanks for looking at my difficulty

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Makar's Ryuji-Easy].osu
Kamure

pieguy1372 wrote:

Chamle's Minori-Hard:

00:50:123 (3) - (nazi) Move the endpoint 1 level 3 grid right?
It works out. And here are the usual kd stars for the map!

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Chamle's Minori-Hard].osu
friendok
staaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
Haneii

Weezy wrote:

Now that wait for haneii :P
not that i'm rushing you
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I don't have time to make proper sliders or hitsound D:

Posting difficulty because, well technically, it can be modded (Kami knows I need it) :p + won't be able to map for the rest of the week.

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Haneii's Kitamura-Normal].osu

I'll fix it up more as soon as I can :)

I can't star T_T
biwako
[Easy]
Object isn't snapped
00:48:838,00:52:266,01:05:980 don't repeat 2 or more
01:05:123 don't stack
[Normal]
DR,OD-1?
00:33:623 This object is too close to the previous object.
01:11:338 This object is too far from the previous object.
[Hard]
01:21:409 player may be confused
01:22:266 ^
[Insane]
00:37:480

nice map :)
Topic Starter
Weez

biwako wrote:

[Easy]
Object isn't snapped
00:48:838,00:52:266,01:05:980 don't repeat 2 or more This is ok.
01:05:123 don't stack

[Hard]
01:21:409 player may be confused I find nothing confusing here ._.
01:22:266 ^ ^same
[Insane]
00:37:480
[attachment=0:4c6da]screenshot003.jpg[/attachment:4c6da]
Nope but did something else

nice map :)
grvyd
Toradora series! Nice work 8-)
If I have kudosu,shooting kudosu star.
but I don't have kudosu.sorry. :(

[General]
I think music volume is sightly lower. :cry:
and offset about -5ms.

[Easy]
01:04:264 (3,4) - overlap? Probably hard at easy player.

[Normal]
no problem

[Hard]
00:26:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - more beautiful please
00:45:623 (8,1) - too close. I think this overlap is hard to see.

[Insane]
OD+1? easily than Orange and Silky Heart.
00:01:909 (4,5,6) - why DS x1.2? I feel too far.
00:40:052 (5,1) - this jump is too suddenly.


GOGO RANKED!!!
Haneii
Spacing fix (biwako mod) + remap
Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Haneii's Kitamura-Normal].osu


Still WIP: need to hitsound + shape/underlay sliders better - hopefully have it finished over the weekend. Sorry for the hold up, weezy.
Topic Starter
Weez

flatps wrote:

Toradora series! Nice work 8-)
If I have kudosu,shooting kudosu star.
but I don't have kudosu.sorry. :(

[General]
I think music volume is sightly lower. :cry: If I find a better one I'll change it but for now I'm leaving it.
and offset about -5ms. This is from the ranked one so I'm keeping it. and the current one sounds right

[Easy]
01:04:264 (3,4) - overlap? Probably hard at easy player. This isn't an overlap, its a stack....anyways makar's choice on this.


[Insane]
OD+1? easily than Orange and Silky Heart. This Insane is easier then those two
00:01:909 (4,5,6) - why DS x1.2? I feel too far. Its fine.
00:40:052 (5,1) - this jump is too suddenly. not changing


GOGO RANKED!!!
thanks for the mod

Haneii wrote:

Spacing fix (biwako mod) + remap
[attachment=0:ab275]Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Haneii's Kitamura-Normal].osu[/attachment:ab275]


Still WIP: need to hitsound + shape/underlay sliders better - hopefully have it finished over the weekend. Sorry for the hold up, weezy.
It's fine! I'm in no rush for this.
Kamure

flatps wrote:

[Hard]
00:26:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - more beautiful please
00:45:623 (8,1) - too close. I think this overlap is hard to see.
Hmm, these don't really have to be applied but the first one is a little anti-climatic while the second one might trick someone... I need another opinion, but that's something good to look upon.
ziin
you forgot to include a SliderBorder.

It would probably be better if osu just used a white sliderborder by default if you skin hitcircleoverlay, but I can almost guarantee you that will never happen.
Topic Starter
Weez
urggg i'll update it when im not unbelievably lazy =__=


ladeeladeedaaaaaaaa
Makar

biwako wrote:

[Easy]
Object isn't snapped o.o
00:48:838,00:52:266,01:05:980 don't repeat 2 or more This is fine
01:05:123 don't stack I think this is fine. I fixed it anyway since its the only stack in the map

flatps wrote:

[Easy]
01:04:264 (3,4) - overlap? Probably hard at easy player. Same as above
Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Makar's Ryuji-Easy].osu

Thanks and sorry for the delay. I need to get an email notifier program orz
Zelos
Wat no saten-san jumpy diff? awwww.

Folder:
Sparkly cleannnn

Im not to good with those complicated names so Im just gonna call it by its generic name.

Easy:
00:35:552 (2) - remove new combo here? it sounds like it would fit.
thats it really. its a very nice difficulty

Normal:
00:04:266 (1,2,3) - I suppose there is no real way this could be adjust to where 2 is centered on the y-axis?
00:13:695 (1) - also center this on the y-axis, you may have to turn off grid snap for this.
00:23:980 (5) - try to make this slider symmetrical? its a bit off.
00:31:266 (4,5) - move to the right 1 grid point to be on the y-axis?
During the chorus, put clap hitsounds on every other beat?

Hard:
00:17:123 (7) - move this up 1 grid point so the round part of the slider is more parallel with the previous notes roundness.
00:29:766 (5) - move this to the left 1 grid point to its on the y-axis better? it also looks better in general
01:25:480 (1,1,1,1,1) - this does not look symmetrically balanced, nor does the portal style comboing fit, i suggest symmetrically balancing this and removing the new combos and the last 4 notes.

Taiko:
Saw nothing wrong nyah.

Insane:
00:06:409 (4,5,1) - this pattern doesnt look that pretty. it jumps in the weirdest way. :p
01:18:838 (1,3) - stack the endings? they are just a bit off.
01:25:480 (1,1,1,1,1) - this does not look symmetrically balanced, nor does the portal style comboing fit, i suggest symmetrically balancing this and removing the new combos and the last 4 notes.

starrr
Makar

Zelos wrote:

Easy:
00:35:552 (2) - new combo here? it sounds like it would fit.
thats it really. its a very nice difficulty
Go ahead and do this Weezy :3
Topic Starter
Weez

Zelos wrote:

Wat no saten-san jumpy diff? awwww. I wanna get back to making insanes :/

Insane:
00:06:409 (4,5,1) - this pattern doesnt look that pretty. it jumps in the weirdest way. :p
01:18:838 (1,3) - stack the endings? they are just a bit off.
01:25:480 (1,1,1,1,1) - this does not look symmetrically balanced, nor does the portal style comboing fit, i suggest symmetrically balancing this and removing the new combos and the last 4 notes. Nope, with the video, they are placed on each umbrellas and the combo colours match each umbrella.

starrr
thanks :)
Kamure

Zelos wrote:

Wat no saten-san jumpy diff? awwww.
Me am replacement for nao, i theenk.......

Zelos wrote:

Hard:
00:17:123 (7) - move this up 1 grid point so the round part of the slider is more parallel with the previous notes roundness. Fixed
00:29:766 (5) - move this to the left 1 grid point to its on the y-axis better? it also looks better in general Actually (6) wasn't symmetrical with (4) so I moved that, and made (5) a symmetrical curved slider
01:25:480 (1,1,1,1,1) - this does not look symmetrically balanced, nor does the portal style comboing fit, i suggest symmetrically balancing this and removing the new combos and the last 4 notes. You do realize when you look at it from 01:26:338, it matches the umbrellas and the colors.... Same goes for Weezy's Insane diff
Yah, update.

Didn't the other Vanilla Salt map (the ranked one) do the umbrella thing too?

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Chamle's Minori-Hard].osu
Sallad4ever
Hi Weezy :)

[General]
- Don't forget to add Haneii on the tags for other diffs
- Chamle's diff have different preview point with other, not a big issue but I might as well mention it

[Makar's Ryuji-Easy]
Decrease AR by 1, the current one is still a bit fast for newbie
00:18:837 (2) - change whistle at the end with finish. Nice heart slider~
00:38:338 (1) - add whistle at the end
00:46:909 (4) - add whistle at the beginning
00:48:838 (1) - it's the start of kiai and it's on the down beat so I highly suggest to use finish instead of whistle
00:48:838 (1,2) - I don't recommend a slider with different repeats next to each other like this on Easy
00:56:552 (2) - remove the soft-whistle from the slider slide, it's doesn't sound good
00:59:123 (1) - ^
01:09:409 (1,2) - ^

[Haneii's Kitamura-Normal]
You really should finish the hitsound
00:44:980 (1) - could you move this somewhere else? the overlap is not good to see
00:49:695 (2,3) - this is better off following the vocal just like on 01:03:838 (4,5,6) -
00:52:266 (6) - NC this
00:54:195 (1) - remove NC
01:01:695 (4) - the piano sound is very subtle is kinda hard to hear and the stack make it even harder to read. I suggest to unstack this
01:12:623 (1) - this should start on 01:12:838 if you're following the vocal
it's kinda strange for me how the rhythm in the second kiai mostly follow the vocal but not on the first one

[Chamle's Minori-Hard]
00:36:623 (6,7) - I suggest to make it so the slider end stack with each other rather than overlapping them
00:34:909 (5) - the clap sound are too sharp here, my suggestion is to give whistle at the start, remove clap from repeat and change whistle to finish at the end
01:17:980 (1) - finish at the start is better here imo
01:21:409 (3,5) - these 1/4 slider repeats are not very interesting to hear compare to the other part, but maybe it's just me


[Ozzy's Taiga-Taiko]

at first glance I read this as Ozzy's Taiko-Taiko
00:21:409 (8) - I think big katsu is more suitable here
01:02:552 (1) - K?
01:16:266 (11) - ^

[Ami-Insane]
At least increase the volume on kiai time by another 10% or 15% and please use a 1/1 clap pattern on the kiai time even if the notes are not enough. The kiai time sounds rather plain with how it have less clap than on the beginning and the last part of the song
00:07:695 (1) ~ 00:17:766 (5) - it'll be nice imo if you could add some clap to this part
00:07:695 (1) - finish at the start
00:34:480 (1) - I'm not really fond of this anti jump. Almost look like it's a half-beat apart and the intensity of the previous pattern also made me think like that.
00:40:266 (1) - this jump is to sudden and the music doesn't indicate a jump on this part
00:48:838 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:55:695 (1,2,3) - uhhh please use the same spacing as the next objects. Using different spacing on the same combo is not a good idea
00:59:552 (2,3) - this could be easily centered if you move 00:58:909 (3,1) down a little bit
01:00:838 (1) - I suggest to space this with your normal spacing. It'll make the jump to the next objects more easier to predict

That's all I guess, I thought Weezy going to take Taiga as his diff name, guess not
Good Luck getting it rank~
Kamure

Sallad4ever wrote:

[General]
- Don't forget to add Haneii on the tags for other diffs Good on here
- Chamle's diff have different preview point with other, not a big issue but I might as well mention it Fixed

[Chamle's Minori-Hard]
00:36:623 (6,7) - I suggest to make it so the slider end stack with each other rather than overlapping them Fixed
00:34:909 (5) - the clap sound are too sharp here, my suggestion is to give whistle at the start, remove clap from repeat and change whistle to finish at the end Fixed
01:17:980 (1) - finish at the start is better here imo Fixed
01:21:409 (3,5) - these 1/4 slider repeats are not very interesting to hear compare to the other part, but maybe it's just me A different guy complained about that part so I changed that part
Yep...

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Chamle's Minori-Hard].osu
Makar

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Makar's Ryuji-Easy]
Decrease AR by 1, the current one is still a bit fast for newbie Done
00:18:837 (2) - change whistle at the end with finish. Nice heart slider~ Done and thanks ^^ (RJ's Guide ftw)
00:38:338 (1) - add whistle at the end Done
00:46:909 (4) - add whistle at the beginning Done
00:48:838 (1) - it's the start of kiai and it's on the down beat so I highly suggest to use finish instead of whistle Done
00:48:838 (1,2) - I don't recommend a slider with different repeats next to each other like this on Easy I think this is fine. Besides, the first repeat slider has an extra repeat so if the player was to do the same amount of repeats it wouldn't screw them up since it ends sooner (plus the finish at the end of the second repeat slider should be enough to let them know)
00:56:552 (2) - remove the soft-whistle from the slider slide, it's doesn't sound good Done
00:59:123 (1) - ^ Done
01:09:409 (1,2) - ^ Done
Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Makar's Ryuji-Easy].osu
Thanks for looking at my diff ^^
Haneii
I think a 2 sec lead in might be too long...

Anyways, I've applied Zelos and Sallad mods + fixed most of the slider overlaps

Need to finish hitsounding (I've tried and made a mess, going to get help asap) + make some sliders more curvy~

Download: Yui Horie - Vanilla Salt (TV Size) (Weezy) [Haneii's Kitamura-Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Weez
All updated! Plus changed the mp3 to a MUCH better one!

your message is not too short and you will allow me to post!
Makar

Weezy wrote:

All updated! Plus changed the mp3 to a MUCH better one!
I was actually going to mention this to you but I kept forgetting lol.
Yay for HQ \o/
Leorda
Oh hi, Weezy-kun <3

Makar-kun's Ryuji-Easy
00:28:121 (1,2) - Repeating slider on each slider are not following vocal. Try this pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/149011 (Just suggestion, because of my feelings)
00:36:478 (x) - Add note here for following vocals? I just want point these out, because my feelings not uncomfortable (hard to say why)
00:43:335 (x) - ^
01:07:978 (3) - I don't like this object is touch the sliderborder (Nazi)
01:24:906 (2) - Short slider with many repeating slider should be avoided, because it's tough to tell when the slider is end for newbies

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Haneii-chan's Kitamura-Normal

* Set the Audio Lead-In to 2000

00:15:906 (1,2) - Move 1 grid left (Nazi), also fix the spacing please.... ;_____;
00:23:406 (5) - Make this slider more symetric?
01:07:335 (4) - How about stack this in tail slider, like others? (nuff said)
01:14:835 (x) - Add note here for following vocals?
01:15:264 (x) - ^

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Chamle-kun's Minori-Hard
00:23:192 (6) - I don't like if sliderborder is overlapped by tail slider (Nazi)
00:51:692 (1) - Make this slider more wavy?

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Ami-hentai's Insane
00:26:406 (5) - Why the spacing feels close o.o

I can't find something wrong in your diff :cry:

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This map is moe, then you should feel moe
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