This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, February 08, 2012 at 6:33:52 PM

Artist: Riyu Kosaka
Title: LOVE LOVE SHINE
Source: Dance Dance Revolution
Tags: ddr extreme shirokitty kuma-san love Beatmania IIDX 9th Style
BPM: 177
Filesize: 2751kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.04 stars, 73 notes)
2. Kuma's Hard (4.94 stars, 310 notes)
3. Love's Taiko (4.94 stars, 563 notes)
4. Normal (4.22 stars, 134 notes)
5. ShiroKitty's Insane (5 stars, 367 notes)

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First map.

Thank you dkun & Leenah for helping.
Thank you ShiroKitty for the Insane diff~!
Thank you Kuma-san for the Hard diff~!
Thank you Love for the Taiko.~
^^

irc.
spacing and what not.

star!

Title:"LOVE LOVE SHINE" (must be in caps)
http://zenius-i-vanisher.com/v5.2/views ... fileid=899
the link above is proof the title is LOVE LOVE SHINE just in case you don't believe me. thats all.

Artist: Must be in caps also. (refer to link for proof again just in case :3)

Source: Remove DDR and put Dance Dance Revolution

Tags: Add Extreme to tags (the Extreme is for saying the specific DDR game)
Remove these following words from Tags (dance revolution love shine riyu kosaka) as they already will be in the title,artist, and source.

I will mod this on a later date. You will get a star on the modding date.

This sounds like, "Candy".

Zelos wrote:

I will mod this on a later date. You will get a star on the modding date.

Thank you for your help on the title and stuff. I didn't even know.
._.
& Thanks in advance for the mod.
xD

OzzyOzrock wrote:

This sounds like, "Candy".

All her songs almost sound exactly the same.
*shrug*

very very odd. for some odd reason osu does not want to import this beatmap.

try full submitting?

Yeah, the game doesn't allowing me to upload a beatmap, and I have already a guest diff for You to You last updated beatmap ;/ Pls full submit, so I can change the title;) and then I will give it to You:)
And...
Here's a custom hitsounds to my diffculty, upload them too, please
Download: hitsounds.rar

Zelos wrote:

try full submitting?

Full submitted~

ShiroKitty wrote:

Here's a custom hitsounds to my diffculty, upload them too, please

& Uploaded. :3

you seem to have 2 identical storyboard files:

RIYU KOSAKA - LOVE ? SHINE (iPoff).osb
Riyu Kosaka - Love Shine (iPoff).osb

osu can't extract the first one because a question mark in a file name is invalid. i suggest deleting it as the files are identical.

Oh, I didn't even notice that.
.____.;
Thank you. I deleted it.

Okie, so here is my guest map:)

EDIT::
Some fixes

Download: RIYU KOSAKA - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [ShiroKitty's Insane].osu

nice map（＾ω＾）

Taked from #modreqs also because of DDR :3

General

- The song folder have "Heart.png" sprite in the song folder and also in /SB folder
- Enable epilepsy warning?
- Why The insane diff have a different offset? set this offset to all difficulties, this is the correct offset

Storyboard

- Why foreground layer have so many active sprites? http://puu.sh/3DZY

Easy

- HP, AR and OD must be between 1~3
- Set SV to 0,80 ?
- Set tick rate to "1" ?
- Too many reverse sliders feels bad
- 00:46:201 This "kiai timing" is repeated, please delete 1 of them
- 01:09:421 and 01:10:607 This timing sections are unnecesary in this diff

00:16:382 (2) - Remove whistle from the end of this slider?
00:17:399 (3) - Add whistle?
00:19:772 (2) - Maybe something like this? > http://puu.sh/3E19 then fix the spacing
00:23:568 (1) - Remove new combo
00:29:263 (2) - Add new combo?
00:31:957 (5,6,7,1) - Please dont stack this
01:13:670 (2) - Extend this slider to 01:14:348 ?

Normal +

- 134 unsnapped objects, resnap all notes on the timing menu
- I disagree with the diff whit a "+"
- Maybe set a smaller grid and relocate the objects with distance snap enabled ?
- Set SV to 1,0 ?
- 00:46:201 This "kiai timing" is repeated, please delete 1 of them
- Drain, OV -1 ?

00:16:043 (4) - spacing
00:20:438 (5) - spacing
00:28:585 (x) - Add a slider from here to 00:28:924 ?
00:38:065 (5) - New combo, and also unstack it from (6,7)
00:40:777 (10) - Change finish for a whistle on the last reverse?
01:02:483 - Set the end of the kiai time here?
01:13:685 (7) - Exteend the slider to 01:14:009 and delete (8) ?
01:22:811 (3,4) - Spacing
01:28:234 (4,5,6) - Hard to read for a Normal diff

If you resnaped the objects, the times I added here maybe wont be the same


Hard

- 201 unsnapped objects, resnap all notes on the timing menu
- 00:46:201 This "kiai timing" is repeated, please delete 1 of them
- Set SV to 1,2 ?


00:10:619 - End the spin here
00:11:963 (2) - Spacing
00:12:980 (4) - Align with (3) or a grid down?
00:13:658 (5) - Stack with (3) and add new combo?
00:17:726 (1) - new combo?
00:19:421 (8) - Add whistle ?
00:19:760 (9) - Remove whistle?
00:20:099 (10) - Add whistle ?
00:20:438 (11) - Remove whistle?
00:27:556 (7,8) - Very strange rhythm
00:29:251 (9) - New combo?
00:30:958 (x) - Add spinner? If you added delete (1,2) on the next combo and replace (3,4) objects
00:36:709 (12) - Too many reverses, maybe something like > http://puu.sh/3E8e
00:41:116 (12) - Align with (11)
00:43:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I disagree with this, maybe something like > http://puu.sh/3E93
00:47:216 (5) - Delete this?
00:49:399 (x) - Add a circle?
00:56:031 (1~5) - Space this combo correctly
00:57:387 (1~5) - ^
01:14:517 (x) - Add a note and also on 01:14:856 ? or a slider that connect this two?
01:28:912 (5,6,7) - Spacing

If you resnaped the objects, the times I added here maybe wont be the same

Insane

-OD -1 ?

00:06:711 (4) - Remove finish?
00:08:236 (3) - Add finish?
00:09:253 (2) - Add finish on the beginning?
00:32:643 (5) - Put this on centre?
00:35:185 (6) - New combo?
00:35:694 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:36:711 (4) - New combo?
00:44:338 (3,5,6) - Tick custom sound feels weird, also at 00:48:050 (4,6) // 00:49:762 (3,5)
00:59:931 (5) - Delete this circle?
01:00:101 (6) - New combo?
01:12:982 (4) - Strange slider, you must use a slide reverse better, maybe is just me

Very nice Insane, but I disagree with too many circles


And that is all, starred because of DDR

ikari_kyon wrote:

General

- The song folder have "Heart.png" sprite in the song folder and also in /SB folder Thanks for the reminder. Deleted the other one.
- Enable epilepsy warning? I don't see why. But I'll put it just in case.
- Why The insane diff have a different offset? set this offset to all difficulties, this is the correct offset Fixed.

Storyboard

- Why foreground layer have so many active sprites? http://puu.sh/3DZY Because I didn't know how to loop or disable tweening when I did this. Is it necessary for me to re-do it?

Easy

- HP, AR and OD must be between 1~3 Fixed.
- Set SV to 0,80 ? Done.
- Set tick rate to "1" ? Done.
- Too many reverse sliders feels bad I'll fix it.
- 00:46:201 This "kiai timing" is repeated, please delete 1 of them Fixed.
- 01:09:421 and 01:10:607 This timing sections are unnecesary in this diff Fixed.

00:16:382 (2) - Remove whistle from the end of this slider? Done.
00:17:399 (3) - Add whistle? Done.
00:19:772 (2) - Maybe something like this? > http://puu.sh/3E19 then fix the spacing Fixed.
00:23:568 (1) - Remove new combo Hmm...sure.
00:29:263 (2) - Add new combo? Done.
00:31:957 (5,6,7,1) - Please dont stack this Fixed.
01:13:670 (2) - Extend this slider to 01:14:348 ? Nahh. I like the way it syncs with the vocals.

Normal +

- 134 unsnapped objects, resnap all notes on the timing menu Fixed.
- I disagree with the diff whit a "+" Changed to 'Normal'.
- Maybe set a smaller grid and relocate the objects with distance snap enabled ? Yeah, thanks.
- Set SV to 1,0 ? Done.
- 00:46:201 This "kiai timing" is repeated, please delete 1 of them Fixed.
- Drain, OV -1 ? [color=BF40FF]Done.[/color]

00:16:043 (4) - spacing Fixed.
00:20:438 (5) - spacing Fixed.
00:28:585 (x) - Add a slider from here to 00:28:924 ? Sure
00:38:065 (5) - New combo, and also unstack it from (6,7) Done.
00:40:777 (10) - Change finish for a whistle on the last reverse? Done.
01:02:483 - Set the end of the kiai time here? Done~
01:13:685 (7) - Exteend the slider to 01:14:009 and delete (8) ? Done.
01:22:811 (3,4) - Spacing Fixed.
01:28:234 (4,5,6) - Hard to read for a Normal diff Fixed. :3


Hard

- 201 unsnapped objects, resnap all notes on the timing menu Alright.
- 00:46:201 This "kiai timing" is repeated, please delete 1 of them Fixed.
- Set SV to 1,2 ? Nah. >.o


00:10:619 - End the spin here Done.
00:11:963 (2) - Spacing Fixed.
00:12:980 (4) - Align with (3) or a grid down? Done.
00:13:658 (5) - Stack with (3) and add new combo? Done.
00:17:726 (1) - new combo? Alright.
00:19:421 (8) - Add whistle ? Okay.
00:19:760 (9) - Remove whistle? Done.
00:20:099 (10) - Add whistle ? Done.
00:20:438 (11) - Remove whistle? Done.
00:27:556 (7,8) - Very strange rhythm Changed.
00:29:251 (9) - New combo? Done.
00:30:958 (x) - Add spinner? If you added delete (1,2) on the next combo and replace (3,4) objects Done.
00:36:709 (12) - Too many reverses, maybe something like > http://puu.sh/3E8e Fixed.
00:41:116 (12) - Align with (11) Okay.
00:43:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I disagree with this, maybe something like > http://puu.sh/3E93 Fixed.
00:47:216 (5) - Delete this? Nah.
00:49:399 (x) - Add a circle? Nah.
00:56:031 (1~5) - Space this combo correctly Done.
00:57:387 (1~5) - ^ Done.
01:14:517 (x) - Add a note and also on 01:14:856 ? or a slider that connect this two? Okay. :3
01:28:912 (5,6,7) - Spacing Done.

And that is all, starred because of DDR

Thank you for all the help & the star~!

Re-uploaded~

ikari_kyon wrote:

Insane

-OD -1 ? Ok;P

00:06:711 (4) - Remove finish? Fixed
00:08:236 (3) - Add finish? Hmm. I think it's not so good. cuz there is already whistle and clap hitsound there;)
00:09:253 (2) - Add finish on the beginning? Fixed
00:32:643 (5) - Put this on centre? DOn't know if it's a good idead, but I'll let it be on the center^^
00:35:185 (6) - New combo? ok
00:35:694 (1) - Remove new combo? Nope, there are beginning jumps with this note, so I'll elt it be though
00:36:711 (4) - New combo? ok
00:44:338 (3,5,6) - Tick custom sound feels weird, also at 00:48:050 (4,6) // 00:49:762 (3,5) hmmm.. just wanted to be the normal hitsound on every beat
00:59:931 (5) - Delete this circle? Ok
01:00:101 (6) - New combo? Yep^^
01:12:982 (4) - Strange slider, you must use a slide reverse better, maybe is just me I'll let it be for now:)

Very nice Insane, but I disagree with too many circles Hmm.. Thx for modding ) And.. I just want to make my mapping style, so I'll use the circles like those, the Insane diff in my own beatmap has the same circles spoints, so I'll laeve them like this for now



And that is all, starred because of DDR

Here is my fixed diff:)

Download: RIYU KOSAKA - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [ShiroKitty's Insane].osu

Re-uploaded~
Thanks

unrelated BG ?

Insane :
01:12:982 (4) - totaly unrankable slider

Eirene wrote:

unrelated BG ?

Would change it, but I can't find a BG that has "Love Shine" or Riyu Kosaka.
:/

Edit: Just made a bg.
I think it works better.

Eirene wrote:

unrelated BG ?

Insane :
01:12:982 (4) - totaly unrankable slider changed ^^

Thx:)

Download: RIYU KOSAKA - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [ShiroKitty's Insane].osu

ymmm. why You uploaded my old diff? ;o it doesn't have the slider changed ;D

Alright, everything's fixed now.
Re-uploaded and whatnot~
~

YUM.

Hard:
01:09:592 (1) - If you want to make a big speed up or something, just make this a jump instead of a sped up slider~. It plays better as a jump~.

Easy:
00:35:704 (3) - Sliders with a lot of repeats are unmoe and uncreative ;~;. Make some sexy moe patterns~.
00:51:975 (1) - ^
00:56:043 (2) - ^

Yay~.

CDFA sorry for question;)) but did U mod my guest diff too? )

CDFA wrote:

YUM.

Hard:
01:09:592 (1) - If you want to make a big speed up or something, just make this a jump instead of a sped up slider~. It plays better as a jump~. Alright, fixed. :3

Easy:
00:35:704 (3) - Sliders with a lot of repeats are unmoe and uncreative ;~;. Make some sexy moe patterns~. I tried to make the changes as moe as possible. ;_; So I hope they look better.
00:51:975 (1) - ^ Done.
00:56:043 (2) - ^ Done.

Yay~.

Thanks for the mod & star~!

ShiroKitty wrote:

CDFA sorry for question;)) but did U mod my guest diff too? )

It's allright ;D.

I modded your guest diff, but I didn't find anything wrong with it, so I didn't put anything~ Good job~.

good song!!


Rnked GoGo~!!!

Star★

Elize wrote:

Star★

Thank you~!

CDFA wrote:

ShiroKitty wrote:

CDFA sorry for question;)) but did U mod my guest diff too? )

It's allright ;D.

I modded your guest diff, but I didn't find anything wrong with it, so I didn't put anything~ Good job~.

Yay!! ) Thank You *__* )))

More people need to mod.
;___;
I'm sad that no one wants to mod this.

Hey, saw your map in #modreqs, so here’s a mod.

[Easy]
Most of your notes are unsnapped, go to “Timing” and click “Resnap all Notes”
00:41:117: Insert a break in between 00:41:117 and 00:43:829.
01:03:151: Delete this inherent timing section and make a new one at 01:02:473 (So that Kiai times ends on the last note of the section instead of the middle of the spinner)
01:14:168: Insert a break in between 01:14:168 and 01:16:372
01:24:507: Insert a break in between 01:24:507 and 01:27:219
01:32:304: Delete inherent timing section

[Normal]
I noticed some spacing issues, go into AIMod to see where the problems are.
00:41:372: Insert a break between 00:41:372 and 00:43:829.
01:02:473: Insert a break between 01:02:473 and 01:05:524.
01:24:677: Insert a break between 01:24:677 and 01:27:219.

[Hard]
AIMod says there spacing issues here too, I would try and fix them.
00:26:202: Delete 1 and 2 (You’re following the vocals in your map, but there are no vocals in those two spots)
00:26:541: New combo
00:27:558: Get rid of the double bounce and extend to 00:28:067
00:28:236: Get rid of double bounce and extend to 00:28:745.
01:16:711: Move 7 down two grids to continue stream pattern
01:21:456: Since you have two sets of streams that last seven notes, maybe try to make two halves of a heart to keep with the heart theme? Something kinda like this:

[ShiroKitty’s Insane]
AIMod says spacing issues again, I would go through and try to fix them up.
01:13:660: I’m pretty sure having a circle right on top of the next slider is unrankable, try to move it around so 6 and 7 don’t overlap. Maybe something like this?
01:27:897: Some sliders are overlapping slightly, here’s another suggestion:

Good luck! (I'd star this but it seems like they got rid of stars. o_o)

Silarial wrote:

Hey, saw your map in #modreqs, so here’s a mod.

[Easy]
Most of your notes are unsnapped, go to “Timing” and click “Resnap all Notes” Okay.
00:41:117: Insert a break in between 00:41:117 and 00:43:829. Okay.
01:03:151: Delete this inherent timing section and make a new one at 01:02:473 (So that Kiai times ends on the last note of the section instead of the middle of the spinner) Okay.
01:14:168: Insert a break in between 01:14:168 and 01:16:372 Okay.
01:24:507: Insert a break in between 01:24:507 and 01:27:219 'Kay~
01:32:304: Delete inherent timing section Alright.

[Normal]
I noticed some spacing issues, go into AIMod to see where the problems are. Fixed.
00:41:372: Insert a break between 00:41:372 and 00:43:829. Okay.
01:02:473: Insert a break between 01:02:473 and 01:05:524. Okay~
01:24:677: Insert a break between 01:24:677 and 01:27:219. Alright.

[Hard]
AIMod says there spacing issues here too, I would try and fix them. Fixed~
00:26:202: Delete 1 and 2 (You’re following the vocals in your map, but there are no vocals in those two spots) Oh, okay :3
00:26:541: New combo Done~
00:27:558: Get rid of the double bounce and extend to 00:28:067 'Kay.
00:28:236: Get rid of double bounce and extend to 00:28:745. 'Kay.
01:16:711: Move 7 down two grids to continue stream pattern Okay~
01:21:456: Since you have two sets of streams that last seven notes, maybe try to make two halves of a heart to keep with the heart theme? Something kinda like this: Done~

SPOILER

Good luck! (I'd star this but it seems like they got rid of stars. o_o)

Thanks you for the mod~!
Re-uploaded~

Silarial wrote:

[ShiroKitty’s Insane]
AIMod says spacing issues again, I would go through and try to fix them up. Yes.. cuz it's an Insane, and I made jumps. it's natural that AIMod is telling about the spacing issues when there is jump or stream
01:13:660: I’m pretty sure having a circle right on top of the next slider is unrankable, try to move it around so 6 and 7 don’t overlap. Maybe something like this? Hmmm, I've changed this a little, thx for suggestion ;P
01:27:897: Some sliders are overlapping slightly, here’s another suggestion: ok, fixed:)

Good luck! (I'd star this but it seems like they got rid of stars. o_o)

Download: RIYU KOSAKA - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [ShiroKitty's Insane].osu

Oh...complete *_*
http://puu.sh/4Oyi
P.S. sliders a bit ugly.And diff a bit like insane

Thank you so much for the diff~
:3
It's a lot better than my hard diff.
x'D

Random #modreqs request here I am~

-Seeing as both Hard and Insane start at the same place they both need the same audio lead-in time (I suggest at least 2.0 seconds as the maps start pretty fast)
-The "Lighting" in your folder is taking up much more space while playing than it needs to, try and reduce that more so it doesn't become distracting to players
-Makes sure the tags are consistent on every difficulty (every difficulty should include the guest mappers names in the tags as well)
-Most sources I see just capitalize the artist as "Riyu Kosaka" (also I am not sure about 'Love' being repeated twice in the title..)
-Keep the kiai the same at least on the difficulties you created
-Make sure the preview point is consistent on every difficulty

Easy:
00:22:134 (4,1) - switch new combo to follow the music more
00:22:134 (4) - add a whistle to the end to follow your previous pattern
00:26:541 (1,1) - these could look nicer curved around each other (it is kind of uneven at the moment + doesn't need the extra new combo)
00:31:965 (6) - new combo
00:35:694 (3,4) - space out more
00:53:999 (5,1) - space out more
00:56:711 (3,4) - move slightly closer together

Normal:
-Jumps like 00:12:304 (4,1) and 00:14:338 (4,1) etc seem kind of out of place
00:15:016 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing consistent
00:22:812 (2,3) - would look better if notes like these didn't overlap with the edge of sliders
00:28:575 (4,6) - fix stacking
00:38:067 (1,2,3,4) - spacing should stay consistent on stuff like this
00:45:863 (5,6,1) - ^
00:51:287 (5,1) - space these out more
01:13:660 (7,1) - ^

Kuma's Hard:
-All of the jumps near the start aren't really necessarily in my opinion
00:28:067 (8,1,2) - space out more
00:39:762 (1,2,3) - minor spacing inconsistencies like this could be fixed to look better
00:48:067 (4,8) - fix stacking
00:51:117 (2) - could look nicer between the 2 sliders
01:00:101 (5) - new combo
01:07:897 (1,2,3,4) - keep spacing consistent
01:15:694 (8,1) - space out more

ShiroKitty's Insane:
00:02:473 (4) - sliders like these look odd with sharp edges
00:32:643 (5,1) - space these out more if possible
01:04:846 (5,1) - anti jump doesn't fit here
01:09:592 (5,6) - fix stacking on these

The mapset isn't too bad in general but needs a lot more fixes before it gets approved. One of the main things you should do is go through everything and make sure all of your spacing stays the same throughout the whole difficulty.

Good luck~

James2250 wrote:

Kuma's Hard:
-All of the jumps near the start aren't really necessarily in my opinion
00:28:067 (8,1,2) - space out more
00:39:762 (1,2,3) - minor spacing inconsistencies like this could be fixed to look better
00:48:067 (4,8) - fix stacking
00:51:117 (2) - could look nicer between the 2 sliders
01:00:101 (5) - new combo
01:07:897 (1,2,3,4) - keep spacing consistent
01:15:694 (8,1) - space out more

Wow James.Thx.All Fixed

Download: RIYU KOSAKA - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Kuma's Hard].osu

James2250 wrote:

-The "Lighting" in your folder is taking up much more space while playing than it needs to, try and reduce that more so it doesn't become distracting to players Alright, I deleted it. It wasn't really visible anyway~
-Makes sure the tags are consistent on every difficulty (every difficulty should include the guest mappers names in the tags as well) Fixed~
-Most sources I see just capitalize the artist as "Riyu Kosaka" (also I am not sure about 'Love' being repeated twice in the title..) Fixed :3
-Keep the kiai the same at least on the difficulties you created Okay~
-Make sure the preview point is consistent on every difficulty Okay~

Easy:
00:22:134 (4,1) - switch new combo to follow the music more Done.
00:22:134 (4) - add a whistle to the end to follow your previous pattern Alright.
00:26:541 (1,1) - these could look nicer curved around each other (it is kind of uneven at the moment + doesn't need the extra new combo) Fixed~
00:31:965 (6) - new combo Kay.
00:35:694 (3,4) - space out more Done.
00:53:999 (5,1) - space out more
00:56:711 (3,4) - move slightly close Done.r together

Normal:
-Jumps like 00:12:304 (4,1) and 00:14:338 (4,1) etc seem kind of out of place Fixed~
00:15:016 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing consistent Okay~
00:22:812 (2,3) - would look better if notes like these didn't overlap with the edge of sliders Fixed.
00:28:575 (4,6) - fix stacking Done.
00:38:067 (1,2,3,4) - spacing should stay consistent on stuff like this Alright.
00:45:863 (5,6,1) - ^ Okay.
00:51:287 (5,1) - space these out more Alright.
01:13:660 (7,1) - ^ Alright.

The mapset isn't too bad in general but needs a lot more fixes before it gets approved. One of the main things you should do is go through everything and make sure all of your spacing stays the same throughout the whole difficulty. Alright, I'll do that. :3

Good luck~

Thank you so much for the mod~!
Re-uploaded~

James2250 wrote:

ShiroKitty's Insane:
00:02:473 (4) - sliders like these look odd with sharp edges fixed^^
00:32:643 (5,1) - space these out more if possible fixed^^
01:04:846 (5,1) - anti jump doesn't fit here fixed^^
01:09:592 (5,6) - fix stacking on these fixed ^^

The mapset isn't too bad in general but needs a lot more fixes before it gets approved. One of the main things you should do is go through everything and make sure all of your spacing stays the same throughout the whole difficulty.

Good luck~

Thx for mod:)))

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [ShiroKitty's Insane].osu

Re-uploaded~

By the way, I have a question:

I looked in the song folder, and the .osb file doesn't have the same name as the rest of all the difficulties...
Is that bad?

And if so, what do I do to fix it?

I think, You can delete it cuz it's just a Storyboard file, and You don't have any SB in this beatmap:) You can see when You open it, it's clear

Ohhhh.. and.. End the Kiai Time in all Your diffs in the same point as in Easy Kuma-san You too

Hi~

Easy
00:46:202 (5) - delete here's KIAI time?
other looks fine~

Normal
00:11:626 (2) - left 1 grid
00:40:439 (5,6) - down 1 grid
00:41:456 - add a Break time?
00:52:134 (1,2) - a bit hard to hit for NORMAL players.... try to do it easier
00:53:321 (1) - change to the slider?
01:02:643 - add a Break Time
01:09:592 (7) - resnap it
01:23:490 (5) - left 1 grid
01:24:846 - add a Break time
01:29:592 (2) - up 1 grid?

Kuma's Hard
00:27:219 (3,4,5,6,7) - make it like a style?
00:51:287 (3) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/4VrN
01:20:440 (5) - right 1 grid

ShiroKitty's Insane
looks fine

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sorry for my nazi mod...
cause i'm sick now
so Good Luck!~!!!

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi~

Easy
00:46:202 (5) - delete here's KIAI time? Okay. :3
other looks fine~

Normal
00:11:626 (2) - left 1 grid Fixed~
00:40:439 (5,6) - down 1 grid Fixed~
00:41:456 - add a Break time? Okay~
00:52:134 (1,2) - a bit hard to hit for NORMAL players.... try to do it easier Hope I fixed it alright.
00:53:321 (1) - change to the slider? Nah, I think it's better as a spinner. x.x
01:02:643 - add a Break Time Oki~
01:09:592 (7) - resnap it Kay~
01:23:490 (5) - left 1 grid Kay~
01:24:846 - add a Break time Okay~
01:29:592 (2) - up 1 grid? Sure :3

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sorry for my nazi mod...
cause i'm sick now
so Good Luck!~!!!

Thank you very much~
I hope you get better~
;_;

ShiroKitty wrote:

I think, You can delete it cuz it's just a Storyboard file, and You don't have any SB in this beatmap:) You can see when You open it, it's clear

Ohhhh.. and.. End the Kiai Time in all Your diffs in the same point as in Easy Kuma-san You too

Alright I think I fixed everything. xD

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi~

Kuma's Hard
00:27:219 (3,4,5,6,7) - make it like a style?
00:51:287 (3) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/4VrN
01:20:440 (5) - right 1 grid

Fixed.Thanks

ShiroKitty wrote:

Ohhhh.. and.. End the Kiai Time in all Your diffs in the same point as in Easy Kuma-san You too

Poff please fix it on my diff

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Kuma's Hard].osu

Kuma-san wrote:

ShiroKitty wrote:

Ohhhh.. and.. End the Kiai Time in all Your diffs in the same point as in Easy Kuma-san You too

Poff please fix it on my diff

Re-uploaded.

& I fixed the kiai on Kuma's diff.
~

[Normal]

00:51:117 (x) - I would add a note here or make amke this a repeating slider. There's vocals here that repeat three times.

[Kuma's Hard]

-I would consider lowering the HP darin on this. I missed one note and it went down by half. O_O

00:19:592 (1,2,3) - Make these sliders fit together better. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141217
00:30:101 (5) - Move this slider up one grid.
00:39:762 (1) - This slider could look a little better. Can I suggest this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141218
00:40:439 (3) - ^ (Try using only one point for round sliders.)
00:47:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Woah I really don't like this honeycomb here. Really hard to read. Space them out please.
00:50:270 (1,2,3) - Make these three look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141219 AKA: move (2) and (3) up.
01:19:423 (2) - move up, and right once.
01:19:762 (3) - Move left once.
01:20:101 (4) - Move up and right once.
01:20:440 (5) - Move left once.

Nothing wrong with the Easy and I don't mod insanes.

Lizzehb wrote:

[Normal]

00:51:117 (x) - I would add a note here or make amke this a repeating slider. There's vocals here that repeat three times.

[Kuma's Hard]

-I would consider lowering the HP darin on this. I missed one note and it went down by half. O_OI can did SS to this map O_O

00:19:592 (1,2,3) - Make these sliders fit together better. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141217
00:30:101 (5) - Move this slider up one grid.
00:39:762 (1) - This slider could look a little better. Can I suggest this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141218
00:40:439 (3) - ^ (Try using only one point for round sliders.)
00:47:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Woah I really don't like this honeycomb here. Really hard to read. Space them out please.Reading pretty good
00:50:270 (1,2,3) - Make these three look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/141219 AKA: move (2) and (3) up.
01:19:423 (2) - move up, and right once.
01:19:762 (3) - Move left once.
01:20:101 (4) - Move up and right once.
01:20:440 (5) - Move left once.

Nothing wrong with the Easy and I don't mod insanes.

Not all but fixed

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Kuma's Hard].osu

Lizzehb wrote:

[Normal]

00:51:117 (x) - I would add a note here or make amke this a repeating slider. There's vocals here that repeat three times. Alright, will do~

Nothing wrong with the Easy and I don't mod insanes.

Thank you very much. :3
Re-uploaded~

Ymm.. maybe I'm a newbie with osu! standard mode, but.. I can finish many Hard diffs.. and with [Kuma's Hard] it's like impossible for me I can't follow the rythm here ( maybe You should change the name to Insane?

ShiroKitty wrote:

Ymm.. maybe I'm a newbie with osu! standard mode, but.. I can finish many Hard diffs.. and with [Kuma's Hard] it's like impossible for me I can't follow the rythm here ( maybe You should change the name to Insane?

Nope.This hard because me and my friends can did ss here(if i want)
Upd.make more easy

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Kuma's Hard].osu

General
Your BG size 960x 768. You need only 800x600 or 1024x768.
Delete osb file then make full submit

Easy
01:33:999 (3) - too much for easy diff. Can you make 1 slider? Or some else

Normal
add move curves sliders?
00:40:778 (6) - kick slider (2 repeat) on normal diff it's bad idea
00:55:355 (2,3) - ^
01:24:507 - finish here orz
01:32:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing!

ShiroKitty
Hi~
Distance spasing 0.9x why? orz
00:04:677 (1) - move it 00:10:440 (5,6) - Ctrl+R
00:10:101 (3,4,5,6) - make jumps with these notes?
00:19:592 - add note here under (4)? then 00:19:762 (1) - will look like jump
00:31:456 (3) - move up?
00:32:643 (5) - NC?
00:42:982 (3,4) - Ctrl+R
01:04:846 (5) - move to center
01:12:304 (2) - move little down
01:12:982 (4) - move litlle up
01:13:660 (6) - move little right (less overlaps)

Kuma
00:13:829 (1,2,3) - думаю лучше было бы сместить на 1/2 вправо
00:19:592 (1,2,3) - также только влево
00:41:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - кароче есть отличный способ сделать симметричный "цветок". Берем (1) слайдер и так как у нас 6 "лепестков" то 360/6=60 градусов. Жмем ctrl+shift+r ставим Selection Centre 60 градусов и так далее копипастим.
01:05:185 ноту на белый тик чтобы легче было ловить ритм
01:09:592 (4) - тут нужна 1/3
01:14:338 (4) - по идеи тут нужно НК хотя джамп вообще имхо не к месту
01:33:999 (6) - НК?