1. Gezo's Taiko Heaven (4.83 stars, 404 notes)
2. Gray Heaven (4.37 stars, 155 notes)
3. Metallic Heaven (4.9 stars, 288 notes)
4. Sweet Heaven (1.91 stars, 81 notes)

Hushu wrote:

Found nothing in Sweet Heaven, sorry~

Metallic Heaven:
0:23:951 - New combo here not 1/3 later. I am pretty sure that then it is right, try it~no thanks
0:31:635 - Looks better without new combo here in my opinion~no thanks
0:35:319 - Why is new combo 1/3 late here..? Please new combo here not 1/3 later. no
0:47:740 - New verse starts here, so nc here not 1/1 later.no
0:53:003 - Nc here not 1/1 later?no
1:31:003 - I think a spinner would feel better here as the finish is dragged~~ no

Very suprising song choice; Something different than all the other weird songs coming out right now...

ErufenRito wrote:

Bubbled!

Lol, jk, I can't give bubbles, but meh, I really didn't found even one mistake in your map, there are some suggestions that I can give out, but I'm almost sure that you will reject them.

Oh and regarding about what faceman said about your Metallic diff, I gotta say that I had lots of fun playing it, and you shouldn't change it.

Derekku wrote:

Wait, why is this in Pending if you're waiting on more difficulties? o.o

Also, I remember this song so well from DDR. Nostalgia <3

0_o wrote:

Sweet Heaven
00:15:214 (4) - move back to the previous 1/3 tick the way that played felt awkward.
00:16:477 (2) - Sounds better with the ending moved back 1/3; it emphasizes the syncopation more. oh wow you are right.
00:21:530 (2) - End 1/3 earlier again? (and maybe add a circle at 00:22:372)i guess.
00:46:793 (2) - End 1/3 earliersure
00:51:845 (2) - ^ sure
01:25:319 (3) - Move back 1/3 that felt awkward too.
01:27:319 (2,3) - Move 2 forward 1/3, 3 back 1/3. You could make it a slider if you're worried about the pattern being too difficult for newbies (I think it's fine though)its fine the way it is.

EDIT: Alright, maybe that was a bit harsh, I just played it again and it really isn't that bad. I would have preferred the less streamy style but hey, opinions.

Aaaand here's your half of the mod4mod (didn't see your message asking for a map until like, now )

eldnl wrote:

[General]

- The background is very small, please put a BG of 800x600 or 1024x768 this bg is authentic and the only size it comes in currently.

[Easy]

00:40:477 (1) Remove new combo, isn't necessary. i guess

[Hard]

00:11:424 (1) Add whistle?no
00:12:687 (1) Finish same as the easy difficulty. no
00:16:372 (2) Whistle at the end? sure
00:21:530 (1)Whistle at the start?sure
00:22:793 (1) Finish no thanks.
00:27:214 (1) Add one repeat and add finish? no thanks.
00:41:740 (1) Don't put the inherited sections on the notes, but a MAT said to me >.> what MAT told you this? I'm pretty sure its just fine.
01:27:214 (3,4,5) What rhythm are you following? make something like this: http://puu.sh/3OF1 symetrical flip of previous notes
01:31:003 (1) Finish sure

[Insane]

00:08:161 (3,3) The whistle at the end sounds really bad to me ;_; it sounds really nice to me.
00:52:793 (8) Clap? ok
00:53:108 (x) Add a note? nah
01:29:003 (3,3) The whistle at the end sounds bad.. it sounds really nice to me.
01:31:003 (1) Remove whistle, If you don't want, add in the other diffs? removed whistle

Really nice map and good song <3
Star.

Zelos wrote:

eldnl wrote:

01:27:214 (3,4,5) What rhythm are you following? make something like this: http://puu.sh/3OF1 symetrical flip of previous notes

Thank you for your mod.

dkun wrote:

ohi.

modding key:
this is a suggestion/praise
this is something I really recommend
this is unrankable

Metallic Heaven
00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - align 4,5 with 1,2 via Y axis done
00:32:266 (3) - move this up a bit more towards the direction of 4? moved it up a tiny bit. (1 grid point I think)
that slow down section after the spinner is genius. loving it.
also, after kiai. great!

thank you dkun

Gray Heaven
Nothing much to say about this!

Sweet Heaven
Same as Gray Heaven!

Great job on the map~
★

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Welp. I fixed up the dimensions for the BG.

ziin wrote:

[sweet]
01:19:635 (1) - Just an idea to throw around because I like playing with slider ticks. Use BPM 142.5 here. Slider speed 1.33x if you want to keep the same slider speed. This is questionable when ranking, but I really think it would make this section sound better, and I would hope the bats agree with me.
01:22:161 (2) - back to BPM 190 if you use ^
00:41:740 - volume low ~30% (mute)
00:42:372 - volume high. The normally ugly sudden spinner sound would be good here, since it matches music.
00:51:845 (2) - it would sound better starting on 1/2, but I understand this is an easy too. The actual notes of the trumpet here are on 00:52:003 and 00:52:319
no thanks to all of these.

[gray]
00:17:108 (4) - 1/3 earlier made a new slider that stars a 1/3rd earlier but ends at the same time.
00:51:845 (3) - this was confusing since it sounds like you're mapping the trumpet here. deleting it sounds blank. not sure what to do here.

[metal]
00:31:319 (8) - delete
00:40:372 - add
01:19:635 (1) - Consider what I said for sweet here too, as the tick rate doesn't fit here well.
00:41:740 - mute
00:42:372 - unmute
no thanks to these.

very nice

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Ohai Zelos.
[General]
Welp. I fixed up the dimensions for the BG.

SPOILER

[Gray Heaven]
00:07:635 (1) - Add a finish to the start of this slider.
00:08:898 (3) - ^
00:45:740 (1) - Add a whistle to this note
00:50:898 (1) - Add whistle to the start of the slider.
01:27:530 (4) - Move this slider back 1/3 and extend it by 1/3. Sounds better and it matches (00:51:845)
01:28:477 (1) - Add a finish to the start of this slider.
01:29:740 (3) - ^
all done.

[Metallic Heaven]
00:53:003 (10) - I don't think the finish fits here. The finish like sound is on the white tick and there is no note there.
the finish fits in my opinion.

And that's about it. Just some nazi on the hitsounds. You sir, can now have your STAR.

Good job Zelos.

SapphireGhost wrote:

HI THERE

[General]
- Are you sure there's not a space between "gray" and "(gimmix)"? Oh, and fix the thread title either way for completeness ~
- I'd advise not using pure black and white as combo colors, because it makes the approach circles kinda icky. Do something cool like:
B: 28,28,28
W: 237,237,237

[Gray Heaven]
00:51:424 (2,3) - Spacing is a bit weird here but fine. fixed

[Metallic Heaven]
00:36:687 (5) - Maybe end this 1/3 tick earlier? I'm not sure.
00:52:898 (9,10) - Possibly remove these.
Nay to both of these.

[Gezo's Taiko Heaven]
AIMod says there are 145 unsnapped objects so you might want to sort of check that.
Re-snapped.
Whee stuff was good.

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Gezo's Taiko Heaven]
AIMod says there are 145 unsnapped objects so you might want to sort of check that.

.... o_o

It may be the ones after the "slowdown" part (Which is 63 BPM in the authentic chart)...

Well, thanks to you and Zelos

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

I wish there was a higher res BG/video, but I guess there isn't.

Easy has different combo colours than the other difficulties? Regardless, the black (on Easy) and purple (on others) is really hard to see, especially when the map first starts. Pure white's also pretty blinding in kiai.
Fixed the easy

[Easy]

01:01:845 (3,1) - I dunno, I feel like this would be more readable if it was spaced farther than normal distance spacing, since the 3 previous notes don't land on a white tick.
I think its fine.

[Normal]

Funny funny rhythms, wow. I played in the jazz band and couldn't predict these.

Tickrate 3 and one size smaller hitcircles might fit this better, but more importantly, it makes it look a lot better and play a lot easier. You can count ticks to see how long the sliders actually are instead of guessing, sliders like 00:41:740 (1) look a lot nicer since the ticks become symmetrical, and the ticks help settle the "strangeness" of swing time.

00:38:582 (3) - This slider curves in a way that looks like it's trying to arch around the 2 but isn't.
Fixed somehow

[Insane]

See Normal, same thing about the tickrate, though the hitcircle size is fine.

00:29:951 (8) - This jump really should have a new combo. This isn't the only one, there's another at 00:32:477 (4).done
01:19:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like this sounds better with them 1/3 shorter each.wat no these sound find imo

Wow, you really packed a lot of notes into that 1:23 of playtime. XD
It appears so :3

[Taiko]

00:59:319 (152) - (wow that's a big number) A finish here? You have in on the next few iterations.

I can't play Taiko well enough to mod this. XD

Solid map, interesting song choice, here's a star.

Kytoxid wrote:

[Taiko]

00:59:319 (152) - (wow that's a big number) A finish here? You have in on the next few iterations. Added. A fail from me XD
I can't play Taiko well enough to mod this. XD

Solid map, interesting song choice, here's a star.

1. Offset 62 (+6). I was getting 0% mistimed it with that. If you are reluctant to change it, you should ask someone who's really good at timing to confirm. I am pretty sure yours is a little early though. This isn't a critical value, so it's not a huge deal, a simple local +5 can do the trick, but if you have the opportunity to check, you could do so.

1. Due to the nature of the song, I recommend OD7. It could be quite hard to get decent accuracy with OD8. Don't get me wrong, OD8 is fine if you wish, but I don't think it's really necessary for such a "funky" style song, plus you have some spinners to make sure scores aren't static. OD8 just feels hard (not in a difficulty way), when the song is quite dynamic and shouldn't give off a stiff and hard feeling.
2. 00:07:635 (1) - IDK, it's probably just me but I had a really hard time noticing this in time on multiple attempts when playing with video, if possible, could you manually change your combo color for this combo? Both blue and white work fine, even red is okay. Rest should be pretty much expected. Only a suggestion, damn my eyes. ;x;
3. 00:15:530 (3) - I would suggest a new combo for this, and not new combo for 00:15:108 (1). The reason is, you are swapping from one musical line to another, and on this spot it's quite clear what you're following. Also not a critical thing, but I like when combos follow the music whenever possible. Also if you do this change, remove the new combo from 00:16:372 (1). (look at Gray Heaven diff, you did it exactly like this there hehe)
4. 00:29:951 (1,1) - Increase the spacing between these. Should be almost double (~1.5x snap).
5. 00:32:477 (1,1) - Same here. Your spacing is not bad, but like this it plays better and is easier to read.
6. 00:35:003 (1,2) - Same as the above, also put a new combo on (2) instead of the next note, just for consistency.
7. 00:41:740 (1) - Maybe swap to soft set for this spinner? The spinner end doesn't sound that nice with normal default tbh. Sure it lands somewhere on the drumline, but that drumline starts a full white tick earlier, so landing like this in the middle of it sounds off to me. Just a suggestion though.
8. 00:53:003 (10) - Remove this finish it's coming a tad too early.
9. 00:53:108 - Sounds like you're missing a note! Also place that finish here cause it's in the music.

1. AR 6. AR5 is too slow considering the pacing is quite fast. I would probably say AR7 is the best, but seeing how your lowest diff has a low AR, this could bring some diff spread problems.
2. 00:27:214 (1) - Make it repeat once more and add a finish on that final repeat. Felt like there was a note missing like this. You might have to reposition the upcoming circles a little after this change, so they have same spacing.
3. 00:55:003 (1) - Finish (you have it on the highest diff here as well).

1. Try AR3 maybe? Feels better to me.
2. 00:07:635 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical? Just a small nazi.
3. 00:10:161 (1) - Finish?
4. 01:28:477 (1,2) - Another small nazi! Make the symmetrical?

lolcubes wrote:

Hey Zelos! \:D

[General]:

1. Offset 62 (+6). I was getting 0% mistimed it with that. If you are reluctant to change it, you should ask someone who's really good at timing to confirm. I am pretty sure yours is a little early though. This isn't a critical value, so it's not a huge deal, a simple local +5 can do the trick, but if you have the opportunity to check, you could do so.

I'm almost sure the timing is correct but yes I will get someone to verify.

[Metallic Heaven]:

1. Due to the nature of the song, I recommend OD7. It could be quite hard to get decent accuracy with OD8. Don't get me wrong, OD8 is fine if you wish, but I don't think it's really necessary for such a "funky" style song, plus you have some spinners to make sure scores aren't static. OD8 just feels hard (not in a difficulty way), when the song is quite dynamic and shouldn't give off a stiff and hard feeling. This difficulty is stuffed to the brim with notes so I would only think OD8 fits.
2. 00:07:635 (1) - IDK, it's probably just me but I had a really hard time noticing this in time on multiple attempts when playing with video, if possible, could you manually change your combo color for this combo? Both blue and white work fine, even red is okay. Rest should be pretty much expected. Only a suggestion, damn my eyes. ;x; I could see it :V
3. 00:15:530 (3) - I would suggest a new combo for this, and not new combo for 00:15:108 (1). The reason is, you are swapping from one musical line to another, and on this spot it's quite clear what you're following. Also not a critical thing, but I like when combos follow the music whenever possible. Also if you do this change, remove the new combo from 00:16:372 (1). (look at Gray Heaven diff, you did it exactly like this there hehe)no thankies.
4. 00:29:951 (1,1) - Increase the spacing between these. Should be almost double (~1.5x snap).the 1.5x was for the jump part only.
5. 00:32:477 (1,1) - Same here. Your spacing is not bad, but like this it plays better and is easier to read. ^
6. 00:35:003 (1,2) - Same as the above, also put a new combo on (2) instead of the next note, just for consistency. I would rather keep as it
7. 00:41:740 (1) - Maybe swap to soft set for this spinner? The spinner end doesn't sound that nice with normal default tbh. Sure it lands somewhere on the drumline, but that drumline starts a full white tick earlier, so landing like this in the middle of it sounds off to me. Just a suggestion though. err wut? not sure what you are saying about the drumline here.
8. 00:53:003 (10) - Remove this finish it's coming a tad too early. but the finish is pretty sounding.
9. 00:53:108 - Sounds like you're missing a note! Also place that finish here cause it's in the music.it sounds better without the note imo

[Gray Heaven]:

1. AR 6. AR5 is too slow considering the pacing is quite fast. I would probably say AR7 is the best, but seeing how your lowest diff has a low AR, this could bring some diff spread problems. it seems to fit already as it is imo
2. 00:27:214 (1) - Make it repeat once more and add a finish on that final repeat. Felt like there was a note missing like this. You might have to reposition the upcoming circles a little after this change, so they have same spacing. i did this because of the snare drum part.
3. 00:55:003 (1) - Finish (you have it on the highest diff here as well).done

[Sweet Heaven]:

1. Try AR3 maybe? Feels better to me. now thats just way to slow.
2. 00:07:635 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical? Just a small nazi. [/color]
3. 00:10:161 (1) - Finish? sure why not.
4. 01:28:477 (1,2) - Another small nazi! Make the symmetrical?this is symmetrical, if i move it, it breaks distance snap which I try not to do on an Easy.

I was really amazed how well tickrate 3 works here. The song is really cool and the vid is pretty awesome (kinda hilarious if you think a little haha). A star well well deserved.

• - Should there be a space between "gray" and "(gimmix)"? (Someone else mentioned it but I don't think you responded)
  (Optional) - Maaaybe add the warning about the video for epilepsy in your Creator's Words? (That's pushing it but I dunno )

• - Fine.

• 00:51:845 (3) Spacing

• - Most of my problems were similar to lolcube's mod, but you rejected them. Oh well

Darcsol wrote:

[General]

• - Should there be a space between "gray" and "(gimmix)"? (Someone else mentioned it but I don't think you responded)
  (Optional) - Maaaybe add the warning about the video for epilepsy in your Creator's Words? (That's pushing it but I dunno )

There is not a space between gray and (gimmix)
also the video is fine this time. the Beethoven one was a bit more hectic.

[Sweet Heaven]

• - Fine.

[Gray Heaven]

• 00:51:845 (3) Spacing fixed

[Metallic Heaven]

• - Most of my problems were similar to lolcube's mod, but you rejected them. Oh well

Not much problems to find. You deserve it; have a star~

1. The background dimensions are... 320x240 o.o No wonder why it has such a low quality Can you find a better quality one? 1024x768, as always?
   If you have a hard time finding one, but I mean a really hard time, then maybe I can try to create something, ya know.
2. In most cases, I tend to say that white isn't a good combo colour choice. Perhaps here it isn't a bad idea, but anyway, I'll suggest this one:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   Combo2 : 128,0,128

   Check if you like it!

1. I don't see any problems here, good job!

1. 00:52:056 (4) - Kind of too close to (3), it's more overlapped than it should be. Care to place it at 0,8x, like the rest of the map? :3
2. 01:28:161 (5) - Add a clap here, perhaps?
3. Seriously, not really much to say. It's pretty good so far.

1. 00:16:740 (69) - This triplet here seems a bit excessive, I didn't really feel it fits there. Can you remove the middle note?
2. Good, good, I would have used more finishes (I don't know how objects are called in Taiko, I should learn by now), but I guess that's on each mapper's likes.

1. It's a modder's job to find issues in a map to make it better by solving them, but it's also a mappers job to recognize when a map is good and ready to go. Good job!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

GEZO ANSWER HIS AND MINE NOW AAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA........now

narakucrimson wrote:

Oh hi there Zely!

[General]

1. The background dimensions are... 320x240 o.o No wonder why it has such a low quality Can you find a better quality one? 1024x768, as always?
   If you have a hard time finding one, but I mean a really hard time, then maybe I can try to create something, ya know.
2. In most cases, I tend to say that white isn't a good combo colour choice. Perhaps here it isn't a bad idea, but anyway, I'll suggest this one:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   Combo2 : 128,0,128

   Check if you like it!

[Sweet Heaven]

1. I don't see any problems here, good job!

Lol the video is so bizarre xD

[Gray Heaven]

1. 00:52:056 (4) - Kind of too close to (3), it's more overlapped than it should be. Care to place it at 0,8x, like the rest of the map? :3 feexed
2. 01:28:161 (5) - Add a clap here, perhaps? there is a clap
3. Seriously, not really much to say. It's pretty good so far.

[Gezo's Taiko Heaven]

1. 00:16:740 (69) - This triplet here seems a bit excessive, I didn't really feel it fits there. Can you remove the middle note?
2. Good, good, I would have used more finishes (I don't know how objects are called in Taiko, I should learn by now), but I guess that's on each mapper's likes.

[Metallic Heaven]

1. It's a modder's job to find issues in a map to make it better by solving them, but it's also a mappers job to recognize when a map is good and ready to go. Good job!

Nothing more to say! Really good work, Zelos!